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miss universe

Age: 32
Total Posts: 489
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Toronto, Canada
From the deepest nook of my heart,
I really do the regret the mean things i unknowingly said,
Have mercy, im on my knees,
you will forgive wont you please?!!
Unbearable are the days when we are apart.
Horrible is the guilt i feel inside my heart.
Without your laughter empty are are the days,
Abscence for your smile is the reasoon for this craze!!

                X-X-X

**"As the sunrises today,
I live on another day!
I wake up each morning wondering when that day would come,
Scared, timid, am i so?!!
No, i do have the courage, im not that low.
I hear everyone say,
death could b in many horrid ways!!
Im weak and lazy, cant do anything with much help;
is it just me, or the the world is really being that way.
All i wish is that i die in a simple and peaceful way.
AMEEN!!
             X-X-X
Posted 14 Oct 2007

eshajam says

very nice
Posted 15 Oct 2007

**"As the sunrises today,
I live on another day!
I wake up each morning wondering when that day would come,
Scared, timid, am i so?!!
No, i do have the courage, im not that low.
I hear everyone say,
death could b in many horrid ways!!
Im weak and lazy, cant do anything with much help;
is it just me, or the the world is really being that way.
All i wish is that i die in a simple and peaceful way.
AMEEN!!



Posted 15 Oct 2007

~tasha~ says
miss universe said:

From the deepest nook of my heart,
I really do the regret the mean things i unknowingly said,
Have mercy, im on my knees,
you will forgive wont you please?!!
Unbearable are the days when we are apart.
Horrible is the guilt i feel inside my heart.
Without your laughter empty are are the days,
Abscence for your smile is the reasoon for this craze!!

                  X-X-X

**"As the sunrises today,
I live on another day!
I wake up each morning wondering when that day would come,
Scared, timid, am i so?!!
No, i do have the courage, im not that low.
I hear everyone say,
death could b in many horrid ways!!
Im weak and lazy, cant do anything with much help;
is it just me, or the the world is really being that way.
All i wish is that i die in a simple and peaceful way.
AMEEN!!
               X-X-X



Posted 15 Oct 2007

Posted 15 Oct 2007

thanks for all
Posted 15 Oct 2007

eshajam says
most welcome
Posted 16 Oct 2007


thanks jam
Posted 16 Oct 2007

Lashakir says
dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun

pehlay tha ruswa zamane main
main begana tha apne ashyane main
tum se milkar main kitna nikhar gaya hun
dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hun

main utarta nahi tha kisi kay mayar pe
mujhy pyar tha apne zawaal se
khud ko mismar kargaya hoon main
dekho kitna badal gaya hoon main

pehlay tu cheena hosh nafraton se
phir badnam hua apni hasraton se

dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun
ajj khud ko amar kar gaya hun main
dekho kitna badal gaya hoon main

dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun

LIAQAT ALI SHAKIR
Posted 16 Oct 2007

Posted 16 Oct 2007

eshajam says
Lashakir said:

dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun

pehlay tha ruswa zamane main
main begana tha apne ashyane main
tum se milkar main kitna nikhar gaya hun
dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hun

main utarta nahi tha kisi kay mayar pe
mujhy pyar tha apne zawaal se
khud ko mismar kargaya hoon main
dekho kitna badal gaya hoon main

pehlay tu cheena hosh nafraton se
phir badnam hua apni hasraton se

dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun
ajj khud ko amar kar gaya hun main
dekho kitna badal gaya hoon main

dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun

LIAQAT ALI SHAKIR



wah wah
Posted 17 Oct 2007

eshajam says
miss universe said:


thanks jam


any time swiss
Posted 17 Oct 2007

Mr Twisty says
nice poems.
Posted 17 Oct 2007

thanks twisty
Posted 17 Oct 2007

Lashakir says
eshajam said:

Lashakir said:

dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun

pehlay tha ruswa zamane main
main begana tha apne ashyane main
tum se milkar main kitna nikhar gaya hun
dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hun

main utarta nahi tha kisi kay mayar pe
mujhy pyar tha apne zawaal se
khud ko mismar kargaya hoon main
dekho kitna badal gaya hoon main

pehlay tu cheena hosh nafraton se
phir badnam hua apni hasraton se

dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun
ajj khud ko amar kar gaya hun main
dekho kitna badal gaya hoon main

dekho main ajj kitna badal gaya hoon
Aankhon se dil main utar gaya hun

LIAQAT ALI SHAKIR



wah wah
Thanks ESHAJAM...AAP NAIN GHAZAL PASAND KI
Posted 20 Oct 2007

Lashakir says
~tasha~ said:

miss universe said:

