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Tumhara Naam kuch aise...

pehli baar mujhe khayal a raha hey.. k mujhe is nazm ko bohat khoobsoorat tareeqe se likhna chahiye tha.. kion k ye deserve karti hey..
mujhe ye nazm itni pasand hey.. k i really want to share it with those who have some interest in poetry.. aor agar mujhe jaldi na hoti to main ye nazm type kar k.. ya kam az kam hum isay achi tareeqe se likh k present karte..

Posted on 8/23/2006 12:44:30 PM
Aray aray..Kiyun Ammi Abbu nay Copy School kay liyey lay ker di hay..Aap Pages Phaar phaar ker JB per lagatay ja rahay ho
Posted on 8/23/2006 8:25:26 PM
buss.. bohat ho gya.. ab hum koi poetry post nahi kar rahay..
Posted on 8/23/2006 8:49:09 PM
arey kiyoon nahi kar rahey


Posted on 8/23/2006 8:54:24 PM
log nazm ko nahi dekhtay.. meri likhai pe tehqeeq shuru ho gai hey..
Posted on 8/23/2006 9:32:33 PM
burai us mein bhi nahi .... but yun nazam perhney ka maza aata hai
Posted on 8/23/2006 9:43:32 PM
Kool
Posted on 8/24/2006 5:13:13 AM
wwa wa je wa
Posted on 8/24/2006 5:17:45 AM
me chup
Posted on 8/24/2006 11:35:09 AM
ab kya faeda chup hone ka jee... dil jala liya mera...
Posted on 8/24/2006 11:39:45 AM
i object
Posted on 8/24/2006 4:06:40 PM
Doctor Sam:
ab kya faeda chup hone ka jee... dil jala liya mera...


"Tujhay Phhoonknay say pehlay, tera dil nikaal loon mainn"
"Yeh kisi ki hay Amaanat, Kahin saath jal na jaye"
Posted on 8/29/2006 4:15:50 PM
ab to jal gya. .
wese mujhe nahi pata ye kis ki amaanat hey..
Posted on 8/29/2006 10:29:01 PM
nice,, vvv nice
daktar

aap ki writing.............
kya hum kuch keh sakte hein
Posted on 8/30/2006 12:45:24 AM
logon ne itna itna kuch kaha hey,Aap bhi shoq poora kijye.. :(
Posted on 8/30/2006 12:29:43 PM
Doctor Sam:
ab to jal gya. .
wese mujhe nahi pata ye kis ki amaanat hey..


pata kerao
Posted on 8/30/2006 10:24:39 PM
abhi time nahi hey...
Posted on 8/31/2006 7:21:08 PM
Sam please poetry send kerna mat band kerna ajj itne dinon baad a ker tumhari nazms perh ker dil khush ho gea koi aur perhe na perhe main perhoon gi
Posted on 8/31/2006 9:56:22 PM
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