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Ashii

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jab dil pe zakhm koi lagta hai
aankhon se lahu tapakta hai
gar dekhne wali aankh ho to
pathar ko mom yeh karta hai

rangeen daaman ko karte hein
kadmon mei sajde karte hein
jo raiza raiza bikhre hein
yeh kankar, la'al ya heere hein
pehchaan sako to pehchano !!

yeh mere dil k tukde hein.....

jisse tum ne apnaya tha
seene se yun lagaya tha
k dunya jannat lagti thi
tumhari khushboo mei duubi
ik larki gum sum phirti thi

phir jaane tum ne kyun uss ka
nazuk sa dil tor diya
kuch khushiyan paane ki khatir
yun tanha uss ko chor diya

tumhari khushboo mei duubi
woh aaj bhi gum sum rehti hai
kuch kirchi kirchi khaabon ko
palkon mei chupae phirti hai
kuch lamhon ki tasveeren hein
kuch vaadon ki zanjeerein hein
ik lams..
ik sargoshi hai
jahan jhoomti thi hansi kabhi
unn honton pe khamoshi hai
aankhon se lahu tapakta hai
rangeen daaman ko karta hai..

uss lamhe mei hai quad abhi
jahan tum ne uss ko chora tha
ik aas hai zinda iss dil mei
ik baar tum mur ker dekho ge
socho parkho samjho ge
yeh kankar, la'al, yeh heere
tum chun'ne ko aao ge !!
jo vaada kiya tha tum ne
woh poore karne aao ge !!
iss zakhmi dil pe honton ka
marham rakhne tum aao ge !!
tum aao ge !!!!

Posted 25 Feb 2005

Doctor Sam says
ufffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
itni lambi poem
pehle aap ye bataien ye kis ki hey?
ab ye nahi kehna k shayar ki hey...
kis poet ki hey kion k mujhe thori c unbalanced lag rahi hey
Dont mind plz
Posted 25 Feb 2005

Ashii says
thoriiii unbalance ??
bohottt yarr



my friend wrote it,,, aur me ne yahan post kar di
jitna marzi galti nikalo,,
Posted 25 Feb 2005










Posted 25 Feb 2005

Doctor Sam says
Rani, nice peom by Amjad Islam Amjad...
Posted 25 Feb 2005

Doctor Sam says
Infact Sall,
agar koi aor ye poem post karta to main ne kuch nahi kehna tha..
lekin U r having a good sense of poetry... to main ne socha pooch lena chahiye....
Posted 25 Feb 2005

Ashii says
nice DR

DS yarr,,
dil to na toro



galti nikalwane ko hi to post ki hai
coz i like nice poetry but correct nahi kar sakti
Posted 25 Feb 2005

Doctor Sam said:

Rani, nice peom by Amjad Islam Amjad...




Yah waise kafi achi bhi tho hia
By da way thnx



ap bhi tho kuch irshad farmaiye na



Posted 25 Feb 2005

SALL said:

jab dil pe zakhm koi lagta hai
aankhon se lahu tapakta hai
gar dekhne wali aankh ho to
pathar ko mom yeh karta hai

rangeen daaman ko karte hein
kadmon mei sajde karte hein
jo raiza raiza bikhre hein
yeh kankar, la'al ya heere hein
pehchaan sako to pehchano !!

yeh mere dil k tukde hein.....

jisse tum ne apnaya tha
seene se yun lagaya tha
k dunya jannat lagti thi
tumhari khushboo mei duubi
ik larki gum sum phirti thi

phir jaane tum ne kyun uss ka
nazuk sa dil tor diya
kuch khushiyan paane ki khatir
yun tanha uss ko chor diya

tumhari khushboo mei duubi
woh aaj bhi gum sum rehti hai
kuch kirchi kirchi khaabon ko
palkon mei chupae phirti hai
kuch lamhon ki tasveeren hein
kuch vaadon ki zanjeerein hein
ik lams..
ik sargoshi hai
jahan jhoomti thi hansi kabhi
unn honton pe khamoshi hai
aankhon se lahu tapakta hai
rangeen daaman ko karta hai..

uss lamhe mei hai quad abhi
jahan tum ne uss ko chora tha
ik aas hai zinda iss dil mei
ik baar tum mur ker dekho ge
socho parkho samjho ge
yeh kankar, la'al, yeh heere
tum chun'ne ko aao ge !!
jo vaada kiya tha tum ne
woh poore karne aao ge !!
iss zakhmi dil pe honton ka
marham rakhne tum aao ge !!
tum aao ge !!!!



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And Aul Bi Post Talain Adhar Ho Satay to
Posted 25 Feb 2005

Ashii says
thankuuu balich

ab mujhe samajh nahi aa rahi
it s good or not



aur post nahi kar sakti,,
(thnx GOD) she s not a poet yarr,, itna hi kafi hai
shhh
Posted 26 Feb 2005

HiRa.... says
nice tfs
Posted 26 Feb 2005

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