Taira Zikar Kiyon Nahee Jata

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Virdan

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Asslam o Alaikum Friends,
Its mine personal i have written more than 150 ghazals if u like it i will send more i wil wait 4 ur comments which r very precious 4 me Thanks


Posted 14 Sep 2005

SupidGuy says

if its urs then its nice.....




Posted 14 Sep 2005

nice ghazal amir
Posted 14 Sep 2005

Virdan says
SupidGuy said:


if its urs then its nice.....


agar yeh aap ki nahee hay janab to phir pakka yaqeen kar leinkeh mairi he hay Thanks 4 apperciation
Posted 14 Sep 2005

Virdan says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

nice ghazal amir


Thanks great Queen
Posted 14 Sep 2005

new_beau says
Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)

Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....

I am waiting for more....
Posted 15 Sep 2005

Virdan says
new_beau said:

Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)

Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....

I am waiting for more....


Thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry and can u explain what do u mean by inspired one waisay to sabhi jo kuchh bhi likha jata hay inspire ho kar he likha jata hay and dont worry there is nothing to mind and i have sent this on three forums Thanks waiting 4 ur reply
Posted 15 Sep 2005

Fairl_Girl says
nice
Posted 19 Sep 2005

Virdan says
Fairl_Girl said:

nice


Thanks Fairl Girl
Posted 19 Sep 2005

new_beau says
Virdan said:

new_beau said:

Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)

Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....

I am waiting for more....


Thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry and can u explain what do u mean by inspired one waisay to sabhi jo kuchh bhi likha jata hay inspire ho kar he likha jata hay and dont worry there is nothing to mind and i have sent this on three forums Thanks waiting 4 ur reply


Sorry Dear..I tried a lot but Couldn't Find that Ghazal...

It was a s Follows....

"Sar say meray Yaadonn ka Qehar kiyun nahin Jaata"
"Ik Shakhs meray Dil say Uter Kiyun nahin Jaata"


Anyways...words are few and Passions are Many..Kahin na kahin Baar repeat ho hi jaati hay...No prob...

Keep it Up....
Posted 21 Sep 2005

Virdan says
new_beau said:

Virdan said:

new_beau said:

Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)

Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....

I am waiting for more....


Thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry and can u explain what do u mean by inspired one waisay to sabhi jo kuchh bhi likha jata hay inspire ho kar he likha jata hay and dont worry there is nothing to mind and i have sent this on three forums Thanks waiting 4 ur reply


Sorry Dear..I tried a lot but Couldn't Find that Ghazal...

It was a s Follows....

"Sar say meray Yaadonn ka Qehar kiyun nahin Jaata"
"Ik Shakhs meray Dil say Uter Kiyun nahin Jaata"


Anyways...words are few and Passions are Many..Kahin na kahin Baar repeat ho hi jaati hay...No prob...

Keep it Up....

Thanks a lot bro 4 guiding me and telling me some about that agar aap ko phir kabhi aisa lagay to kindly zaroor batayay ga Thanks again
Posted 21 Sep 2005

new_beau says
Woh tou mainn Tub bataoon ga na..Jub koi aur Ghazal Post kero gay Post more na yaar
Posted 22 Sep 2005

Virdan says
ok i will post some sooon
Posted 23 Sep 2005

Lost World says
Amir u r to suchi muchi k poet ho

waiting for some other awsome creationzz
Posted 26 Sep 2005

Virdan says
Lost World said:

Amir u r to suchi muchi k poet ho

waiting for some other awsome creationzz


Thanks keh aap aisa samjhtay ya ti hain magar yeh aap ki aala zarfi hay warma mein is qabil kahan
Posted 27 Sep 2005

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