Subha Ahmed’s Poetry ( URDU VERSION )

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Posted 22 Jul 2005

new_beau says
http://www.janubaba.com/wforum/forum_posts.asp?TID=17260&PN= 1
Posted 22 Jul 2005

Posted 22 Jul 2005

subha says
Mere paas alfaz nahi hain k main kuch keh sakoon
asal mein to main samjhti hoon k mujhey shairi karni abhi ati hi nahi

yeh sub kuch to aise hi likh deti thi laikan Nb

main kiya kahoon aap ne mere liye kia kiya hay

meri ankhon mein is waqt khushi se anson a gay hain
thanx to bahoot chota lafz samjhti hoon main is k liye
pir bi shukriya

Posted 22 Jul 2005

subha says
WARMTH OF LOVE said:






mujhey shairi kahan ati hay wol bro yeh sub to aap sub ka piyar hay jo
mere bemool lafzoon ko itna qimti bana diya thanxxxx
Posted 22 Jul 2005

hamali talaph chay bi thanksssss    


hamali siso to itni khushi dainay ta
Posted 22 Jul 2005

wafakadard says
MahshAllah MahshAllah
bahot acha likhti hain ap
main nay sari read ki hain sub kuch aik aik harf awsome hai
Posted 22 Jul 2005

great idea
great effort
zaber dast
I like it


i think first post main book ka title hai nice hai jee


but woh topic close kyun hai..mazeed barhna chahiye na

congratss Nb 4 this


and sub dear its great
Posted 22 Jul 2005

Doctor Sam says
Rizwan Asha'r U have done a good job. Really...

Aor Subha, abhi main ne aap ki poetry sari nahi parhi, lekin jo parhi hey, Nice thoughts and impressive wording..

Allah karay Zor-e-qalam aor zyada...

Aaameen..
Posted 22 Jul 2005

subha says
wafakadard said:

MahshAllah MahshAllah
bahot acha likhti hain ap
main nay sari read ki hain sub kuch aik aik harf awsome hai




THANKU yeh sub Nb ki koshish hay jinnon ney meri bemani batoon ko
itna acha kar k likha   
Posted 22 Jul 2005

subha says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

great idea
great effort
zaber dast
I like it


i think first post main book ka title hai nice hai jee


but woh topic close kyun hai..mazeed barhna chahiye na

congratss Nb 4 this


and sub dear its great




thanx tareef k haqdar to New hain
Posted 22 Jul 2005

subha says
Doctor Sam said:

Rizwan Asha'r U have done a good job. Really...

Aor Subha, abhi main ne aap ki poetry sari nahi parhi, lekin jo parhi hey, Nice thoughts and impressive wording..

Allah karay Zor-e-qalam aor zyada...

Aaameen..



thanx sam
Posted 22 Jul 2005

arzoo says
nice
Posted 22 Jul 2005

HiRa.... says
grea tfs
Posted 23 Jul 2005

new_beau says

As Salam-o-Alaikum Saathiyo !

Dair say aanay ki M'aazrat.

Subha ki Shayari ki terteeb-o-tazaeen meray liyey bhi aik Aizaaz hay. Al Hamdulillah aap ki Satayesh-o-Tehssen nay Surkhuroo kiya aur meri Kaawish maqbool hui.

Ab tek jitnay Ba Zouq Logonn nay apni A'ara say nawaaza hay. Mainn Unn sub ka tahe dil say shuker guzaar hoon.

Mainn nay sirf "bahar" aur "aouzaan" ka khayal kertay huaye kuchh nikaar paida kernay ki koshish ki hay. Asal taaqat sirf Khayal ki hoti hay. jo keh apni saadgi aur pur kaari kay saath baderja-e-Uttem mojood tha.

Shayari ki Ta'areef sub nay ki, Magar aik baat ka kisi nay zikar nahin kiya. Jis ki taraf mainn aap sub ki tawajjah dilana Chahoon ga, woh hay Shaira ki Shakhsiyat.

Kehtay hainn keh Shairi kehnay waalay ki Shakhsiyat aur uss kay Ehsaasaat ki Terjumaan hoti hay.

Mainn yeh Jan'na chahta hoon keh. Tamam Shairi perhnay kay baad aap "SUBHA AHMED' ki shakhsiyat ki terjumaani kaisay kerainn gay. "Subha Ahmed" kon hay , kiya hay. Uss kay Ehsaasaat kiya hainn? Uss ki Nazar kay Zaaviyey apnay atraaf mainn kiya Dekhti hay aur Mustaqbil per uss ki nazar kahan tek hay.