From the deepest nook of my heart,
I really do the regret the mean things i unknowingly said,
Have mercy, im on my knees,
you will forgive wont you please?!!
Unbearable are the days when we are apart.
Horrible is the guilt i feel inside my heart.
Without your laughter empty are are the days,
Abscence for your smile is the reasoon for this craze!!

                    X-X-X

**"As the sunrises today,
I live on another day!
I wake up each morning wondering when that day would come,
Scared, timid, am i so?!!
No, i do have the courage, im not that low.
I hear everyone say,
death could b in many horrid ways!!
Im weak and lazy, cant do anything with much help;
is it just me, or the the world is really being that way.
All i wish is that i die in a simple and peaceful way.
AMEEN!!
                 X-X-X



AmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeN Suma AmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeN
Posted 20 Oct 2007

Lashakir says
ESHAJAM....ONLY FOR YOU,,,,,
------

Want you to know you're so dear to me,
In a very special way.
I wish my heart would tell me,
The things to you I could say.

I make a wish each time we meet,
That you could feel the way I do,
Each and every night, dear,
My dreams are all of you.

My wish stems right from my heart.
There's no one for me, but you.
Maybe, I will find one day,
Sometimes, dreams come true
Posted 20 Oct 2007

~tasha~ says
nice one
Posted 20 Oct 2007

^dewaja^ says
Posted 20 Oct 2007

Posted 20 Oct 2007

thanks king jb
Posted 24 Oct 2007

Posted 26 Oct 2007

God Willing
Posted 09 Nov 2007

Posted 13 Nov 2007

Fairl_Girl says
goood
keep it up
Posted 01 Dec 2007

Lashakir says
miss universe said:

From the deepest nook of my heart,
I really do the regret the mean things i unknowingly said,
Have mercy, im on my knees,
you will forgive wont you please?!!
Unbearable are the days when we are apart.
Horrible is the guilt i feel inside my heart.
Without your laughter empty are are the days,
Abscence for your smile is the reasoon for this craze!!

                    X-X-X

**"As the sunrises today,
I live on another day!
I wake up each morning wondering when that day would come,
Scared, timid, am i so?!!
No, i do have the courage, im not that low.
I hear everyone say,
death could b in many horrid ways!!
Im weak and lazy, cant do anything with much help;
is it just me, or the the world is really being that way.
All i wish is that i die in a simple and peaceful way.
AMEEN!!
                 X-X-X

Both poetry are fine ,,,,But why u are wishing to die,,,,WHY...!

U HAVE TO DO SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH...IN UR GOLDEN LIFE....
LEARN TO BECOME ALIVE FOR THOSE WHO LOVE WITH YOU...NICE QUEEN OF DREAM
Posted 01 Dec 2007

I value my friends, and I don't want to lose any of them. People have a tendency to dive into relationships too deeply, too quickly. Euphoria does eventually find its way into reality, and many valuable friends are lost as a result. True friendship can endure forever if we are wise enough to recognize its place in our hearts.
True friendship knows its own intrinsic bound,
The pinnacle a covenant unfound.

Perchance cerebral spirits meet
Fulfilling thoughts and dreams in kind,
To render yearning minds replete

Thence wending on with arms in bind,
Mere touch supplanting idle prate
No greater trust than hands entwined.

Enamored passions proffer sate
As ardent raptured hearts unite
In sumptuous repast of fate.

With surety of love in sight,
Two souls shall only then enjoin
In confluence of shared delight.

That perfect niche, a bond without excess
Yields ever symbiotic synthesis.
Posted 04 Dec 2007

Lashakir says
gr88888888888
veeeeeeeeeeeeery Nice
kmall ker dia KAWABOON KI MALKA Aap ne
Posted 05 Dec 2007

~tasha~ says
kool
Posted 05 Dec 2007

max-power says
nice
Posted 05 Dec 2007

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