Aik muhabat Aik afsana

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aik story hai us ka end kiya hona chaey. samjhdar loag mashwara dain na zara mujhy.

Posted 12 Nov 2007

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afsana kuch asy hai k

aik the ladki wesi hi jesi mostly digests k afsanon may hoti ha.hansmukh chanchal alhar.zindgi k har pal ko enjoy karny wali. but aik din kiya hua k she felt in love wid someone.years passed but aik din kia hua k wo dono bichar jaty hain.wo bht roti hai.hansi rooth jati hai us sy.
phir aftr period of two yrs.she met a guy who had met the same situation.pyar may dhoka wali u know.aur apna apna dukh share kart karty wo bht close ho jaty hain.

wo sher hai na

*apnay apnay bewafaon nay hamen yakja kia
warna main tera na tha aur tu mera na tha*

ji to they both were happy but achanak us guy ko apni old muhabat milti hai.
ab wo dono ko e muhabat ka yakeen dilata hai.

now wat the girl shud do??

afsany ka anjam kia hona chaey???i knw its same old love triangle but digests may asi e chezain zoak o shok sy chaapty ahin

*note: sher may ghalti ho to mazrat

Posted 12 Nov 2007

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dawa kha kar so jao

Posted 12 Nov 2007

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dr.sab tusi dawa bhej do.

n by the way me mention kia tha samjhdar loag mashwara dain.ap kahan sy aa gaey

Posted 12 Nov 2007

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mere khayal main ladke ko doosri wali ladki ke saath rehna chahiye kjunke pehle wali to choor ker chali gayi thi abb uske ane ka kiya faida aur uska eitbar nahin kerna chahiye aur appni zindagi araam se us ladki ke saath guzarni chahiye

Posted 12 Nov 2007

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hmmmmm. ye b sai hai.

asal may yar afsany ka nd tragic ho to zada shok sy parha jata hai na. bibiyan ro ro k parhti hain

Posted 12 Nov 2007

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yeh to hai phir usko pehle wali ke saath bhejh do aur doosri ladki ko kabrastan

Posted 12 Nov 2007

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hmmm. chalo ji bakiya awam ki raey b dekhty hain.

bt ji ladki ko kabrastan bhejna zada zulm ha.

Posted 12 Nov 2007

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Allah rakhi
aap ko Allah rakhe... hamari nakis akal yeh kehti hai

k dono larkiyon ko mil k
uss larke ki

bateesi tor deni chaiye
aur apni zindagi sahi tareeke se guzarni chaiye

waise agar "larka" woh hai jo hum samajh rahe hein
to phir kahani ka koi anjaam nahi

Posted 13 Nov 2007

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MAINE SUNA PIYAR 1 BAR HOTA HAI
YAHAN TO LARKE AUR LADKI KO 2 BAR HUWE HAI
YEH TO EKTA KAPOOR KA DRAME KI STORY LAGTI HAI

WOH LADKI JISSE PIYAR KARTE THI USE BICHAR GAYE THEN USKE PAS PHIR BI PIYAR KARNE KI FEELING THI
1 KO USNE BI NAHI DI
N US 2ND LADKE KI TO BAAT HI NAHI KARNA
YEH TO ROZ LOVE KARNE WALA LAGTA HAI
1 CHALI GAYE DUSRI MIL GAYE
DONO HAI TO DONO SAMBHAL RAHA HAI
TO PHIR ISKA MATLUB YEH HUA KI 1 SE BI SUCHA PIYAR NAHI KARTA TO KAHAY KE YAKEEN
JUB DONO KE SATH WAFA NAHI KAR RAHA
HAMESHA 1 K SATH CHALA JAT AHAI
WOH JO CHALI GAYE THI USKO KOI AUR KAM NAHI MILA WAPIS AGAYE
US LADKE KO SHARAM NAHI ATI CHOR GAEY THI WAPIS AYE HAI TO USNE YEH NAHI BOLA MEUJHE KOI AUR MILL GAYA HAI
NAHI YEH BI CHAHIYE WOH BI CHAHIYE

US LADKI KI 1ST MOHABAT KA KIA BAROSA AGAIN CHALI JAYE TO
N ABHI TO WOH LADKI KA PIYAR NAHI AYA
WOH AGAYA TO?

