~ Bait-Baazi for July~

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May_ho_na

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Ji saathiyo , naye maah ke saath nayi Bait-baazi

July ka aaghaaz kartey hain

rulez ka aap ko pata hi hai , shair mein se koi sa word chose kar ke de dein . taake saathi uss word ko agley shair mein use kar sakein.
yaad rahay kay app apni zati shairi bhi shair ker saktay hain

main shuroo karta hoo'n aham aham

GHuM-E-DUNYA, GHUM-E-UQBA, GHUM-E-DORAA'N , GHUM-E-DOST
JIS JAGA MAIN HOO'N , FARISHTA HO TO PAAGAL HO JAYE

word hai

farishta / pagal

Posted 29 Jun 2004

tarash says

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yaar farishta pagal nahin hota

Posted 29 Jun 2004

May_ho_na says

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app agay kuch likhian

Posted 30 Jun 2004

Fairl_Girl says

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mera shair pagal se to start nahi ho raha per
pagal word a raha hai yeh lay sunao yeh mera own shair hai

dil to pagal hai
dil deewana hai
dil to pagal hai
dil deewana hai

ab word hai dil

Posted 09 Jul 2004

Shararati says

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Dil dharakhta hai,
tera nam gungunata hai.
Hawa chalti hai,
tere khushboo lati hai.
Hath mein khujlee hai,
Tere gal yaad ati hai

Actually last setence badli kardeti houn.

last 2 lines ko bana do:

Jab bhi muskhurati houn, tere yaad ati hai.

So, the word i leave you with is Muskhurahat????

Posted 14 Jul 2004

Fairl_Girl says

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muskurao nahi balkay haso

Posted 24 Jul 2004

Shararati says

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you know what they say, hasi to pasi

Posted 26 Jul 2004

SanaSana says

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carry on

Posted 27 Jul 2004

Jiya_k says

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Jo GuZaR GaYa WoH KaL ThA, Jo AaNeY WaLa hAi WoH BhI KaL Hai..FeSaLA TuMHe KaRnA hAi TuM KiS KaL Mai JeEnA ChAhTey Ho........

Posted 27 Jul 2004

Shararati says

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A very noble man(Kettering) once said
"how can you have a better tomorrow if your always thinking about yesterday"

Jo hua hone do, jo horaha hai usko dekho aur samjho, phir jo hona chahiye woh socho aur karo.

A lovely thought for the day:
"guzre hue lamhe itihas hai, anee wale lamhe zindagi hai"

Posted 27 Jul 2004

May_ho_na says

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ya kai horaha hay yaha per ???

Posted 28 Jul 2004

Shararati says

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I think ishe hum chote level ki philosophy keh sakte hai. Kyoun, waha kya horaha hai?

Posted 28 Jul 2004

Fairl_Girl says

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mera naya kalaam
mujsa na deh zamanay ko parwar degar dil
ashefata dil farifita dil beqarar dil
har bar mangti hai naya chashmay yaar dil
ik dil kai kissi tarhan banao hazar dil
phoocha jo usnay talub roz juza hai kaun
nikal mere zaban se gaya be ikhtiyar dil

Posted 29 Jul 2004

Shararati says

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Very good. That was really nice.

Posted 30 Jul 2004

Fairl_Girl says

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thx

Posted 02 Aug 2004

valandrian says

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