SAD POEM BY me

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                  WHEN YOU LEFT ME....


When you left me a million of seas my eyes were crying,
I just felt like this was the end my soul slowly dying



All those lovely memories of us stuck in my mind,
but I never knew that love was cruel so blind



Each lonely cold night goes so slow wanting you,
the empty space of which has come I never knew

Life feels so dark and so lost with the pain in my heart
my happiness is you the missing part..





Posted 20 Feb 2008

Posted 20 Feb 2008

sun_shine says
really nice
But dont be sad...
Posted 21 Feb 2008

Rain Man says
i love sad poems n songs...

keep em comin...
Posted 23 Feb 2008

Posted 23 Feb 2008

dosselpoh says
nice
Posted 23 Feb 2008

sun_shine says
yaa sad poems are nice
but i like poetry jo aapkay dil ko cho jaye

Posted 23 Feb 2008

SohniKuddi says
pretty sad, y don't you write about how you're gona win her bak instead of how she left you, maybe it'l come true. we can't just sit down and feel sorry for ourselves.
Posted 24 Feb 2008

sun_shine says
yaa its a good idea.
Posted 24 Feb 2008

SohniKuddi said:

pretty sad, y don't you write about how you're gona win her bak instead of how she left you, maybe it'l come true. we can't just sit down and feel sorry for ourselves.



sohniiiiii
Posted 25 Feb 2008

Cathy says
moved
Posted 01 Mar 2008

eshajam says
nice One jee
Posted 01 Mar 2008

Fairl_Girl says
NNICEE
Posted 07 Mar 2008

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