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Rapunzel

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Slow Tears


I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
with those eyes I know so well
always serious, so deep and insightful
as though you're always in control
But not today
not now
Now you look so scared
like for once you don't have the answer
I gaze at you
looking deep into those hazel eyes
Hoping to understand
why you've said those things you did
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek.

Posted 10 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Silent Tears

A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.
Posted 10 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Palace of Broken Hearts and Dreams

I sit here in darkness
thinking of you
wishing was all over
pain that I'm going though.

here i am
in this palace of broken heart and dreams
in this dudgeon with this pain inside
left alone and locked inside

i still remember you
Oh so clear in my mind
You broke my heart
with a hammer and a knife.

i see you walk by
full of glamour and shine
are you happy now?
now that you put me aside

Cause I'm locked up
in this palace of broken hearts and dreams
in this dudgeon no one can see
true love deserted me
Posted 10 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Posted 10 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Cry


Existence continues
Monotonously so
repetitive emptiness
alone at sea

Passing ports
one by one
wanting to land
or not wanting to

It doesn't matter
I'm just a shell
a hollow egg
of internal nothingness

Only a war within me
as people sail by
could they teach me
how to cry?
Posted 11 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Proverbs of pain



I broke my dream today,
I don't know what I have to say,
I wished to die ,
and let my soul fly,
up in death sky,
I've became so numb ,
I don't know what happened to me
Its like something must been done all along
On somewhere I belong
Where I can be there on my own
Me and my shadow are there alone
But I know that ill be here again
And I know that I'll have those feelings again
And I know that my pain will remain
Coz its an everlasting pain
It doesn't matter how hard I tried
I lost my life and even my pride
What ever I took or even gave
it lasting till am lying in my grave
pain please leave me alone
coz I've been hurt since I was born
Posted 11 Aug 2008

~tasha~ says
awww tearsss

Posted 11 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
thank You
Posted 11 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Tears to Tears
       
Tears to tears draw the line
Love is never forgotten
Years to years in its sunshine
Leaves of life rotten
Dream kingdoms never come
Only the heart reappears
Where it was and where its plum
Sometime sometimes not clears

Through time's dark
Each mood and affection
Golden visions not to spark
Into the heart's connection
Hours onward to end die
Affliction of dark to see
There once were tears to cry
From under its love plea

What shall last a little while?
Into roads going through
Hours futile is like the mile
Only walked when needn't to
Tears to tears my roots have dried
Reappearing grayish dim
Into its much heartbreak tide
Hostage in a mime whimsy whim
Posted 11 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
     
Dry Tears
     
I cried for you every single day,
You made me lost everywhere i go,
You never gave me any chances to say,
You left me in pain and woe,
You abandoned me in this world of yours,
Stuck in a prison you made,
Its been a long time now,
My tears pours down like a bucket full of grief,
You stole everything that belongs to me,
Dignity, Pride and Love,
I thought you were the one,
But now we're done,
Bits and pieces of me,
I am falling apart...
Posted 11 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says


The Princess: A Medley: Tears, Idle Tears
     
Tears, idle tears, I know not what they mean,
Tears from the depth of some divine despair
Rise in the heart, and gather to the eyes,
In looking on the happy Autumn-fields,
And thinking of the days that are no more.
Fresh as the first beam glittering on a sail,
That brings our friends up from the underworld,
Sad as the last which reddens over one
That sinks with all we love below the verge;
So sad, so fresh, the days that are no more.

Ah, sad and strange as in dark summer dawns
The earliest pipe of half-awaken'd birds
To dying ears, when unto dying eyes
The casement slowly grows a summering square;
So sad, so strange, the days that are no more.

Dear as remember'd kisses after death,
And sweet as those by hopeless fancy feign'd
On lips that are for others; deep as love,
Deep as first love, and wild with all regret;
O Death in Life, the days that are no more!
Posted 11 Aug 2008

~tasha~ says
ohhh
Posted 11 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says


Do You Like These Poems??
Posted 11 Aug 2008

~tasha~ says
yeshhh so much
Posted 11 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
thnx sweetie dun weep yar
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:



Slow Tears


I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
with those eyes I know so well
always serious, so deep and insightful
as though you're always in control
But not today
not now
Now you look so scared
like for once you don't have the answer
I gaze at you
looking deep into those hazel eyes
Hoping to understand
why you've said those things you did
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek.



Bahut achi Rapunzel jee.And the teardrop image, beautiful.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:

Silent Tears

A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.



