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gsvirdi

Age: 47
Total Posts: 41
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Location:
Noida, India
Hello Everybuddy,
Unki yadon ke sagar se mujhey nikale koi,
Meri bhi kismat mein ujaley likh dale koi.
Duyaien bhi huie kuch yu be-assar hai,
Ki mere ruthey huie khuda ko mana le koi.
Aisey neend aa jaye humein bhi aie dost,
Dua karein ki mere khwab chura le koi.
Kuch iss tarhan kanton se rishta hua hai,
Dartey hai meri kabar par phol na daley koi.
Woh to majboor hai apni fitrat ke hathon,
Merey mit-ney waley piyar ko bacha le koi.
Iss kadar jaagey hai unki intazaar mein,
Abb to bas naino ke lau ko bujha de koi.
Dafan honay tak bas khwahish he rahi...
Ki ek bar to mujhey bhi pukarey koi.
Posted 14 Apr 2005

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 15 Apr 2005

gsvirdi says
Tum iss dil mein rahogi zakham ban kar,
Har hassi mein chubhogi kantey bann kar,
Zinda rahogi yadon mein tum sitamgar,
Wafa ke muh pe tamacha bann kar.
Posted 15 Apr 2005

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 15 Apr 2005

Dua_786 says
Posted 15 Apr 2005

ONLYARBAB says
very good
Posted 15 Apr 2005

ONLYARBAB says
nice work man
Posted 15 Apr 2005

ONLYARBAB says
keep it up yaar
Posted 15 Apr 2005

ONLYARBAB says
Posted 15 Apr 2005

nice
Posted 15 Apr 2005

gsvirdi says
Itna piyar aur yeh beshumar eezat,
Guman hota hai kya yahi hai kayamat.
Zindagi ne humein de thi itni nafratt,
Chahey humein koi bas reh he gayi hasratt.

Thx a lot everybody for honoring n encouraging words.
Posted 15 Apr 2005

paki_fan says
Posted 16 Apr 2005

gsvirdi says
sure its showtime. Pakistan's team is showing the real quality of its invidual players. They r all surely better then Indian team.
paki_fan said:

Posted 16 Apr 2005

Fairl_Girl says
gsvirdi said:

Itna piyar aur yeh beshumar eezat,
Guman hota hai kya yahi hai kayamat.
Zindagi ne humein de thi itni nafratt,
Chahey humein koi bas reh he gayi hasratt.

Thx a lot everybody for honoring n encouraging words.

Posted 16 Apr 2005

gsvirdi says

Ek khauf sa hai mann mein ghar kiye hue,
Karega barbaad mujhey yeh judie ka khayal.
Posted 27 Feb 2006

butaina says
hi every body ,
zindagi gum ki sham ha yah sham kabhi to daley ge tu nahi to tere yaad i sahey jo sada saath to rehey ge
Posted 01 Mar 2006

butaina says
I LOVE U NOT BECOZ UR PRFECT
BUT U R PERFECT 4 ME
Posted 01 Mar 2006

gsvirdi says
]Bahut khoob

butaina said:

hi every body ,
zindagi gum ki sham ha yah sham kabhi to daley ge tu nahi to tere yaad i sahey jo sada saath to rehey ge

Posted 31 Mar 2006

Muffi says
*Sigh* i feel like .. but these things slow me down.. give me one good reason people do shairi like this?

first of all are u all blind? a guy of my age knows what love is.. and u dont?

love is from ur wife.. not from ur GF.. so those who lost there GF.. i am happy that it didnt take very much long time for u to recognize that these relationships are fake.. so have a masti filled life till u get married.. as after marriage ur boss changes
Posted 31 Mar 2006

new_beau says
GSVIRDI....

Good efforts.///These are your Own Lnes or Intekhaab ?

Can you Post in Urdu as we please...Keep It Up....
Posted 31 Mar 2006

gsvirdi says

Auron ka to maloom nahi,
par humein to rona nahi aata.
Aur woh yeh samajh baithay,
Ki dil-e-jazbat samajhna nahi aata.

