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Accha nahin lagta.............by NB

Posted on 1/22/2007 3:58:44 PM
may i make a little change. hope its better..

"Koi manzar suhana BHI mujhe acha nahi lagta"

ooper aisay likha hey "Koi manzar BHI SUHANA mujhe acha nahi lagta,

"BHI MUJHE NAHI LAGTA" is RADEEF of ur ghazal..
Posted on 1/22/2007 11:21:34 PM
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Posted on 1/23/2007 9:08:20 AM


Beautiful Poem... Beautiful Design

Posted on 1/23/2007 10:49:05 AM
dil jalay...o lalay yahan tu sare hi dil jalay hai
Posted on 1/23/2007 10:56:33 AM
shair sb nay aisay hi likha tha
Posted on 1/23/2007 3:27:22 PM
mera bhi ye khayal tha, k ye garr barr aap ne ki hey...
Posted on 1/23/2007 9:37:14 PM
nai nai main nay koooochhhhhhhhhhhhh nai kiya

riz nay jo poetry inpage main pc per save ki thi usi ko copy ker kay designing ki hai
Posted on 1/24/2007 7:17:31 PM
Aray QV Jee...kuchh lines uss file main "RAW" bhi hainn...

"Terteeb diyey hainn kuchh, Saaray nahin mainn nay"
"Sabhi khayaal-e-khaam, Sanwaray nahin mainn nay"

"Qareeb sanam ko laa kay mutma'in ker diya"
"Toray duur falak say sitaaray nahin mainn nay"



Aap nay jo dhoondh ker compose ki hainn..yeh lines abhi finalized nahin thin..any ways....THANKSOO
Posted on 1/24/2007 10:45:06 PM
chalo fer shabash dr sb
Posted on 1/25/2007 1:07:24 PM
mujhe shabash???????????????
Posted on 1/25/2007 6:58:06 PM
4 correction
Posted on 1/25/2007 7:21:49 PM
Posted on 1/25/2007 7:53:27 PM
aap kion dukhi ho gaye hain jee
Posted on 1/25/2007 8:25:41 PM
uss ka khayal phir aa gaya na
Posted on 1/27/2007 10:22:35 AM
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