watan ki larki

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jani420

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Woh mashriqi zolfoun ki pakeeza choun
Woh hya-o-laag se darey darey howey paaoun
Woh sajana sawarna dupatey se moun chupana
Woh jhuki jhuki howi nazroun se sharmana
Koi batey kahan gai yeh tasveer nirali
Koi batey meray watan ki larki kis ne churali
Posted 01 Sep 2003

Rain Man says
nice one
Posted 01 Sep 2003

jani420 says
Shukria janab shukria
Posted 01 Sep 2003

rozi says
hmmmmmmmn kiya baat hai
Posted 02 Sep 2003

Rain Man says
shayeri bohat hi achchi thee aap ki...shukria to aap ka itni achchi poem post ki...
Posted 02 Sep 2003

rozi says
Jani ki taraf se mein aap ko welcome kehti houn [:D]
Posted 02 Sep 2003

Rain Man says
no problem
Posted 02 Sep 2003

jani420 says
Acha hai yaar humari shaeri bhi kisi ko pasand ayei hai
Posted 05 Sep 2003

hmm good is it your own.
and how is gona welcome me ha ha
Posted 06 Sep 2003

jani420 says
Hmmmmm yeah it's my own poetry
Posted 07 Sep 2003

oh jani jee ur own poetry 4 rozi....heinaaaaaa?[;)]
Posted 08 Sep 2003

jani420 says
oh hoor jee sher to sahi tara se par lo yaar kiya kaha hai mein ne
Posted 08 Sep 2003

Rain Man says
wazzup
Posted 09 Sep 2003

ricky says
waah kya pita hua sarakchaap namuraad shayar hai. ise to chapplon se maarna chahiye,lol
Posted 09 Sep 2003

jani420 says
abey tu hi koi sher suna de
meri shari deikh kasi zabardast hai
tujey shaid shaeri ka shouk hi nahi
Posted 09 Sep 2003

ricky says
to sun.........
sab jaayenge sar ke bal mohammad ki nagri..
sad jaayenge sar ke bal mohammad ki nagri..
lekin rozi nahi jaayegi sar ke bal mohammad ki nagri..
kyu ki jo rozi gayi sar ke bal mohammad ki nagri..
to palat jaayegi uski ghagri..
aur dikh jaayegi uski nagri..
fir kaun bhan ka l**d jaayega mohammad ki nagri..
hahahahahjahahahahah
Posted 09 Sep 2003

jani420 says
abey tujey saheri ki qadar nahi this is gold it's been printed

acha tu hi koi sher suna de na is ke muqable ka
Posted 09 Sep 2003

ricky says
to sun..
duniya me kitne gadhe hai..sabse bada hai jaani.
iski itni g**d maaro ki ise yaad aa jaaye naani.
lol
Posted 09 Sep 2003

jani420 says
teri maa ke liey


Thumak thumak ke chalti hai lagta hai maar dalegi
Itne barey b********rey mein kiya achar dalegi

teri maa ka jawab

Thumak thumak ke chaltien houn kiya keroun chal hi asi hai
Is mein mera kasoor nahi kasoor war to mera beta ricky hai
na khud kamata hai bus hur jaga apni maa ko Chu****d wata hai
Posted 09 Sep 2003

jani420 says
teri maa ke liey


Thumak thumak ke chalti hai lagta hai maar dalegi
Itne barey b********rey mein kiya achar dalegi

teri maa ka jawab

Thumak thumak ke chaltien houn kiya keroun chal hi asi hai
Is mein mera kasoor nahi kasoor war to mera beta ricky hai
na khud kamata hai bus hur jaga apni maa ko Chu****d wata hai
Posted 09 Sep 2003

ricky boy says
WAAH KYA TALENT HAI. MAI TO SHAKAL DEKH KAR SAMAJH GAYA THA KI TU BAHUT HI HARAMKHOR KISM KA SHAYAR HAI. LOL TU PAKKA HAR MUSHAYRE ME PIT TA HOGA. LOL
Posted 10 Sep 2003

flawless says
guys, wat r u doing?!
stop dissing eachother! if u wana diss eachothr, den go ahead, but dont bring the mothers into this! hav sum respect 4 them!
jani and ricki, calm down boys!
Posted 13 Sep 2003

I"m fine :) sab theek hein :)
Posted 14 Sep 2003

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