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Path Of Revision

Living a life of indecision,
seeking out a path of revision.
Lost sunshine, cringes now remain,
torrents of tears mid cloud burst of rain.

Midnight and daybreak all seem so gray,
bring heartache and emptiness my way.
Smiles lay hidden neath veils of sorrow,
once for you I would beg steal or borrow.

The fork in the road leaves me confused,
which way to turn with heart so bruised.
You won the battle, I'll no longer fight,
love came, went like a thief in the night.

Unsuspecting, how I wanted to believe,
your words were not said to deceive.
My mind says go west, my heart go east,
now lost and confused to say the least.

Another turning point in my life,
so tired am I of tormernt and strife.
Ambivalent to all the tears I shed,
lost on this path I've been led.

Posted on 2/5/2008 5:30:26 PM

hmm...very nice

Posted on 2/5/2008 5:43:33 PM

sad poetry

tashuuu   

Posted on 2/5/2008 7:32:41 PM

yeah just as i am

thx jam n mm

Posted on 2/5/2008 7:40:04 PM


4 Tashuuu

The best of friends,
Can change a frown,
Into a smile,
when you feel down.

The best of friends,
Will understand,
Your little trials,
And lend a hand.

The best of friends,
Will always share,
Your secret dreams,
Because they care.

The best of friends,
Worth more than gold,
Give all the love,
A heart can hold.

Posted on 2/5/2008 7:56:30 PM

very nice
both of u

Posted on 2/5/2008 8:27:40 PM


Posted on 2/6/2008 10:22:45 AM


very nice...

Posted on 2/6/2008 10:34:31 AM

WOW TASHANI

Posted on 2/7/2008 1:43:00 AM


Posted on 2/7/2008 2:49:17 AM

Miss mine:

4 Tashuuu

The best of friends,
Can change a frown,
Into a smile,
when you feel down.

The best of friends,
Will understand,
Your little trials,
And lend a hand.

The best of friends,
Will always share,
Your secret dreams,
Because they care.

The best of friends,
Worth more than gold,
Give all the love,
A heart can hold.


thx dear

Posted on 2/7/2008 1:32:35 PM

thx oa, ss, rehan, fg & nina


Posted on 2/7/2008 1:33:19 PM

guddd

Posted on 2/11/2008 1:49:30 PM

wow

Posted on 2/11/2008 4:29:26 PM

wht?

Posted on 2/12/2008 5:53:02 PM

thx guyz

Posted on 2/13/2008 5:04:38 AM

welcome

Posted on 2/13/2008 4:20:43 PM

nice

Posted on 2/17/2008 3:38:40 PM

thx mb

Posted on 2/17/2008 4:10:12 PM

welcome

Posted on 2/19/2008 10:20:02 AM