shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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aslam o alaikum to janubaba family
aik topic start kar rahi hoon,
shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey apney shair ki ibteda karain
for example ;;

ghulami main na kaam aaein tadbeerain na taqdeerain
jo ho zoq e yaqeen paida to katt jati hain zanjeerain

is shair main sey aik lafz select kar rahi hoon
jati[ sey shair hai];;

dil sey daikhi nahin jati khamoshi ghar ki
kis tarha ujrha hua shehar gawara hota


so lets play waiting 4reply.................hkb
Posted 20 Nov 2005

Koi achi se saza do mujh ko
Chaloo aisa karo bhola do mujh ko
Tum se bichron tu maut ajaye
Dil ki gehraiyon se dua do mujh ko
Posted 21 Nov 2005

new_beau says
"Dua-e-Bad nahin Deta, Fqat Itna hi Kehta hoon"
"Keh Jis say Dil Lagay Tera, Woh Tujh sa Baywafa Niklay"
Posted 21 Nov 2005

"Dua-e-Bad nahin Deta, Fqat Itna hi Kehta hoon"
"Keh Jis say Dil Lagay Tera, Woh Tujh sa Baywafa Niklay"


NB apka apna shair hai ya?




main tu yah bhi nahin kah sakti coz uski khushi hai us main is liyay usay ya nahin kah sakti k woh baywafa niklay...

but main nay tu baywafai nahin ki thi jo mujh say door ho gaay

Posted 21 Nov 2005

new_beau says
~Mysteriousgal~ said:

"Dua-e-Bad nahin Deta, Fqat Itna hi Kehta hoon"
"Keh Jis say Dil Lagay Tera, Woh Tujh sa Baywafa Niklay"


NB apka apna shair hai ya?




main tu yah bhi nahin kah sakti coz uski khushi hai us main is liyay usay ya nahin kah sakti k woh baywafa niklay...

but main nay tu baywafai nahin ki thi jo mujh say door ho gaay



Nahin ..mera nahin hay...Bohat Pehlay Kahin Suna tha..Dil per Naqsh hay Tub say...


Mysty ..Asak Mainn Probolem pata kiya hay

"Seenay mainn Aabaad Hamesha Rehti Hay"
"Pehli Larki YAad Hamesha Rehti hay"






Lekin Aap ki Wafa ki Qadr-o-Qeemat bhi apni jaga hay...

Aap uss say sirf itna keh dijiyeye


"MAINN TUJHAY BHOOL KER BHI NAHIN BOOLTI"
"PIYAAR SONA HAY, SONAY KA PAANI NAHIN"
Posted 21 Nov 2005

baat ya hai kay main usay bholana hi nahin chahti coz pyar koi cheez nahin ya koi waqaya nahin k bhol jao...ya woh haseen ahsas hai jo main humesha yaad rakhna chahti hoon....
dil ab bhi yahi chahta hai NB kay woh laut aay... jis k liyay maa say baat kar li woh chala jaay ga tu maray hath khali rah jain gay....
aaisa kyon hota hai k jisay hum chahtay hain woh humain chor daita hai
Posted 21 Nov 2005

new_beau says
Aisa Aksar Hota hay ..Magar Jo aisa kerta hay ussay iss ka Sila Issi duniya mainn Milta hay....Hum apnay liyey bhi aur Uss kay Liyey bhi Dua hi kertay hainn
Posted 21 Nov 2005

main bas ya chahti hoon woh jis majboori main ya kar raha hai Allah us ka sath day aur plz woh majboori us kay liya majboori na rahay plz
Posted 21 Nov 2005

~Mysteriousgal~ said:

Koi achi se saza do mujh ko
Chaloo aisa karo bhola do mujh ko
Tum se bichron tu maut ajaye
Dil ki gehraiyon se dua do mujh ko


aap doston sey request hai keh jo lafz choose karain
ussay top per likh dain
aap ka bohat shukria.............hkb
Posted 21 Nov 2005

~Mysteriousgal~ said:

"Dua-e-Bad nahin Deta, Fqat Itna hi Kehta hoon"
"Keh Jis say Dil Lagay Tera, Woh Tujh sa Baywafa Niklay"


NB apka apna shair hai ya?




main tu yah bhi nahin kah sakti coz uski khushi hai us main is liyay usay ya nahin kah sakti k woh baywafa niklay...

