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My poems

Hello everyone.
I am a new member here...Just thot of posting my poems..Do let me know what ull think about them.
Thanks.

             
   
A mission to complete…

A mission to complete,
Difficult it is!
Our land taken over by them;
Fortified it is!
In a fraction of a second;
The bullet can destroy.
We can be killed,
Shattered to pieces; oh boy!
A mission to complete;
Difficult it is!

The war begins and lo behold!
Lay down a few; their bodies cold.
No thought they had for young or old.
Destruction and plundering;
Pain and suffering.
Tears rolled on…
Throughout dusk and dawn.

Thought we;
Why suffering should we see;
While the enemy sings with glee?

I realized we lack inner strength.
A few words of courage could help to defend.
I demanded a meet of soldiers, one and all.
My speech inspired them; all were enthralled.
We were determined …
To walk on the path of confidence;
We then firmly decided …
To use all our might to the best of our sense.

Our organized army fought with pride.
The results showed; for all that we tried.
The battle was taken over by our side.
We won!
In happiness; we all cried.
Our motherland basked in the glory of our achievement.
On being ‘the major’, I was blessed with a sense of fulfillment.
                                                                                       ©Me                                                   
                                                                     
















Posted on 2/26/2004 10:13:05 PM

nice

Posted on 2/26/2004 11:36:49 PM

nice

Posted on 2/28/2004 5:17:44 PM

good one
mission completed

Posted on 3/1/2004 4:25:16 PM

tarash:
good one
mission completed
ok Boss

Posted on 3/2/2004 10:26:20 AM

welcome slimz .. nice contribution :)

Posted on 3/3/2004 6:14:29 AM