Yeh bhi Fermayiyey keh Kitaab ka Naam aur Ta'arufi safha kaisa hay.

QUEEN VICTORIA nay poochha keh Woh Kitaab BAND kiyun hay. Uss topic ko bana ker Close iss liyey kiya hay keh Kitaab ko perha jaata hay. Uss per Likha nahin jaata. Iss liyey Aap ki A'araa kay liyey alehda Safha Khola gaya.

Rahi Kitaab ki baat. Tou wahan Ta'aza Kalaam ka izafa hota rahay ga. Kiyun Inshallah SUBHA AHMED ki pehli Kitaab 100 Safhaat say Ziyada per Mushtamil ho gi.

Aap kay Jawabaat ka Muntazir...

Khair Andesh

Rizwan Ashar

Posted 23 Jul 2005

Doctor Sam says
Rizwan,

shayar ki Shakhsiyat, ye kuch personal nahi ho jaye ga..
Mukhtalif log apna opinion dain, her aik ka opinion different hoga,

to kya humain comment karna chahiye,,?
Posted 24 Jul 2005

PLATONIC says
Itni skeel Urdu
Posted 24 Jul 2005

Skeel wo tiya hota hay?

Posted 24 Jul 2005

PLATONIC says
skeel ka matlab "heavy" , yeah jaan ker khushi hui kay meri urdu ki vocablary main aisay ilfaaz hain jin say aam loog waqif nahin .
Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau says
Doctor Sam said:

Rizwan,

shayar ki Shakhsiyat, ye kuch personal nahi ho jaye ga..
Mukhtalif log apna opinion dain, her aik ka opinion different hoga,

to kya humain comment karna chahiye,,?



hmmm...Sochan waali Gal aay
Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau says
platonic said:

Itni skeel Urdu



Aap ko kahan lagi hay
Posted 24 Jul 2005

platonic said:

skeel ka matlab "heavy" , yeah jaan ker khushi hui kay meri urdu ki vocablary main aisay ilfaaz hain jin say aam loog waqif nahin .



bati baten baad main but aap nay ham to AAM LOG taha?



otay tah lain


ahan, thankooozz

yani, agar toi kid or baby MOTO ho and wazni ho to ham
kah saktay hain kay "YAH BABY KITNA SKEEL HAY" ??? right?


waisay WB 2 jb
Posted 24 Jul 2005

NB NB NB , aap hamali poems tab shaya talen gaey?
Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau says
~ ßã£îçh ~ said:

Skeel wo tiya hota hay?



Shoni Paali..Tum aishi Baatonn per Dhiyaan na Dou...Mainn Hoon na
Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau says
platonic said:

skeel ka matlab "heavy" , yeah jaan ker khushi hui kay meri urdu ki vocablary main aisay ilfaaz hain jin say aam loog waqif nahin .



Aay Bachi say baat kerta hay..Hum say Urdu Bolo
Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau says
~ ßã£îçh ~ said:

platonic said:

skeel ka matlab "heavy" , yeah jaan ker khushi hui kay meri urdu ki vocablary main aisay ilfaaz hain jin say aam loog waqif nahin .



bati baten baad main but aap nay ham to AAM LOG taha?



otay tah lain


ahan, thankooozz

yani, agar toi kid or baby MOTO ho and wazni ho to ham
kah saktay hain kay "YAH BABY KITNA SKEEL HAY" ??? right?


waisay WB 2 jb



Lolzzzzz    "YAH BABY KITNA SKEEL HAY" ???
Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau says
~ ßã£îçh ~ said:

NB NB NB , aap hamali poems tab shaya talen gaey?



Jee Shoni Paali....Apni Totli Poems ..send kero..Magar TOTLI ULDU muzay Lahin aati na . ISLAH kaisay keroon ga
Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau said:




Lolzzzzz    "YAH BABY KITNA SKEEL HAY" ???



di
Posted 24 Jul 2005

oyee udaas panchi
Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau said:

~ ßã£îçh ~ said:

NB NB NB , aap hamali poems tab shaya talen gaey?



Jee Shoni Paali....Apni Totli Poems ..send kero..Magar TOTLI ULDU muzay Lahin aati na . ISLAH kaisay keroon ga


jk tiya tha na

Posted 24 Jul 2005

new_beau says
shahrukh khan said:

oyee udaas panchi



Kon ?
Posted 24 Jul 2005

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