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chica on the west

She walks witha wiggle along a straight endless bridge...looking down at the waves of the water beneath she remembers her memories washing away...with every brush of tide against the sand...she cover her head andbows her head down in shame...
a man dressed in all white
with a beard appears in front of her......
and then
YOUR TURN
FINISH
Posted on 10/25/2003 9:48:36 PM
finish??

she's dead??
Posted on 10/26/2003 12:01:18 AM
and hold her shoulder and said ... why are you feeling that .... listen my child ... don't loss ur hope.... you are still alive.... and life bring hope and hope get you back in ur passion and ur passion will make u happy .... the poor girl raise her head and look into the eyes of that man but ..... ur turn
Posted on 11/2/2003 4:32:00 AM
but the man has no eyes??

   I'm not good in telling story
Posted on 11/4/2003 6:17:53 AM
SO SHE SCREAMS AND RUNS LIEK SHES NEVER RUN IN HER LIFE. NON STOP SHE RUNS UNTIL SHE FINDS A HOUSE IN THE MIDDLE OF NO WHERE. SEEKING REFUGE SHE RUNS INTO THE OPEN DOOR AND THERE SHE SEES....
Posted on 2/5/2004 8:55:58 PM
plenty of food on the table....she's very hungry..coz she running...and running....and running....

   
Posted on 2/10/2004 7:33:03 AM
after eatin dat food ... she tried to explore da house .. house was in dark ... and quite haunted type ... as she enterd in da one room ..................................................
Posted on 2/20/2004 1:36:59 AM
she sees a man lying on the ground..his face is covered with a brown cloth but not his body..as she approaches him she sees a snake slither from the man's feet into a dark corner of the room. She calls him but no answer so she pulls the cloth back from his face and when she does she lets out a scream......
Posted on 2/27/2004 4:09:11 PM
it gives me an idea....
Posted on 2/27/2004 11:25:06 PM
what ideaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Posted on 3/7/2004 12:16:54 PM
it's it the guy she saw on the bridge...
Posted on 3/19/2004 1:58:09 AM
n he is a ghost.. who is crazy about her..

Posted on 3/19/2004 2:21:24 PM
Saki:
she sees a man lying on the ground..his face is covered with a brown cloth but not his body..as she approaches him she sees a snake slither from the man's feet into a dark corner of the room. She calls him but no answer so she pulls the cloth back from his face and when she does she lets out a scream......

OMG.... he was breathig hard but she shocked by his face he was the same person she left a while ago.... suddenly he open his eyes ... and look at her .... she was sitting on her knees and had no courage to stand up... she was motion less ... straightly lookin into his eyes... and she felt like he was trying to say something...
Posted on 12/18/2004 5:05:38 AM
salam warmth and hi jupiter
nice to see u.....
Posted on 12/22/2004 8:16:20 PM
the man on the ground disappered. The girl rubbed her eyes. Still scared from witnessing something so unusual she ran. She ran like crazy without even thinking. She kept running until she tripped on a tree branch. Wondering where it came from she got up to keep running. She suddenly realized she wasnt alone there were footsteps behind her

they were getting faster and faster...

at last she looked around 2 see
Posted on 2/22/2005 9:26:49 AM
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