kaun kehta hai

adhoori hai kan't make more to finish it

Posted on 4/6/2004 7:06:19 AM

sorry post here by mistake
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modz kan u move it laff n linez plz....thank u

Posted on 4/6/2004 7:08:34 AM

good work

Posted on 4/6/2004 7:25:10 AM

thanx javad

Posted on 4/6/2004 7:47:30 AM

jl420
aaap say pahly kabhi mulaqat nahi hoi
kesay hain

Posted on 4/6/2004 7:54:40 AM

kya haal ha javad sahab....???
theek thaak hoo jee???

woo kya ha apna naam bhi twaday wala hi ha

Posted on 4/6/2004 7:59:52 AM

achaaaa
good gggg
main to theek hoon
tusi sunao javad
meray kahayl main u r the only my co name
aur bolen ji

Posted on 4/6/2004 8:03:53 AM

per main w say likhta hoon.......JAWAD
any ways
whatz going on jee
Kya kertay hein app....saway doosroon ko bore kernay kay:P

Posted on 4/6/2004 8:05:30 AM

co name on jb
henaa?

Posted on 4/6/2004 8:05:39 AM

yuppy

acha yara me chala
subah skoolay wi jana aye

see ya jee
Allah Warris

Posted on 4/6/2004 8:07:04 AM

buss ji filah to yehi kar raha hoon
aab aap agaye hain to meri job aap sambaal lengay

wesay main cargo company main job karta hoon
aur apni sunain

Posted on 4/6/2004 8:08:40 AM

allah wairs ji
aur apna tayan rakhna

Posted on 4/6/2004 8:10:08 AM

javad:
buss ji filah to yehi kar raha hoon
aab aap agaye hain to meri job aap sambaal lengay
wesay main cargo company main job karta hoon
aur apni sunain

yara main dunya kay saray ultay pultay kaam kerta hoon
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poora din soo soo ker itna thak jata hoon kay phir soo jata hoon......bore sa admee hoon......

woo too app ko pata laag hi gya ho ga
anywayz
phir milain gay
nice talking to ya
Allah Warris

Posted on 4/6/2004 8:13:14 AM

Asian

VERY LOVIE DOVIE

. na nice poem did you write it yourself?

Posted on 4/6/2004 2:33:59 PM

Posted on 4/6/2004 5:08:33 PM

yes Asian i wrote by my self

Posted on 4/8/2004 5:40:59 AM

thts good

Posted on 4/8/2004 7:37:01 AM

i add more to it
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kaun kehta hai
tum mere saath nahi ho
tum tou
meri rooh mai ho
meri ankhoon mai ho
meri baatoon mai ho
meri saansoon mai ho
mere dil mai ho
mere dil ki dharkan mai ho
mere khawaboon mai ho
mere khyaloon mai ho
mere saaz mai ho
meri pyaas mai ho
meri aas mai ho
meri awaz mai ho

Posted on 4/9/2004 10:05:04 PM