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Posted on 5/4/2006 2:47:05 PM

ye kyahai Sall?

Posted on 5/4/2006 7:16:44 PM

Sall plz tell me

Posted on 5/4/2006 9:50:43 PM

wat is this?

Posted on 5/4/2006 10:07:40 PM

areyyyyy tum log


yarrr,, isse kehte hein AFSANA
one of my fav,, its not vv long,, 26 pages pe hai, i ll post the rest vv soon
if someone is interested in reading it,, i ll b glad

Posted on 5/5/2006 12:23:32 PM

post 20 kay 20 ore ye hai kis ka ?

Posted on 5/5/2006 2:22:53 PM

afsana is nice but lenghtyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Posted on 5/5/2006 9:48:49 PM

only 26 pages,, and u think its long ??????????


it seems u guys dont read often



freddy
poora parhna hai to check it on Monday or Tuesday
and let me know k kaisa hai,,
poora parh k andaza ho jae gi kis ki hai

























Posted on 5/6/2006 1:48:37 AM

shahrukh khan:

ive read "sona bhi tankeed hai"
so i accept ur "comment"













































Posted on 5/8/2006 1:30:03 PM

SALL:
areyyyyy tum log


yarrr,, isse kehte hein AFSANA
one of my fav,, its not vv long,, 26 pages pe hai, i ll post the rest vv soon
if someone is interested in reading it,, i ll b glad



ok chalo i will wait jab pora hua tab aik saath parhoon gi

Posted on 5/8/2006 9:53:51 PM

sall ye interesting hai abhi sara nahin perha thora hi perha hai
but it should be in ENDLESS STories

I know endless nahin hai but hai to afsana

sirf aik mashwera hai aik post main is ka mukhtasir hissa post kero daily aik new post takay perhnay main asani ho meray liye bhi waqt kam hota hai na








moved to Endless stopries

Posted on 5/9/2006 4:53:32 PM


Posted on 5/9/2006 10:10:14 PM

H and queeenu
yar complete ho gai hai..

as u wish queenu,, jahan bhi rahe,, its ok with me






Kanchan first of all im surprised and then really glad to have such comments
(ur urdu is.......... wow )

totaly agree,, the first remarkable thing is "andaz e tehreer"
tarteeb aur tawalat,,, o well its normal,, yeh kahani nahi soch hai,, aik confused shaks ki soch,, aur aisi halat mei soch taweel aur betarteeb hi hoti hai

"kirdar" there r hardly 2 and half kirdar
'tasveer k kono mei jame rang' loved this comparaison
true,, iss shaks ko zindagi mei ehmiyat nahi mili iss liye logon ki hesiyat iss k nazdeek 2ndry hai,, log iss ki zindagi ka gair-zaroori hissa hein, zindagi nahi except Saima,,


now the question is
hum jiss ki khahish karte hein woh zyada important hota hai ya jo mil jae, bager maange ??
baat na-shukri ki nahi hai,,, baat importance ki aur priority ki hai,, jo cheez mujhe khushi de sakti hai kissi k liye fazool hogi,,,,,,, jiss cheez ki mujhe khahish hi nahi me uss ki kadar kaise karu

jo mil jae ussi pe khush raho ??
to phir dua aur khahish ki koi hesiyat nahi hai kya ???

Posted on 5/10/2006 1:28:21 PM

Afsana is very Good...Aur Kanchan ki Baatonn say Mainn bhi Surprised hoon..Mera KHayal hay Meray baad doosra Genius Member mila hay JB ko

Posted on 5/10/2006 8:13:45 PM

Aap ki Tareef ?

Posted on 5/12/2006 9:45:57 PM

thnx naya bhai jii
apni nahi afsane ki tareef karo




kanchan
inn ki tareef nahi ho sakti

Posted on 5/13/2006 12:02:46 PM