Great wonders in poetry.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:

Palace of Broken Hearts and Dreams

I sit here in darkness
thinking of you
wishing was all over
pain that I'm going though.

here i am
in this palace of broken heart and dreams
in this dudgeon with this pain inside
left alone and locked inside

i still remember you
Oh so clear in my mind
You broke my heart
with a hammer and a knife.

i see you walk by
full of glamour and shine
are you happy now?
now that you put me aside

Cause I'm locked up
in this palace of broken hearts and dreams
in this dudgeon no one can see
true love deserted me



Rainy day,beautifully put.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:



A great read, realy good.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:

Cry


Existence continues
Monotonously so
repetitive emptiness
alone at sea

Passing ports
one by one
wanting to land
or not wanting to

It doesn't matter
I'm just a shell
a hollow egg
of internal nothingness

Only a war within me
as people sail by
could they teach me
how to cry?



Enjoyable read.Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:

Proverbs of pain



I broke my dream today,
I don't know what I have to say,
I wished to die ,
and let my soul fly,
up in death sky,
I've became so numb ,
I don't know what happened to me
Its like something must been done all along
On somewhere I belong
Where I can be there on my own
Me and my shadow are there alone
But I know that ill be here again
And I know that I'll have those feelings again
And I know that my pain will remain
Coz its an everlasting pain
It doesn't matter how hard I tried
I lost my life and even my pride
What ever I took or even gave
it lasting till am lying in my grave
pain please leave me alone
coz I've been hurt since I was born



Painful, painful or not, charm comes from poetry that shares feelings. Its beautiful read.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
olldman said:

Rapunzel said:



Slow Tears


I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again
you look at me
with those eyes I know so well
always serious, so deep and insightful
as though you're always in control
But not today
not now
Now you look so scared
like for once you don't have the answer
I gaze at you
looking deep into those hazel eyes
Hoping to understand
why you've said those things you did
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
you look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you
and wipe the tears from my cheek.



Bahut achi Rapunzel jee.And the teardrop image, beautiful.


thank You very much Olldman
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
olldman said:

Rapunzel said:

Silent Tears

A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.



Great wonders in poetry.


Agree with You
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
olldman said:



Rainy day,beautifully put.



thnx

olldman said:


A great read, realy good.



so nice of You jee


olldman said:



Enjoyable read.Rapunzel.





olldman said:


Painful, painful or not, charm comes from poetry that shares feelings. Its beautiful read.



im happy tht u like it
Posted 12 Aug 2008

Rapunzel says
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:

Tears to Tears
       
Tears to tears draw the line
Love is never forgotten
Years to years in its sunshine
Leaves of life rotten
Dream kingdoms never come
Only the heart reappears
Where it was and where its plum
Sometime sometimes not clears

Through time's dark
Each mood and affection
Golden visions not to spark
Into the heart's connection
Hours onward to end die
Affliction of dark to see
There once were tears to cry
From under its love plea

What shall last a little while?
Into roads going through
Hours futile is like the mile
Only walked when needn't to
Tears to tears my roots have dried
Reappearing grayish dim
Into its much heartbreak tide
Hostage in a mime whimsy whim



Realy a great addition, Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:

       
Dry Tears
       
I cried for you every single day,
You made me lost everywhere i go,
You never gave me any chances to say,
You left me in pain and woe,
You abandoned me in this world of yours,
Stuck in a prison you made,
Its been a long time now,
My tears pours down like a bucket full of grief,
You stole everything that belongs to me,
Dignity, Pride and Love,
I thought you were the one,
But now we're done,
Bits and pieces of me,
I am falling apart...



Lovely thoughts.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:



The Princess: A Medley: Tears, Idle Tears
       
Tears, idle tears, I know not what they mean,
Tears from the depth of some divine despair
Rise in the heart, and gather to the eyes,
In looking on the happy Autumn-fields,
And thinking of the days that are no more.
Fresh as the first beam glittering on a sail,
That brings our friends up from the underworld,
Sad as the last which reddens over one
That sinks with all we love below the verge;
So sad, so fresh, the days that are no more.

Ah, sad and strange as in dark summer dawns
The earliest pipe of half-awaken'd birds
To dying ears, when unto dying eyes
The casement slowly grows a summering square;
So sad, so strange, the days that are no more.

Dear as remember'd kisses after death,
And sweet as those by hopeless fancy feign'd
On lips that are for others; deep as love,
Deep as first love, and wild with all regret;
O Death in Life, the days that are no more!


Beautiful image, beautiful poetry, Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

olldman says
Rapunzel said:



In the end its a cycle. Beautiful Rapunzel.
Posted 12 Aug 2008

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