Posted 14 Nov 2007

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Ashii said:
Allah rakhi
aap ko Allah rakhe... hamari nakis akal yeh kehti hai

k dono larkiyon ko mil k
uss larke ki

bateesi tor deni chaiye
aur apni zindagi sahi tareeke se guzarni chaiye

waise agar "larka" woh hai jo hum samajh rahe hein
to phir kahani ka koi anjaam nahi

siyani banda jab bolta hai chapar phar k e bolta ha....itna pyara end batany par to

mmuah.

ab pata ni ap kisko ladka samjh ri hain.... albata ji story writer jab apun k jesa gr8 ho to story ka end to lazmi ho ga na

Posted 14 Nov 2007

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Fairl_Girl said:
MAINE SUNA PIYAR 1 BAR HOTA HAI
YAHAN TO LARKE AUR LADKI KO 2 BAR HUWE HAI
YEH TO EKTA KAPOOR KA DRAME KI STORY LAGTI HAI

WOH LADKI JISSE PIYAR KARTE THI USE BICHAR GAYE THEN USKE PAS PHIR BI PIYAR KARNE KI FEELING THI
1 KO USNE BI NAHI DI
N US 2ND LADKE KI TO BAAT HI NAHI KARNA
YEH TO ROZ LOVE KARNE WALA LAGTA HAI
1 CHALI GAYE DUSRI MIL GAYE
DONO HAI TO DONO SAMBHAL RAHA HAI
TO PHIR ISKA MATLUB YEH HUA KI 1 SE BI SUCHA PIYAR NAHI KARTA TO KAHAY KE YAKEEN
JUB DONO KE SATH WAFA NAHI KAR RAHA
HAMESHA 1 K SATH CHALA JAT AHAI
WOH JO CHALI GAYE THI USKO KOI AUR KAM NAHI MILA WAPIS AGAYE
US LADKE KO SHARAM NAHI ATI CHOR GAEY THI WAPIS AYE HAI TO USNE YEH NAHI BOLA MEUJHE KOI AUR MILL GAYA HAI
NAHI YEH BI CHAHIYE WOH BI CHAHIYE

US LADKI KI 1ST MOHABAT KA KIA BAROSA AGAIN CHALI JAYE TO
N ABHI TO WOH LADKI KA PIYAR NAHI AYA
WOH AGAYA TO?

FG dear pehly to ye k ishq aik bar hota ha muhabat badalti rehti hai.
ab mein apko poori story yahan post kar doo to magazine may kia chapay ga.
yar ap agr ghor karo to muhabat insan ki zaroorat hai. thora gehraii sy sochen to ye insan ki nafsiyat hai ap is story koa nafsiyati pehlu b sochen zara.jab insan sy koi chez chin jaey ya kho jaey to wo replace karta hai usko

hum ladkay ki bat nahin karty.usko side pe lagao . story ki heroine hai story to us k gird ghoomti hai.

pehli ladki k wapis anay wali bat reh gai to janab ye b insan ki fitrat hai jis chez par haq jataey us sy dastbardaar hona mushkil lagta hai banday ko. ye muhabat sy ziada ego ka mater ho jata hai.

Posted 14 Nov 2007

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aisa bhala common life mein kab hota hai

Posted 15 Nov 2007

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Aik muhabat Aik afsana

Posted 15 Nov 2007

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sorry Allah Rakhi
i dont wish anything bad happens to anyone but it was just my opinion which doesnt really have any value

i shd not say anything without knowing real facts
the guy may not b the one im thinking abt,, so wotever i said could be completly wrong
cheeerz

Posted 16 Nov 2007

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§Fragi§ said:
aisa bhala common life mein kab hota hai

chacha ji
wesy apko kis ny kaha asa nai hota. hota hai. bas daikhnay wali nazar chaey jub k ap to deeda e bina sy mehroom hain.

Posted 16 Nov 2007

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sorry Allah Rakhi
i dont wish anything bad happens to anyone but it was just my opinion which doesnt really have any value

i shd not say anything without knowing real facts
the guy may not b the one im thinking abt,, so wotever i said could be completly wrong
cheeerz

ary yar dekha jaey to aisay bandy ko to sarak k beech shoot karna chaey but phir afsanay ki heroine phans jati hai na

ab jis guy bhensay

ka soch rai hain ap us ko mind may rakh k e end bata do.may b wo end us sy behtar o jo me soch rai hoon

Posted 16 Nov 2007

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