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When Petals Fall




Sadly she lay neath rose filled arbor,
tempest brews beyond the harbor.
Surf pounds the shore as tide rolls in,
each wave letting sadness begin.

Harsh winds gale upon the ocean,
stirring up waves and raw emotion.
Sorrow wash over as sadness grows,
petals scatter from this beautiful rose.

Storm intensifies, thoughts of despair,
feeling alone with stems stripped bare.
Vulnerable, love has withered away,
storm clouds move in across the bay.

Lost in whirlpools, eddys of dreams,
realizes how hopeless it all seems.
Gone with the wind, losing control,
the storm within has taken its toll.

After the storm only driftwood found,
all the rose petals covered the ground.
Storm came that night, took her away,
found next day where rose petals lay.

Posted on 1/21/2008 7:46:49 PM


so poignant gr8 work

Posted on 1/21/2008 7:59:27 PM

thx dear

Posted on 1/21/2008 8:05:38 PM

nice jee nice

Posted on 1/21/2008 9:32:35 PM

superb one with a lovely pic

Posted on 1/22/2008 12:37:46 AM


Posted on 1/22/2008 12:40:15 AM


nice poem...

Posted on 1/22/2008 9:54:30 AM

thx ss
thx rehan


Posted on 1/22/2008 5:09:45 PM

welcome

Posted on 1/23/2008 4:16:08 AM

good 1 tashani

Posted on 1/23/2008 5:03:13 AM

thx sister

Posted on 1/23/2008 4:47:54 PM


welcome ...

Posted on 1/25/2008 10:44:59 AM