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Jab Teri Dhun Main Jia Kartay Thay
Hum Bhi Chup Chaap Phira Kartay Thay
Aankhoon Main Pyaas Hua Karti Thi
Dil Main Toofan Utha Kartay Thay
Loog Aatay Thay Ghazal Sunanay Ko
Hum Teri Baat Kia Kartay Thay
Sach Samajhtay Thay Terey Wadoon Ko
Raat Din Ghar Main Raha Kartay Thay
Woh Bhi Kya Din Thay, Tujhay Bhula Kar
Hum Tujhay Yaad Kya Kartay Thay
Kal Tujhay Dekh Kar Yaad Aya
Hum Bhi Kabhi Mohabbat Kia Kartay Thay..........
Posted 18 Oct 2005
Desi_MC says
Posted 18 Oct 2005
heart_hacker says
app ko kiya howa jeee
Posted 18 Oct 2005
heart_hacker says
SOCHA NAHIN ACHA BURA, DEKHA SUNA KUCH BHI NAHIN

socha nahin acha bura dekha suna kuch bhi nahin
manga Khuda se raat din tere siwa kuch bhi nahin

dekha tujhay socha tujhay chaha tujhay pooja tujhay
meri khata meri wafa, teri khata kuch bhi nahin

jis per hamari ankh ne moti bichaaye raat bher
bheja usay wohi kaghaz us per likha kuch bhi nahin

ik shaam ki dehleez per bethay rahay woh der tak
ankhon se ki batain, monh se kaha kuch bhi nahin

do char din ki baat hai dill khaak main so jaye ga
jab aag per kaghaz rakha baqi bacha kuch bhi nahin

ehsaan ki khushboo kahan, awaz k JuGnO kahan
khamosh yadon k siwa gher main raha kuch bhi nahin
Posted 18 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
heart_hacker said:

SOCHA NAHIN ACHA BURA, DEKHA SUNA KUCH BHI NAHIN

socha nahin acha bura dekha suna kuch bhi nahin
manga Khuda se raat din tere siwa kuch bhi nahin

dekha tujhay socha tujhay chaha tujhay pooja tujhay
meri khata meri wafa, teri khata kuch bhi nahin

jis per hamari ankh ne moti bichaaye raat bher
bheja usay wohi kaghaz us per likha kuch bhi nahin

ik shaam ki dehleez per bethay rahay woh der tak
ankhon se ki batain, monh se kaha kuch bhi nahin

do char din ki baat hai dill khaak main so jaye ga
jab aag per kaghaz rakha baqi bacha kuch bhi nahin

ehsaan ki khushboo kahan, awaz k JuGnO kahan
khamosh yadon k siwa gher main raha kuch bhi nahin



ByBashir Badar



HH g aap bhi yahan a gaye

Posted 18 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
heart_hacker said:

Jab Teri Dhun Main Jia Kartay Thay
Hum Bhi Chup Chaap Phira Kartay Thay
Aankhoon Main Pyaas Hua Karti Thi
Dil Main Toofan Utha Kartay Thay
Loog Aatay Thay Ghazal Sunanay Ko
Hum Teri Baat Kia Kartay Thay
Sach Samajhtay Thay Terey Wadoon Ko
Raat Din Ghar Main Raha Kartay Thay
Woh Bhi Kya Din Thay, Tujhay Bhula Kar
Hum Tujhay Yaad Kya Kartay Thay
Kal Tujhay Dekh Kar Yaad Aya
Hum Bhi Kabhi Mohabbat Kia Kartay Thay..........




I think By Nasir Kazmi

Posted 18 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Laug Aatay Thay Ghazal Sun'nay Ko
Hum Teri Baat Kia Kartay Thay

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jis per hamari ankh ne moti bichaaye raat bher
bheja usay wohi kaghaz us per likha kuch bhi nahin

do char din ki baat hai dill khaak main so jaye ga
jab aag per kaghaz rakha baqi bacha kuch bhi nahin

(Yeh Ghazal mainn Bohat Sunnta hoon..yeh dou shair meray favorite hainn )
Posted 18 Oct 2005
Desi_MC says
poetry makes me sleepy
hhahaahah poor ma cousin
uss ko hamesha mujh sey shiqaayat hee rehti thi....
woh poems likh likh thakk jaati thi,,,,,,
hahahahaha

hahahahahahah
Posted 18 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
new_beau said:

Laug Aatay Thay Ghazal Sun'nay Ko
Hum Teri Baat Kia Kartay Thay

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jis per hamari ankh ne moti bichaaye raat bher
bheja usay wohi kaghaz us per likha kuch bhi nahin

do char din ki baat hai dill khaak main so jaye ga
jab aag per kaghaz rakha baqi bacha kuch bhi nahin

(Yeh Ghazal mainn Bohat Sunnta hoon..yeh dou shair meray favorite hainn )




main ne aik baar ghazal suni thi ye wali, Jagjeet ki aawaz main, mujhe achi lagi thi..
Posted 19 Oct 2005
heart_hacker says
well main bi kabi kabi wo peotry post kerta hoon jo mujy achii lagy
kis ki haii kon hai ikuch pata nahii chalta
thx

cousin ka khayal kerty na kan main kuch daal ker sun layty..