Hi Muffi,
   I'm happy in my life n is thankful for whatever is given by god. Par fir bhi janey kyun dil yeh mera, itazar mein hai uski, jo kabhi tha he nahi mera. Strange thing u'll see is that I write sad sheir from my happy heart also.
   Hum bhi uss modd se guzarey hain, jis modd pe haseen miletey hain. Humne bhi ek se piyar kar liya, jisey log bewafa kehtey hain. These lines just came in my mind & I wrote, But I'm happy at this time. There are many times when we feel happy, n in that time only we're able to feel the real feelings of some1 who needs a support.
   Talking about Gf & wife... I'll say that:
" Love is easy to say... difficult to stay... beautiful to feel... difficult to deal.
Difficulty is a part of life... and thats the reason why girlfriend is never a wife"

Just smile, bcoz a smile can travel a Mile :)



Muffi said:

*Sigh* i feel like .. but these things slow me down.. give me one good reason people do shairi like this?

first of all are u all blind? a guy of my age knows what love is.. and u dont?

love is from ur wife.. not from ur GF.. so those who lost there GF.. i am happy that it didnt take very much long time for u to recognize that these relationships are fake.. so have a masti filled life till u get married.. as after marriage ur boss changes

Posted 31 Mar 2006

gsvirdi says
Hi Beau,
Ek dost kahey aur hum na karein, aise to bekaar nahi.
Par bolo hum woh kaise dein, jo mere ikhtiaar mein nahi.
These are all my lines only, provided if u believe it.
Kabhi kabhi dil ke zubaan ko hum kagaz pe utaar leitey hain,
Jantey hai unka jawab nahi aayega fir bhi pukar leitey hain.

Urdu mein mai zaroor likhta, ba-shartey mai urdu jaanta hota. But I'll try for sure :)


new_beau said:

GSVIRDI....
Good efforts.///These are your Own Lnes or Intekhaab ?

Can you Post in Urdu as we please...Keep It Up....

Posted 31 Mar 2006

gsvirdi says
Oops, I forgot to write thx for ur kind words in reply to my posts here. :)

Thx Beau :)

new_beau said:

GSVIRDI....

Good efforts.///These are your Own Lnes or Intekhaab ?

Can you Post in Urdu as we please...Keep It Up....

Posted 31 Mar 2006

new_beau says
Welcome
Posted 01 Apr 2006

gsvirdi says

Kuch juda juda sa aaj aasman lagta hai,
Kuch juda juda sa aaj yeh jahan lagta hai,
Koi wajah to nahi hai meray muskuraney ki aaj...
Par muskurata hua sa zindagi ka kaarwan lagta hai.


Kushaam deed ke liye Shukriya
new_beau said:

Welcome

Posted 08 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Posted 08 Apr 2006

gsvirdi says
Continued...

Teri nazar kay sitam kya bayan karein,
Teekhi nazar ka teer dil-pe-aa lagta hai,
Bewafa terey tohfa-e-judaie ka khalipan...
Fanah hota hua mera yeh vajood lagta hai.
Posted 09 Apr 2006

gsvirdi says
Aie khuda yaad kar raha hu tujhey,
Tumney pal bhar mein bhula diya mujhey,
Meri ibadat mein kya kami dikhi tujhey,
Mainey to bewafa se wafa ke hai...
Kis baat ki sazaa de raha hai mujhey,
Hasenon ne ishq ka mazakh banaya hai...
Uss bewafa ko iss baat ki tu saza dey,
Bahut dard mila hai zamaney se aaj...
Abb janat ho naseeb meri rooh ko,
Dil ki gehrai se aaj dua do mujhey.
Posted 09 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Bewafa terey tohfa-e-judaie ka khalipan...
Fanah hota hua mera yeh vajood lagta hai




hye mainn mer gaya iss per
Posted 09 Apr 2006

gsvirdi says
Oye thx yaar...
Aa Jhaphi pa

new_beau said:

Bewafa terey tohfa-e-judaie ka khalipan...
Fanah hota hua mera yeh vajood lagta hai




hye mainn mer gaya iss per

Posted 11 Apr 2006

gsvirdi says

Takalluf na karo aiye sanam tum aanso bahane ka,
Ki khaak ho jayeinge hum.. tumko khabar honay tak
Posted 11 Apr 2006

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