new_beau said:woh CF nay kaha na GARMI hay...tou ME ASK keh is he living in SIBBI. (A cityin SINDH)
QUEEN VICTORIA said:oh main nay samjha subha ko chhota ker kay sibbi bana diya
§alman AzaÐ said:Chaley AaNa
Mein TuM Ko BoohaT AaNeY LaGuN Jab Yaad, ChaLey AaNa,
BhuL Jaana ApNi Kahi HaR BaaT, ChaLey AaNaa
JuDaai Ka Woh Lamha AuR Woh MaNzaR DhaLteY SooRaj Ka,
Yaad TuM Ko Jab AaNeY LaGeY Woh ShaaM, ChaLey AaNaa
BhuL JaaYoO TuM AgaR MaNziL Kabhi ApNi,
UthaNa ApNeY QaDaM Phir MeRi TaRaF , ChaLey AaNaa
Had Sey GuzaR JaaYeE Jub MeRa Zabt-E-Ghum,
AuR MeiN PukaaRooN TuM Ko BaaR BaaR, ChaLey AaNaa
Us Kay BiN JeeNaY Ka Ab TaSawwuR NaheE....
MeRi Maut Ka AGaR TuM Ko MiLaY PayaaM,Tou ChaLey AaNaaaaaa....!!
Lucky said:that is great than........here is my first Gazal.
you have to tell me what is wazan and usay kesay estamal karna hai sheroon mai.
NA ROOK SAKI KAY DOOB JANAY KAY DIN HAIN
KISI KAY AJJ HOSH URADANAY KAY DIN HAIN
SUNG RAHAY APNAY NA CHAND NA TARAY
KISI KO AJJ PHIR AAZMANAY KAY DIN HAIN
NA SHIKWA KEA, JO TOORA HUM NEI DIL
USSI MEHJABEEN KO MANANAY KAY DIN HAIN
KEYA QAIS KO ZAMANAY NEIN RUSVA
ZAMANAY KO RUSVA KARANAY KAY DIN HAIN
TAPTI ZAMEEN PAAR RUKHAY HIAN SIR
KHAAK GARDISHOON KI URDANAY KAY DIN HAIN
LUGI HUM PAY TUHMAT JAFAOON KI LUCKY
JIGAR APNA CHALNI DEKHNAY KAY DIN HAIN
Lucky said:2nd one
machalti hansi ko yun tera kaboo karna
kabi chasmay-mehgoon ka ro-baroo karna
mileen gey qayamt mein muskura kay tera kehna
woe mera haar rooz qayamaat ki aarzoo karna
dekhana yun jalway bana kay bahanay
woe mera deed ki justagoo karana
woe larna jagarna ,mun moor lena
yun shook aatish ore afzoon karna
na khana na peena na uthna na soona
yun tera khera-o-sir pay jadoo kaarna
hai mohabaat he apna aab orna bechona
ya rub! ehlay~nazar ko surhroh karna
Lucky said:
aik tu tum nein bolayaa ore hum nahi ayee
upaar sei itni hoyee petayee kay abaa yaad ayee
mara hasenoon nein jutay badal badal kay
kasoor tha sirf itna hehehe aab tumheen kya batayeen.
bachayaa na kisi nein muj masoom ko pitnay sei
rootay rahay ,pitTay rahay detay rahay dohayee
choot lugi hai kuch ayesi he juga paar....
sharam aa rahi hai lagatay hoyee davayee....
Shukriya 
