Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay

Hijar Ke In Lamhon Mein
Jab Har cheez Chhin Gai Hay
Aur Mairay Sar Pe
Dard Ki Chadar Tan Gai Hay
Magar Zindagi Geet Ga Rahi Hay
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay

Talb-e-Vasal Nahee Rahi Kabhi Hamein
Kiyon Keh Hum Shauq-e-Janoon Mein
Vasal Ko Bhool Chukay Hain
Hijar Ko Kar Wasool Chkay Hain
Magar Tum Be Chain Phir Rahay Ho
Vasal Ki Tamanna Liyay
Janay Kiyon Tum
Hijar Se Na Shanas Lagtay Ho
Agarcheh Dor Ho Phir Bhi
Dil Ke Pass Lagtay Ho
Dard Se Be Haal Hain Hum
Magar Dunya?????????????
Muskara Rahi Hay
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay

Saray Magan Hain Apnay Haal Mein
Ik Hum Phansay Hain Tairay Khayal Mein
Andhairi Raaton Mein Hum
Tairi Yadon Ke Hum
Dil Mein Charagh Liyay Phirtay Hain
Qurbat Ke Lamhon Mein Bhi Hum
Hijar Ke Dagh Liyay Phirtay Hain
Agarcheh Chandni Sath Nabha Rahi Hay
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay

Mehv-e-Guftagoo Thay Tum
Magar Dhayaan Kahee Aur Tha
Dil Kahee Aur Tha
Gumaan Kahee Aur Tha
Kiyon keh Aksar Jaan-e-Amir Hum
Tairay Khadokhal Mein Uljhay Rehtay Hain
Magar Ahista Ahista
Tairi Sorat Hum Se Door Ja Rahi Hay
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay..........
Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay..........

sari achi hain lakin second wali ziada achi hai
or han esi tarahn apni poetry sunatay rehna.

mmja:

sari achi hain lakin second wali ziada achi hai
or han esi tarahn apni poetry sunatay rehna.

Thanks a lot 4 ur appreciation aap chatdd forum per bhi hain na

King of jb:

Thanks a lot 4 this clapping mod

Following are really Marvelous..

Pls take more ISLAH,,,from someone and go for your Book,,,

new_beau:

Pls take more ISLAH,,,from someone and go for your Book,,,

bhai islah k liyay he to koi nahee koi correction hekar de is mien yahi khawahish hay kiyon keh is mein wazan ki bari mistakes hain aur bhi kuchh hon gi agar aap kar sako to mien aap ka shukar guzaar hon ga i m waiting

Fairl_Girl:

Thanks 4 this

last

mmja:

last

Thanks

~Fragi~:

Thanks

Virdan:

new_beau:

Pls take more ISLAH,,,from someone and go for your Book,,,

bhai islah k liyay he to koi nahee koi correction hekar de is mien yahi khawahish hay kiyon keh is mein wazan ki bari mistakes hain aur bhi kuchh hon gi agar aap kar sako to mien aap ka shukar guzaar hon ga i m waiting

I will love to do it for you...But Tell me in which city are yoyu...I can try to guide you towards some Adabi Circles...

new_beau:

Virdan:

new_beau:

Pls take more ISLAH,,,from someone and go for your Book,,,

bhai islah k liyay he to koi nahee koi correction hekar de is mien yahi khawahish hay kiyon keh is mein wazan ki bari mistakes hain aur bhi kuchh hon gi agar aap kar sako to mien aap ka shukar guzaar hon ga i m waiting

I will love to do it for you...But Tell me in which city are yoyu...I can try to guide you towards some Adabi Circles...

i m from Gujranwala

If you visit Lahore on Weekend....Go to TEA HOUSE....

Its located near NEEL GUNBAD on Mall Road...

If you go to ANARKALI on Mall Road.///The Traffic Singnal before the Bus Stop of AnarKali...If you are going from CHAIRING CROSS side...

On that Signal you will find TEA HOUSE behind BASHER SONS SHOP.,...

Attend some Gatherings of HALWA-E-ARBAB-E-ZOUQ ...which held every friday Seven PM...I am not aware about Ramzan Timmings but you can visit there after Eid....

Go there and speant three or four weekend regulary....You will get many friends There...FARHAT ABBAS SHAH and Munir NIAZI saab comes regulary there....Also you can met GUL-E-NOUKHAIZ AKHTAR....He is a smart guy...


Make Link there...and you will get improvement...

Best Of Luck.,...Also When I will come to Pakistan..I will met you ...Til then bye.....I will comments on your news Posts Tomorrow...Inshallah.....Till then ...Fi AmanAllah

Thanks a lot dear bro 4 this help i will try my best

Good Long Poem above...Tawaalat nay Nazm mainn Kuchh dilchaspi kum ker di hay...
Ooper kay 75 Percent Hissay mainn Mohabbat aur Aqeedat ka Concept Mix hay...Jiss say Confusion hay...

Magar Aakhri Hissay mainn Clarity hay....Concept bohat Achha hay...

Iss nazm ko Baar Baar perho aur Thori Mukhtasir kero...

Mohabbat mainn QURBET ki Zaroorat...aur Aqeedat kay WAJDAAN ko ..aap nay Kaafi Khoobsurti say Bayaan kiya hay...MashAllah