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Aisi hai meri ....

Aisi Hai Meri Jaan



Phoolon Se Atchi Us Ki Khushboo
Kaliyon Se Pyari Uski Muskaaan,
Sitaaron Sa Chamakta Hua Chehra
Koyal Si Meethi Zabaaan,
Chaand bhi chup jaye yeh kah ke
Aaasmaan pe ab kya mera kaam,
Chandni to aaa nikli zameen se
Kaisi hai yeh qudrat ki shaan,
Fursat Se Banaya Hoga Rub Ne
Farishton Ka Nahi Yeah Kaaam,
Mittti Se Bane Hain Hum Sab
Us Main Sona Ko Milaya Hoga,
Hoooron Ne Bhi Husrat Se Dekha Hoga
Pariyon Se Sunder Yeah Insaaan,
Alfaaaz Bhi Kum Parte Hain Kahne Ko
Aisi Hai Meri Jaaaaaaaaan

Posted on 4/4/2004 3:19:08 AM
wah wah wah.. kia shairyee hai! .. impressive!











Posted on 4/4/2004 5:57:59 PM
wah brilliant very nice paki lion.
Posted on 4/5/2004 11:04:15 PM
wah wah..
Posted on 4/6/2004 7:14:54 PM
kuch suna do yaar saki acha sa
Posted on 4/6/2004 7:51:32 PM
charizmatic:
kuch suna do yaar saki acha sa


main muft main kuch nahin karti yaar...kuch jaib main dalo to baat baney na... ..tum to bare kanjoos nikley!
ok so arz kiya hai..(aik baat bata doon, i write these sher maself so khule dil se tareef karo meri..lol..)

Zindagi ke iss taptey sehra main kho diya tumain
zakhm diya tha tumain par saza milli humain
har wo cheez mili jiss ki tamana ki thi
par wo khushi na mill saki jo kabi tum ne di thi humain
Posted on 4/7/2004 7:43:11 PM
hmmmmmmm nice gud.
Posted on 4/8/2004 2:11:21 PM
weldone
PAKI-FAN
Posted on 4/8/2004 9:26:44 PM
Saki:
charizmatic:
kuch suna do yaar saki acha sa


main muft main kuch nahin karti yaar...kuch jaib main dalo to baat baney na... ..tum to bare kanjoos nikley!
ok so arz kiya hai..(aik baat bata doon, i write these sher maself so khule dil se tareef karo meri..lol..)

Zindagi ke iss taptey sehra main kho diya tumain
zakhm diya tha tumain par saza milli humain
har wo cheez mili jiss ki tamana ki thi
par wo khushi na mill saki jo kabi tum ne di thi humain



wah kya baat hai
Posted on 4/8/2004 9:29:39 PM
tarash:


Zindagi ke iss taptey sehra main kho diya tumain
zakhm diya tha tumain par saza milli humain
har wo cheez mili jiss ki tamana ki thi
par wo khushi na mill saki jo kabi tum ne di thi humain



wah kya baat hai

oh ji hamari to baat hi kuch aur hai..adab arz hai
Posted on 4/8/2004 11:23:45 PM
Posted on 4/9/2004 10:46:50 AM
Saki:
tarash:


Zindagi ke iss taptey sehra main kho diya tumain
zakhm diya tha tumain par saza milli humain
har wo cheez mili jiss ki tamana ki thi
par wo khushi na mill saki jo kabi tum ne di thi humain



wah kya baat hai


oh ji hamari to baat hi kuch aur hai..adab arz hai


yehi to mein nein kaha hai
aap ki kuch aur hi baat hai
Posted on 4/10/2004 5:09:56 PM
thanx guyz....great sher saki....
Posted on 4/11/2004 2:35:09 AM
Tapat Sooraj mein hoti hain
Tarpna sabko padta hain
kasoor aankhon ka hota hai
Tadapna dil ko parta hai


Posted on 4/11/2004 2:36:39 AM
paki_fan:
Tapat Sooraj mein hoti hain
Tarpna sabko padta hain
kasoor aankhon ka hota hai
Tadapna dil ko parta hai




short and sweet.........very nice!
Posted on 4/12/2004 6:19:50 PM
thanx saki..
Sapney dekhta hain raat ko aashiqui ke,
Aur darta hain ki jaldi subah na ho
Ashiq dhoondta hain khoobsurat koi,
Par darta hain ki voh bewafa na ho.....
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Mere Marne Ke Baad Mere Sene Se
Dil Nikal Lena
Kahi Woh Na Jal Jaaye
Jo Mere Dil Me Rehte Hai................


Posted on 4/15/2004 6:46:34 AM
COOL PAKI FAN!











Posted on 4/15/2004 12:33:32 PM
thanx friend..

    


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Posted on 4/18/2004 7:44:05 AM
ahan .... nice work
Posted on 4/18/2004 1:05:55 PM
some very good poets r here haan
Posted on 4/19/2004 6:11:43 PM
gooD ..jEE Good..!!
KeeP iT Up..!!
Posted on 4/26/2004 6:23:13 PM
thanks guys same to u all....

Love is strong as death, jealousy is cruel as grave....
Posted on 4/27/2004 5:40:28 AM
true
Posted on 4/30/2004 11:31:11 AM
So?
Posted on 5/4/2004 2:35:44 PM
so what?
Posted on 5/12/2004 12:43:23 PM
life is the begining of death and death is the begining of life
Posted on 5/12/2004 7:12:10 PM
SanaSana:
so what?

What do u Mean bY What?
Posted on 5/12/2004 9:32:17 PM
Posted on 5/13/2004 8:30:27 PM
Tusi kyon trouble ch oo?
Posted on 5/13/2004 8:55:09 PM
sadi te whole life ee trouble ch guzri9 hay
Posted on 5/14/2004 8:48:25 PM
Whole?
Yeh Polo main whole kyon hai?
aur aapki life trouble main kyon guzry..
Allah khair karay..
Allah sab ko apnay hifz-o-aman mani rakhay..
Aamin.!!
Posted on 5/14/2004 8:54:25 PM
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