.................Kahin Aik Masoom Nazuk Si Larki.......(- - - - - -) .................................................................... >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< .................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki! .................Bohat khoobsoorat magar sanwali si! Mujey apney khuwabon ki banhon mein pa kar! Kabhi neend mein muskarati to ho gi! Isi neend mein kasmasa kasmasa kar! Sarhaney se taqye girati to ho gi! .................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki! Wohi khwab din ki mundeeron pe akey! Isey mann hi mann mein lubatey to hongey! Kai saaz seeney ki khamoshion mein! Meri yaad se jhunjhantey to hongey! Woh be sakhta dheemey dheemey suron mein! Meri dhun mein kuch gunganati to ho gi! .................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki! Chalo khat likhein ji mein aata to ho ga! Magar ungliyan kapkapati to hongi! Kalum haath se choot jata to ho ga! Umangein kalum phir uthati to hongi! Mera naam apni kitabon pe likh kar! Woh danton mein ungli dabati to ho gi! .................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki! Zuban se kabhi uff nikalti to ho gi! Badan dheemey dheemey sulagta to ho ga! Kahin k kahin paer partey to hongey! Kahin zameen par dhupata raptata to ho ga! Kabhi subah ko shaam kehti to ho gi! Kabhi raat ko din batati to ho gi! .................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki! .................Bohat khoobsoorat magar sanwali si!...(- - - - - - )
Message.............................................................. Yeh aik Ehsaas hai Agar mesoos kia jaye to...........?????????
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another one :):)
Kaun dastaq dil pe denay aaya hay Yaad teri hay , ya gham ka saaya hay Apni kismat hi raqeebon jesi hay Aaj kyon shikva zubaan pay aaya hay Woh hamaray na sahi , hamm toh unn kay hain Hamm nay aksar dil ko yun behalaya hay Jiski thi chahat, woh mera na hooa Jo naseebon mein likha tha, woh hi paaya hay Maan lo jo hay muqaddar may likha Zindagi nay yehi samjhaya hay
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Janab Zabardast lagi hai............... aur humein ab aap ki poetry ka intzar rehne laga hai........ Aur aap ki nazar Shaeri ka matlab........................ >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< ....................YEHI TU SHAERI HAI........................ >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Jin ko tum sher kehtey ho zamaney walo! Bataien tum ko magar kis tarah! K Yeh tu......................! Raaton ko phaily thundi udaas chandni mein! Khamoshi se sar uthaey Paeron k aas paas! Farsh-e-Sabz par, Aakaash k Aanssoon k darmiyaan! Kuhar mein lipti ajeeb khoobsorat fiza k humrah! Gehri khamosh ruton k.........................! Tanha udaas lamhon mein.......................! Gham-e-Dil ka ubhar aana! AUR,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Tehreeron mein dhal jana ........................ K ....................! ..........YEHI TU SHAERI HAI.....................!
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haan janab achi khasi try marti hain aap! balkey aap k saath to bazam khoob jamey gi ! jamey gi kya jum gayee hai kiyo theek kaha na! Abhi abhi rozi & jani420 k liye aik apni likhi hoi nazam post ki hai................................................................ Aap bhi zaroor deikh lein! AAAAAAAAAAAdddddddddaaaaaaaaabbbbbbbbbbbbbbb! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hum tu mohabbat mein bhi toheed k kayal hein Faraz! Aik hi shaksh ko mehboob banaye rakha!
awwwwwwww this iss soooooo nice, fasi jee! hai Allah hum tao app kee shairi k samney kuchh bee naee hain, app kee shaairi tao masha'Allah abi TOP per chal rahee hai.
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quote:Originally posted by sweet_u
haan janab achi khasi try marti hain aap! balkey aap k saath to bazam khoob jamey gi ! jamey gi kya jum gayee hai kiyo theek kaha na! Abhi abhi rozi & jani420 k liye aik apni likhi hoi nazam post ki hai................................................................ Aap bhi zaroor deikh lein! AAAAAAAAAAAdddddddddaaaaaaaaabbbbbbbbbbbbbbb! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hum tu mohabbat mein bhi toheed k kayal hein Faraz! Aik hi shaksh ko mehboob banaye rakha!
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lolzzzzzzzz[:P] han jee hum kia poetry ka competition ker rahe hain yahan? [:D][:D][:D][:D]
app kee shaari hee itnee achee hai key hur koee purh ker jumm hee jae ga naa, mai tao jamm hee gaee purh ker[;)][:D] burff ho gaee[:D][:D][:D][:D] LOL[:P]
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I've had visions I've had dreams I've even held them in myhands But I never knew They would slip right through Like they were only... ....Grains of sand.
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Janab ka husne nazar hai wrna hum is kabil kahan! tareef ka shukriya ! Waisey aap bhi kisi se kam kahan! kiyon theeeeeeeeek kaha hai na???????????????????????????????? waisey aap kabhi chat par aayein phir baat ho gi, will u do this ??? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ghanton us se pyar ki batein kartey kartey! Jab Mein..................................! Us se rukhsat ho kar wapas palta! ---------------TU...............! Mere pechey! Halka sa hans kar! Woh apne aap se bholi! Hunhhhhh! .................PAGAL...........!
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Aap ka poetry taste haqeeqat mein lajawab hai! urdu ho ya english...
Aap ki Grains of sand k jawab mein aik sher! ________________________________________________________________________
Bhool jane ka tu bas ik bahana ho ga! K Behar tor usey yaad to aana ho ga! Bund muthi se jo urr jaati hai kismat ki pari! Is hatheli mein koi chaid purana ho ga!
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quote:Originally posted by sweet_u
Janab ka husne nazar hai wrna hum is kabil kahan! tareef ka shukriya ! Waisey aap bhi kisi se kam kahan! kiyon theeeeeeeeek kaha hai na???????????????????????????????? waisey aap kabhi chat par aayein phir baat ho gi, will u do this ??? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ghanton us se pyar ki batein kartey kartey! Jab Mein..................................! Us se rukhsat ho kar wapas palta! ---------------TU...............! Mere pechey! Halka sa hans kar! Woh apne aap se bholi! Hunhhhhh! .................PAGAL...........!
Fasi,,,
thanks for ur commpliemtns, fasi jee[angel] han jee zaroor, humareee chat hu saktee hein, lakeen mey kal sey shayd naa aon net per, mera uni ka test hai friday ko 29th aug, so i will be revising for that,islie mey friday night wo wapis aon geee insha'Alalh pir hum chat kerne gey, our mey pir buhut see poetries bee laon gee apne sath.[:D] ok see ya on friday untill than take cares and be happy
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You will be the No.1 in all of ur class fellows on Friday (INSHA-ALLAH) Khuda aap ko aap k har imtihaan mein kamyaab kare (AAAMEEEN) >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Khuda kare k test mein woh muqaam aaye! Har aik student k honton pe tera naam aaye!
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Thaaaaaaaaaaaaannnkkkkkusssssss! Janab(chup karo)Ji! bas apni tabiyat hai zara shayrana si! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
Aik Sher! _________
Shehar k dukandaro karobar-e-ulfat mein! Sood kya ziyan kya hai tum na jaan pao gey!