Miss mine said:
bahut khub
olldman said:Bohut achi, Rapunzel.
tehzeeb said:
tehzeeb said:TERI UMEED TERA INTIZAR JAB SAY HAI,
NA SHAB KO DIN SAY SHIKAYT NA DIN KO SHAB SAY HAI,
KISI KA DARD HO KARTEY HAIN TEREY NAAM,
GILA HAI JO BHI KISI SAY TEREY SABAB SAY HAI,
HUWA HAI JAB SAY DIL NA SABOOR BE QABOO,
KALAM TUJH SAY NAZAR KO BAREY ADAB SAY HAI,
AGAR SHARAR HAI TO BHARKEY AGAR PHOOL HAI TO KHILEY,
TARHA TRHA KI TALAB TEREY RANG-E-LAB SAY HAI,
KAHAN GAYE SHAB-E-FURQAT K JAGNEY WALEY,
SITARA SEHRI HUM KALAM KAB SAY HAI.
~Fragi~ said:Ajab Haal Hai QisMaton Ka HaMari,
Ab Kya Batayein TuMko Ke Bata Nahi Sakte,
Chaha Hai HuMne Bhi Ek Haseen Ladki Ko,
Par Darta Hai Dil Ke Shayad Use Paa Nahi Sakte,
