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Posted on 4/4/2006 2:04:28 PM
Posted on 4/4/2006 2:07:59 PM
aao main inhain tumharay dil main utaar doon...
Posted on 4/4/2006 6:57:19 PM
Kiya Hua ? Ghazal Pasand nahin aayee kiya ?
Posted on 4/4/2006 8:40:01 PM
ghazal achi hey, lekin facts par mabni hey...
nazm k alfaaz pyaray hain...


aanay wala hey wo meri zindagi main mustaqil,
a shab-e-aawargi, baydaariyan khatray main hain...
howww sweeeeeeeeet...
Posted on 4/4/2006 8:49:39 PM
Mujhay Bhi yehi sub say ziyada pasand hay..Magar First Shair bhi Bohat Unique hay



Woh Nazm nahin hay ..Meray Iss Topic ka Introduction hay ...Mainn nay woh lines mainn yeh kaha hay keh iss topic mainn aisi poetry hogi keh jo aap logonn nay Bohat kam ya bilkul nahin suni hogi
Posted on 4/4/2006 9:03:08 PM
well... aap ka jo bhi matlab hey, mujhe wo lines kafi achi lagi hain aor maan lain k wo aik achi nazm hey...
Posted on 4/4/2006 9:12:39 PM
Chalo Mainn uss ko Apnay DEEWAAN mainn shamil ker loon ga...
Posted on 4/5/2006 9:54:02 AM

Posted on 4/5/2006 9:59:55 AM
Posted on 4/5/2006 3:47:58 PM
Last shair descrides about current conditions in the world.
Posted on 4/5/2006 3:49:11 PM
Posted on 4/5/2006 3:54:50 PM
Posted on 4/5/2006 4:07:28 PM
new_beau:
Chalo Mainn uss ko Apnay DEEWAAN mainn shamil ker loon ga...


sure...
Posted on 4/5/2006 8:10:35 PM
new_beau:



nice.. ye main ne parhi hui hey...
Posted on 4/5/2006 8:14:05 PM
new_beau:


ye achi hey aor taqreeban sabhi shair achay hain...
Posted on 4/5/2006 8:17:55 PM
Coming More Unique ones Soon InshaAllah
Posted on 4/5/2006 8:22:22 PM
jee zaroor... nice sharing...
Posted on 4/5/2006 8:31:48 PM
ae shab e awaargi bedaariyan khatre mei hein


takht e daar pe pohonche hein to ab sochte hein
hum kahan aap ki chahat mei chale aae hein



woh larki
Posted on 4/7/2006 2:13:39 AM
Haann Na...Rishtay mainn woh JAan Hamaari Lagti hay
Posted on 4/7/2006 4:39:47 PM
Khushbu aik aawara jhonka. is jhonkay ko ghairay kon
kese duniya ko batlaaoon Tum hotay ho mere kon....
Posted on 4/7/2006 7:03:24 PM
Bata dou kisi din .....


new_beau:


Yeh kisi ko pasand nahin aaya
Posted on 4/7/2006 7:51:36 PM
kuch khaas nahi...
Posted on 4/7/2006 8:05:15 PM
Chalo ..theek hay...

Next are coming soon
Posted on 4/7/2006 8:08:11 PM

Posted on 4/15/2006 7:59:45 PM
bohat aala... ye kis ki ghazal hey...

main na kehta tha k lazim hey nigah bhar fasla...
Posted on 4/16/2006 12:13:22 PM
"Kitni Nazdeek hay Saansainn Tumhari"
"Bhala Hum kis tarah Palkainn Uthayenn"
Posted on 4/16/2006 1:27:59 PM
next....
Posted on 4/16/2006 1:44:31 PM
Coming soon InshaAllah
Posted on 4/16/2006 2:03:12 PM
waiting....
Posted on 4/16/2006 4:41:51 PM
Doctor Sam:
bohat aala... ye kis ki ghazal hey...

main na kehta tha k lazim hey nigah bhar fasla...


Yeh "Shakil Jaazib " ki kitaab mainn say hay

"Jub Saans mainn Girhainn perti hainn"
Posted on 4/16/2006 6:03:04 PM
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