but main nay tu baywafai nahin ki thi jo mujh say door ho gaay


nahin

dil sey daikhi nahin jati judai FARAZ
kis tarha shaakh peh baithey huay parindon ko urhaoon
Posted 22 Nov 2005

Doctor Sam says
Judaai

chalay aatay tumharay paas lekin
Judai raasta rokay khardi hey
Posted 22 Nov 2005

laikin

main ney kab kaha hai keh meray haq main ho jawab
laikin khamosh kion hai koi faisla to day
Posted 22 Nov 2005

Doctor Sam says

jawab


meri umer se na simat sakay mere paas itnay sawal thay
tere paas jitnay jawab thay teri ik nigaah main a gaye
Posted 22 Nov 2005

umar

tumaam umar meri haalit peh roya nahin koi
agar phoot kay roya hai to meray paon ka chhala
Posted 22 Nov 2005

new_beau says
ROYA


Roya hoonn teri Yaad Mainn Din Raat Musalsal
Aaisay Kabhi hoti nahin Bersaat Musalsal

Posted 22 Nov 2005

Doctor Sam says

Barsaat


maza barsaat ka chaho to in aankhon main a betho
wo barson main barasti hain ye barson se barasti hain
Posted 22 Nov 2005

new_beau said:

ROYA


Roya hoonn teri Yaad Mainn Din Raat Musalsal
Aaisay Kabhi hoti nahin Bersaat Musalsal


yahan aap kisi kay shair ko >QUOTE< bhi kar saktey hain.
;;

kaantey ki tarha hoon main raqeebon ki nazar main
rehtay hain meri ghaat main cheey saat musalsal
Posted 22 Nov 2005

King of jb said:

Aankhon


Teri Tasweer meri Ankhon main Basee kyun hai
Jidhar dekho bus udhar tu hi kyun hai


Aslam o alaikum , reply to >K O J < with tasveer

Posted 22 Nov 2005

Doctor Sam says
udaas


tum nahi ho zindagi apni
ho rahi hey basar udaas udaas
Posted 22 Nov 2005

apni



ab tujhey aur kia doon main apni wafaon ka saboot
keh ab meray haal peh hanstey hain teray shehar kay log
Posted 22 Nov 2005

new_beau says
LOG


Hum ko Logonn mainn na Shumaar ker
Log tou Bay wafa bhi Hotay Hainn
Posted 22 Nov 2005

Ashii says
Shumaar

jo lafz loh e wafa pe likhe hein un ko bhi dekh lena
jo raaegan ho gaee woh ibadatein bhi shumaar karna
Posted 22 Nov 2005

lafz

do chaar lafz bol kay main khamosh ho gaee
woh muskara kay boley bohat bolti ho tum
Posted 22 Nov 2005

new_beau says
BOHAT


"Bohat See Khuwahishainn SAU baarishonn mainn Bheegi Hainn"
"Mainn Kis tarah say Kahoon, Umr Bher uss ka Raha"
Posted 23 Nov 2005

baarish

baarish ki dushmani thi faqt meri zaat sey
joonhi mera makan gira abar chhatt gaey
Posted 23 Nov 2005

new_beau says
MAKAAN


"Deewaar Kiya Giri Meray Kachay Makaan ki
Logonn nay meray Sehan Rastay Bana Liyey"
Posted 23 Nov 2005

makan

Posted 23 Nov 2005

new_beau says
Aaj Kal Repeat Season Chal Raha hay Kiya



RASTA


"Rastonn mainn na baitho keh Hawa Tang keray gi"
"Guzray Huye Logonn ki Sada Tang Keray Gi"

"Met Toot Kay Chaho ussay Aaghaaz-e-safar mainn"
"Bichhro gay tou ik aik ada tang keray gi"
Posted 24 Nov 2005

tang karey gi

khud gharz agar woh hai to matt barhao marasam
khuddar agar tum ho to anna tang karey gee


Posted 25 Nov 2005

Doctor Sam says


Maraasam


ab aor kya kisi se maraaasam bardhaien Hum
ye bhi bohat hey tujh ko agar bhool jaien Hum
Posted 25 Nov 2005

new_beau says
BHOOL


"Yunn tou bhulaana dil say kisi ko kuchh bhi Mushkil nahin"
"Lekin agar Dil ki koi Ban jaye Dhadkan tou Phir"

Posted 26 Nov 2005

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