Aisi hai meri ....

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Aisi Hai Meri Jaan



Phoolon Se Atchi Us Ki Khushboo
Kaliyon Se Pyari Uski Muskaaan,
Sitaaron Sa Chamakta Hua Chehra
Koyal Si Meethi Zabaaan,
Chaand bhi chup jaye yeh kah ke
Aaasmaan pe ab kya mera kaam,
Chandni to aaa nikli zameen se
Kaisi hai yeh qudrat ki shaan,
Fursat Se Banaya Hoga Rub Ne
Farishton Ka Nahi Yeah Kaaam,
Mittti Se Bane Hain Hum Sab
Us Main Sona Ko Milaya Hoga,
Hoooron Ne Bhi Husrat Se Dekha Hoga
Pariyon Se Sunder Yeah Insaaan,
Alfaaaz Bhi Kum Parte Hain Kahne Ko
Aisi Hai Meri Jaaaaaaaaan

Posted 04 Apr 2004

friend_16 says
wah wah wah.. kia shairyee hai! .. impressive!











Posted 04 Apr 2004

wah brilliant very nice paki lion.
Posted 05 Apr 2004

Saki says
wah wah..
Posted 06 Apr 2004

kuch suna do yaar saki acha sa
Posted 06 Apr 2004

Saki says
charizmatic said:

kuch suna do yaar saki acha sa



main muft main kuch nahin karti yaar...kuch jaib main dalo to baat baney na... ..tum to bare kanjoos nikley!
ok so arz kiya hai..(aik baat bata doon, i write these sher maself so khule dil se tareef karo meri..lol..)

Zindagi ke iss taptey sehra main kho diya tumain
zakhm diya tha tumain par saza milli humain
har wo cheez mili jiss ki tamana ki thi
par wo khushi na mill saki jo kabi tum ne di thi humain
Posted 07 Apr 2004

hmmmmmmm nice gud.
Posted 08 Apr 2004

tarash says
weldone
PAKI-FAN
Posted 08 Apr 2004

tarash says
Saki said:

charizmatic said:

kuch suna do yaar saki acha sa



main muft main kuch nahin karti yaar...kuch jaib main dalo to baat baney na... ..tum to bare kanjoos nikley!
ok so arz kiya hai..(aik baat bata doon, i write these sher maself so khule dil se tareef karo meri..lol..)

Zindagi ke iss taptey sehra main kho diya tumain
zakhm diya tha tumain par saza milli humain
har wo cheez mili jiss ki tamana ki thi
par wo khushi na mill saki jo kabi tum ne di thi humain



wah kya baat hai
Posted 08 Apr 2004

Saki says
tarash said:



Zindagi ke iss taptey sehra main kho diya tumain
zakhm diya tha tumain par saza milli humain
har wo cheez mili jiss ki tamana ki thi
par wo khushi na mill saki jo kabi tum ne di thi humain




wah kya baat hai

oh ji hamari to baat hi kuch aur hai..adab arz hai
Posted 08 Apr 2004

Posted 09 Apr 2004

tarash says
Saki said:

tarash said:



Zindagi ke iss taptey sehra main kho diya tumain
zakhm diya tha tumain par saza milli humain
har wo cheez mili jiss ki tamana ki thi
par wo khushi na mill saki jo kabi tum ne di thi humain




wah kya baat hai


oh ji hamari to baat hi kuch aur hai..adab arz hai


yehi to mein nein kaha hai
aap ki kuch aur hi baat hai
Posted 10 Apr 2004

paki_fan says
thanx guyz....great sher saki....
Posted 11 Apr 2004

paki_fan says
Tapat Sooraj mein hoti hain
Tarpna sabko padta hain
kasoor aankhon ka hota hai
Tadapna dil ko parta hai


Posted 11 Apr 2004

Saki says
paki_fan said:

Tapat Sooraj mein hoti hain
Tarpna sabko padta hain
kasoor aankhon ka hota hai
Tadapna dil ko parta hai




short and sweet.........very nice!
Posted 12 Apr 2004

paki_fan says
thanx saki..
Sapney dekhta hain raat ko aashiqui ke,
Aur darta hain ki jaldi subah na ho
Ashiq dhoondta hain khoobsurat koi,
Par darta hain ki voh bewafa na ho.....
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Mere Marne Ke Baad Mere Sene Se
Dil Nikal Lena
Kahi Woh Na Jal Jaaye
Jo Mere Dil Me Rehte Hai................


Posted 15 Apr 2004

friend_16 says
COOL PAKI FAN!











Posted 15 Apr 2004

paki_fan says
thanx friend..

    


   FRIENDSHIP OFTEN ENDS IN LOVE,
      BUT LOVE NEVER ENDS IN FRIENDSHIP..
Posted 18 Apr 2004

~Fragi~ says
ahan .... nice work
Posted 18 Apr 2004

some very good poets r here haan
Posted 19 Apr 2004

Shararti says
gooD ..jEE Good..!!
KeeP iT Up..!!
Posted 26 Apr 2004

paki_fan says
thanks guys same to u all....

Love is strong as death, jealousy is cruel as grave....
Posted 27 Apr 2004

true
Posted 30 Apr 2004

Shararti says
So?
Posted 04 May 2004

SanaSana says
so what?
Posted 12 May 2004

life is the begining of death and death is the begining of life
Posted 12 May 2004

Shararti says
SanaSana said:

so what?


What do u Mean bY What?
Posted 12 May 2004

Posted 13 May 2004

Shararti says
Tusi kyon trouble ch oo?
Posted 13 May 2004

sadi te whole life ee trouble ch guzri9 hay
Posted 14 May 2004

Shararti says
Whole?
Yeh Polo main whole kyon hai?
aur aapki life trouble main kyon guzry..
Allah khair karay..
Allah sab ko apnay hifz-o-aman mani rakhay..
Aamin.!!
Posted 14 May 2004

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