uffffff Nikamma bhai...

Main kis k sath pe apna lahu talash karoon

ye hey theek misraa.....

Posted on 10/19/2006 4:13:00 PM

~Fragi~

kahan hia yeh sher

Posted on 10/19/2006 4:13:15 PM

sig main...

Posted on 10/19/2006 4:14:53 PM

Doctor Sam:
Main kis k sath pe apna lahu talash karoon

ye hey theek misraa.....

sahi shair ap ko bhi nahin maloom.
vo kuch youn he
main kis k hath pe apna lahoo talsh karoon
tamaam sheher ne pehne huay hain dastane
main ne is ki perody ki he
apni zaroorat aur tabiat k ain mutabiq

ap samjhe nahin shaid

Posted on 10/19/2006 4:15:49 PM

~Fragi~

oh hum edit kar dein

Posted on 10/19/2006 4:15:52 PM

nikama:

Doctor Sam:
Main kis k sath pe apna lahu talash karoon

ye hey theek misraa.....

sahi shair ap ko bhi nahin maloom.
vo kuch youn he
main kis k hath pe apna lahoo talsh karoon
tamaam sheher ne pehne huay hain dastane
main ne is ki perody ki he
apni zaroorat aur tabiat k ain mutabiq
ap samjhe nahin shaid

sahi maloom hey tabhi to likha hey...
doosri line isliye nahi likhi thi kion k wo theek thi..

aap ki zaroorat aor Tabiyyat k kya kehne...

Posted on 10/19/2006 4:19:26 PM

u wont get it

Posted on 10/19/2006 4:21:01 PM

Doctor Sam:
MAIN APNE HATH PE KIS KA LAHOO TALASH KARUN
TAMAAM SHEHER HI AYA THA MUJH KO SAMJHAANE

Nikammaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa bhai...

ye kya hashar kiya hey sher ka...

arye koi nai Dr jee ghsa kahye ko kertye ho

Posted on 10/19/2006 5:26:56 PM

Rapunzel

Nikama bhai aap perody kar lete ho

Posted on 10/19/2006 8:36:30 PM

lynx

lo jeeeeee....esi wesi arey champion,champion

Posted on 10/19/2006 11:01:14 PM

Dr jee zyada hi ghusa ker gaye
Dr jeee thora hi shaker bigari hai zyada tu nai

Posted on 10/20/2006 1:27:07 AM

aur kya
ye haal to sher ka kia he
koi shair hathe lag jay to us ka to

Posted on 10/20/2006 11:00:19 AM

Posted on 10/20/2006 11:49:53 AM

QUEEN VICTORIA

h nikamma jee nay bohat gehrayee main ja kat tabdeeli ki hai
i think ye batana chahtay hain kay in ka lahu kis haath per hai uus ka pata saray sheher nay in ko batay
lakin in hi kay pallay kuchh nahin para

Posted on 10/20/2006 1:45:19 PM

new_beau

I never noticed this amendment before...Magar Jo bhi Changekiya hay..woh bohat Zabadast hay

Nikamma jee...aap nay bohat achha amend kiya hay

Posted on 10/20/2006 2:36:07 PM

QUEEN VICTORIA

ok poet of jb
this wk's award goes to nikamma

Posted on 10/20/2006 5:04:11 PM

nikama:
u wont get it

i have got it.. Nikamma bhai...

Posted on 10/20/2006 8:17:38 PM

Doctor Sam:

nikama:

Doctor Sam:
Main kis k sath pe apna lahu talash karoon

ye hey theek misraa.....

sahi shair ap ko bhi nahin maloom.
vo kuch youn he
main kis k hath pe apna lahoo talsh karoon
tamaam sheher ne pehne huay hain dastane
main ne is ki perody ki he
apni zaroorat aur tabiat k ain mutabiq
ap samjhe nahin shaid

sahi maloom hey tabhi to likha hey...
doosri line isliye nahi likhi thi kion k wo theek thi..

aap ki zaroorat aor Tabiyyat k kya kehne...

toba dr sam.. matt maari hui hey aapki

doosri line ab parhi hey main ne...

aor hum ye e samajhtay rahay k doosri line theek hey.

mujhe to pareshani ho rahi hey k ye mujhe kya ho gya hey....