yup kasii kay pass wo petry haii

"sach kahti thii jo ammi kahtii thii"
song haii but dont know kis ka haii
Posted 19 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Your Wish...My Command


mujhako yaqiin hai sach kahatii thiin jo bhii ammii kahatii thiin
jab mere bachapan ke din the chaaNd men pariyaaN rahatii thiin

ik ye din jab apanon ne bhii hamase naataa toD liyaa
ik vo din din jab peD kii shaaKhen bojh hamaaraa sahatii thiin

ik ye din jab saarii saDaken ruuThii ruuThii lagatii hain
ik vo din jab 'aao khelen' saarii galiyaaN kahatii thiin

ik ye din jab jaagii raaten diivaaron ko takatii hain
ik vo din jab shaamon kii bhii palaken bojhal rahatii thiin

ik ye din jab laakhon Gam aur kaal paDaa hai aaNsuu kaa
ik vo din jab ek zaraa sii baat pe nadiyaaN bahatii thiin

Posted 19 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
Remaining Ash'aar of the Ghazal

kisi veraanay main tujh se mil kar
dil main kya phool khila kartay thay

ghar ki deewar sajanay k liye
hum tera naam likha kartay thay

wo bhi kya din thay bhula ka tujh ko
hum tujhay yaad kiya kartay thay

jab tere dard main dil dukhta tha
hum tere huq main duaa kartay thay

bujhnay lagta tha jo chehra tera
daagh seenay main jala kartay thay

apnay jazbon ki kamundon se tujhay
hum bhi taskheer kiya kartay thay

apnay aansu bhi sitaron ki tarah
tere honton pe saja kartay thay

cherdta tha ghum-e-duniya jab bhi
hum tere ghum se gila kartay thay

Aaj tujhay dekh k yaad aaya hey
Hum sukhan-war bhi hua kartay thay

(kuch sher correction k liye repeat kiye hain)
Posted 20 Oct 2005
kiran says
us waqt ko kiya abb yaad kerna
jab hum bhi hum hua kerte thai

jab kuch bhi udaas na tha idher
jab tum bhi tum hua kerte thai

hanste thai hum subha or shaam
jab dil bhi dil hua kerte thai




Posted 20 Oct 2005
QUEEN VICTORIA says
good good sab log carry on








chitthi na koi sandais
jany woh konsa dais
jahan tum chalay gaye
Posted 20 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
kon chala gya Pardain Malka g..

Posted 20 Oct 2005
heart_hacker says
thank you very much new beau
app nain mera bhaat bara kam ker diya haii thx na


nice everyone
Posted 20 Oct 2005
new_beau says
heart_hacker said:

thank you very much new beau
app nain mera bhaat bara kam ker diya haii thx na


nice everyone



O jee tusi welcome jee...waisay Abhi yeh Complete nahin hay..Aur Shair bhi hainn.. I think...


Magar Complete kernay ka kaam Doc_Sam jee kay...Let UNN ko do Mukammal this Kaam
Posted 20 Oct 2005
new_beau says
kiran said:

us waqt ko kiya abb yaad kerna
jab hum bhi hum hua kerte thai

jab kuch bhi udaas na tha idher
jab tum bhi tum hua kerte thai

hanste thai hum subha or shaam
jab dil bhi dil hua kerte thai



O jee Kiran jee...Aap nay Khud kahay hain yeh Shair issi behar mainn ya yeh waqayee issi ghazal kay shair hainn.,,

Agar aap nay kahay hainn tou it seems you are also good poetES.....make your Poetry topic jee...
Posted 20 Oct 2005
new_beau says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

good good sab log carry on








chitthi na koi sandais
jany woh konsa dais
jahan tum chalay gaye




Doctor Sam said:

kon chala gya Pardain Malka g..



Pata Karao
Posted 20 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
new_beau said:

heart_hacker said:

thank you very much new beau
app nain mera bhaat bara kam ker diya haii thx na


nice everyone



O jee tusi welcome jee...waisay Abhi yeh Complete nahin hay..Aur Shair bhi hainn.. I think...


Magar Complete kernay ka kaam Doc_Sam jee kay...Let UNN ko do Mukammal this Kaam



Dr Sam ko Zalim Samaj ne aaj kal kafi hud tak Poetry se duur rakha hua hey,

Kion k Dr Sam k next month papers hain,

ye to kabhi kabhi, Refreshment k liye..

Wese agar Lamba intazar ho sakta hey, to..
Posted 21 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
new_beau said:


Doctor Sam said:

kon chala gya Pardain Malka g..



Pata Karao


Mujhe pata hey...

Posted 21 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
new_beau said:


O jee Kiran jee...Aap nay Khud kahay hain yeh Shair issi behar mainn ya yeh waqayee issi ghazal kay shair hainn.,,

Agar aap nay kahay hainn tou it seems you are also good poetES.....make your Poetry topic jee...




is ghazal k nahi hain, ye mujhe sure hey...

Posted 21 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Phir tou wohi baat hui na...JHo mainn nay aik aur Topic mainn Kahi hay...

Inn ko bhi wohi Beemaari hay
Posted 21 Oct 2005
heart_hacker says




Posted 21 Oct 2005
Doctor Sam says
ye yahan ....

Posted 22 Oct 2005
new_beau says
I think Yeh post Delete ker kay

"Bint-e-Hawwa hua keray koi"

Mainn post kero   
Posted 23 Oct 2005
heart_hacker says
oook new


merii zindagi wigra daga hey
eiko tanda tunda koyii nahii
mery toty ker kay set dayndain
eiko ginda gonda koyii nahii
har koyii chunda hey kaliyan ko
datdy phool noon chunda koyii nahii
hon bas ker shaker rowan dii
sadi dar koyii sunda koyii nahii
Posted 04 Nov 2005
~Fragi~ says
mashallah bazoook loogon jamah hain
Posted 04 Nov 2005
heart_hacker says
jee
Posted 18 Nov 2005
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