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is sher ko mukammal kero to manoo


Posted on 12/25/2004 11:42:06 PM

kia kisi mean himat naheen isy pora kerny ki

Posted on 12/26/2004 3:23:06 AM

here u go
qismat ki thi badnaseebi faryad kia kareen
tere dar par tehar kar intazar kia kareen



Posted on 12/26/2004 7:42:07 PM

acha hy muslim bhai
per sahee nahee
acha hy
bahut acha hy

Posted on 12/26/2004 8:23:27 PM

hmm
sochna pare ga

Posted on 12/27/2004 6:18:18 AM

choro yarr so k kya karoo gay....sochty tu wo hain jin k pass demag ho tumharay pass tu.........

Posted on 12/27/2004 4:42:22 PM

kismat ki thi badnaseebi faryaad kia karein
tu na milla ab tujhe yaad kia karein

(ending to eik jaisi hai, poet bhi lag rahi hai... aage patta naheen theek hai ke naheen...)

Posted on 12/27/2004 4:59:48 PM

Who...shahista?

Posted on 12/27/2004 5:02:52 PM

HumTun:
Who...shahista?



kia matlab?

Posted on 12/27/2004 5:05:27 PM

kon acchi poet hay...?

Posted on 12/27/2004 5:09:19 PM

mera matlab tha ke main ne line complete ki to mujhe to poetry lag rahi hai. aage patta naheen ke theek hai ke naheen

Posted on 12/27/2004 5:11:29 PM

accha nahi it waz good

Posted on 12/27/2004 5:15:13 PM

thanks
ab dekhein bykhabber bhi kehte hain ke theek hai ke naheen....

Posted on 12/27/2004 5:17:48 PM

wo kya teek karay ga wo tu kudh baykhaber hay

Posted on 12/27/2004 5:19:20 PM


Posted on 12/27/2004 5:20:43 PM

accha aursunaiin main new hoon aur app old..kuch tips dain na mujhy

Posted on 12/27/2004 5:24:01 PM

acha hy
ary ham hi theek kerean gy
shaista ji acha hy bahut acha hy
lykin sahee naheen
bahut acha hy

Posted on 12/27/2004 7:08:48 PM

im bad at shaers
sorry bykhabr

Posted on 12/27/2004 9:20:28 PM

Qusmat ki thi bad naseebi feryad kia kerien.
TU PAS REH KARBHI PAS NA THA AB TUJHA YAD KIA KARAY

Posted on 12/28/2004 12:56:33 AM

JUST GUESS

Posted on 12/28/2004 12:57:15 AM

HumTun:
choro yarr so k kya karoo gay....sochty tu wo hain jin k pass demag ho tumharay pass tu.........


kia yaar tum bhi...
yaar humarey pass dimagh hai..
agery tumhey pass hota to kabh ke solve ker detey

Posted on 12/28/2004 3:25:36 AM

arayee ye kon be demaagh jama hogaye hain

Posted on 12/28/2004 4:38:26 PM

ji ham hi pora kiy dean gy per abhi haheen
ham dykhna chahty hean kih kis mean kitna hy dam


tun to hy hi tun

Posted on 1/2/2005 9:21:01 PM

mera wala dekha bykhabar

Posted on 1/3/2005 12:02:57 AM

app dekha dain?

Posted on 1/3/2005 11:54:55 AM

ji dykha bahut acha hy janab

tun ji ap ko masla kia hy

kia neend pori naheen hoti kia

Posted on 1/3/2005 8:12:37 PM

aisa hi hai kuch shayad

Posted on 1/3/2005 9:22:15 PM

wut is going on? why dont u guys stick to the topic?

Posted on 1/4/2005 12:26:18 AM

qismat azmao to pata chaly ga
kih kysi hy
qismat

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Posted on 1/4/2005 7:39:41 PM

tu is ka mukamal kya karrain?

Posted on 1/4/2005 7:43:32 PM

whats up Doc.

Posted on 1/4/2005 7:57:48 PM