Posted on 10/20/2006 8:22:35 PM

sher main ne ab ghor se parha hey...

ye PHARMA ne mera kya haal kar diya hey...

Posted on 10/20/2006 8:24:19 PM

QUEEN VICTORIA:
h nikamma jee nay bohat gehrayee main ja kat tabdeeli ki hai
i think ye batana chahtay hain kay in ka lahu kis haath per hai uus ka pata saray sheher nay in ko batay
lakin in hi kay pallay kuchh nahin para

aree nahin q.v

allama iqbal aur nikama ki shairy her koi nahin samajh sakta

hua kuch yun k sara sheher nikama ko samjhane aya
aur phir kon kon nikama k ghaiz-o-ghazab ka nishana bana koi pata nahin
hence
MAIN APNE HATH PE KIS KA LAHOO TALASH KAROON
TAMAAM SHEHER HI AYA THA MUJH KO SAMJHANE

Posted on 10/21/2006 10:36:14 AM

doc.thx God u finally got it

n.b thx.ap samjhdar admi ho
samajh aay na aay daad to de detay ho na

rapunzell behen

perody hi nahin ap ko apne kuch aur kamalaat bhi dikhane thay,per ab kya faida

Posted on 10/21/2006 10:39:26 AM

yes FINALLY i got..

aaj meri mama jaan ne kaha

BAAT DHEYAN SE SUNA KARO...

kya ho gya hey mujhe

Posted on 10/21/2006 4:07:44 PM

Teen Tracker

jane do na yaar

Posted on 10/21/2006 8:28:13 PM

Rapunzel

nikama:
doc.thx God u finally got it
n.b thx.ap samjhdar admi ho
samajh aay na aay daad to de detay ho na
rapunzell behen perody hi nahin ap ko apne kuch aur kamalaat bhi dikhane thay,per ab kya faida

Wow rasi pe charh k dikha sakte ho bhai
yaaaaaaaa maut k kueyan mein motor cycle

Posted on 10/21/2006 8:31:43 PM

Teen Tracker

main bhi dekhon ga

Posted on 10/21/2006 8:49:19 PM

Ashii

yeh kya subah subah pone baara baje
shairi ho rahi hai
woh bhi itni garrrhhiiiiii si

Posted on 10/22/2006 2:45:33 PM

Teen Tracker

haan neend aa gayee

Posted on 10/22/2006 3:43:38 PM

hamain kitab hath main lete e neend aanay lagti hey...

Posted on 10/22/2006 8:38:24 PM

Doctor Sam:

Doctor Sam:

nikama:

Doctor Sam:
Main kis k sath pe apna lahu talash karoon

ye hey theek misraa.....

sahi shair ap ko bhi nahin maloom.
vo kuch youn he
main kis k hath pe apna lahoo talsh karoon
tamaam sheher ne pehne huay hain dastane
main ne is ki perody ki he
apni zaroorat aur tabiat k ain mutabiq
ap samjhe nahin shaid

sahi maloom hey tabhi to likha hey...
doosri line isliye nahi likhi thi kion k wo theek thi..

aap ki zaroorat aor Tabiyyat k kya kehne...

toba dr sam.. matt maari hui hey aapki

doosri line ab parhi hey main ne...
aor hum ye e samajhtay rahay k doosri line theek hey. mujhe to pareshani ho rahi hey k ye mujhe kya ho gya hey....

ho gyaa hai tujhye pyarrr
ho gaya hai tujhye pyarrr

Posted on 10/22/2006 8:41:08 PM