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my story has gone because i dont want no producer to steal it form here.

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Posted on 2/15/2004 1:25:36 AM
please every one read it because i have taken alot of time on it.
Posted on 2/15/2004 1:26:13 AM
i am now in search for some one to lend me 10 crores to make the film, maybe a bank.

and i will be in search for someone to write the script for me.


and i will be looking for a top quality musican like amjad bobby.
Posted on 2/15/2004 1:46:55 AM
good...and amazing...but title name is 'hindi'..I dont like hindi name...why?
Posted on 2/15/2004 2:06:02 AM
pariwar means family.

its not hindi.
Posted on 2/15/2004 2:10:23 AM
pariwar word is hindi man. ...urdu word is 'Khandan'
Posted on 2/15/2004 2:16:40 AM
Salam

Well, it`s a good story, i must say. U have written it self, so its very impressiv. But, dont u think you are trying to put to much in this 3 Hours movie? The Hero get married and then hi gets married and so on..
It is happening to much. Try to cut some parts and then I think it`s a very good story. The cast is good and if the film have good direction, location, strong story and good songs, then I think this movie can do a lot of business in Pakistan.
Lollywood is improving, but we dont have good writers and directors, siwaye Syeed Noor, Rauf Khalid aur Jawad Sheikh ke.

I hope you make this movie and give lollywood a good image. But it`s very hard to make a movie.

Good Luck brother..

Pakwatan..
Sabh seh Pehle Pakistan...Pakwatan38032.1060648148
Posted on 2/15/2004 2:32:10 AM
but why jana malik?
Posted on 2/15/2004 2:32:21 AM
as his family want him to get married to jana malik, he some majbori so he gets married to jana malik but still loves sunneta.

can we plz come out of this plot..
since i m born yehi dekhte aa rahe hein in movies and in real life.. hadd ho gai na MAJBOOOORI ki

well Pariwar is a hindi word..
waise bhi Pariwar, Khandan, ashiyana,,,,, minimum 50 movies hongi aise names ki..

okk naa i ll read the whole story tomorrow and will let ya know wot i think,,,
i ve just watched a movie of 'Guru Datt the great' to ab bohot arse tak mujhe aur koi movie achi nahi lag sakti
Posted on 2/15/2004 2:33:29 AM
ok i will change the movie title. any suggestions for a better title which could match the story.
Posted on 2/15/2004 2:57:53 AM
hahehhahehahhehahehahehahehahhehahe nice stroy means nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt attttttttttttttttttttttttttt alllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll hhahehahehh shaby ur such a loser u wated ur time on dis fool operson ery dumb of u!!!!
Posted on 2/15/2004 5:41:46 AM
f**k you kool_gyal.
Posted on 2/15/2004 6:00:57 AM
Aap ki story main aik choti si ghalti hay
sami khan aghar jana ko divorce day de ga to pir ussi
say shadi kaise kar sakta hay dobara.Indi movie main
to aisa ho sakta hai laikan paki main nahi



nice story

Good Luck
Posted on 2/15/2004 6:21:18 AM
Posted on 2/15/2004 6:37:10 AM
no sunha it will all be fixed and much better when the script is written.
Posted on 2/15/2004 6:53:47 PM
shabby dude dont mind but it look like a remake of earlier pathetic lollywood flick pyar hi pyar mein ur very inspired by the tv dramas but man its 3 hrs movie and putting it so many things will create a prob for u so better check the story line again.
Posted on 2/15/2004 10:17:54 PM
nahh its not inspired by nothing. but maybe alot of it will be cut out when the full script is written.

and i will be aiming for a 2 hours 30 minutes film.


any one got ideas how to improve it.
Posted on 2/16/2004 12:18:31 AM
well shabby jus try to bring a new subject i mean it look like a typical melo drama so try to bring some thing new.
Posted on 2/18/2004 9:25:41 PM
some story shod from college life..teenager life..
if can.
Posted on 2/18/2004 11:51:17 PM
charizmatic:
well shabby jus try to bring a new subject i mean it look like a typical melo drama so try to bring some thing new.



well look at bollywood what are the johars and chopras doing all melo dramas, and there all masive hits.

and all new storys are flops like rudrask, plan, kaante.shaby38036.1685532407
Posted on 2/19/2004 4:01:48 AM
ydakh i wanted to make a film about college life is well, but maybe that will be my 2ed or third film.

i am in search for a finacer now. i will be talking to banks soon.
Posted on 2/19/2004 4:04:16 AM
I would do the main role if u cast sara chaudhary with me
Posted on 2/19/2004 6:55:03 PM
well shaby I want to share some imp matters:-

if story is not new..so direction style shod be good and filmi.
U can see 'Yeh dil aap ka hawa' is blockbuster coz of direction style of js and strong script..thoug story is so so.

(1)if your direction is superb and touch to audiences..I dont think fresh story is problem

(2)Casting shod only according to script..not spare casting...

(3)5 crore is enough ..exceeding High Budget if necessary.

(4)script and screen play shod be strong...Editing shod good...

(5)Soundtrack score and Background music must be strong.
But shaby our soundtrack recording is not DOLBY stereo.
Mumbai has worldclass studio..

(6)experience of movie making necessary if r making a high budget movie...

one main things..dont treat film like our drama style..it's a blunder mistake...u can see result of'Pyar hi pyar main'...'Laaj'.

bus aaj itna hai. ydakh38036.8202314815
Posted on 2/19/2004 7:36:04 PM
i will record the songs in uk.
i will also get some help from some english folks.
Posted on 2/19/2004 10:12:11 PM
Tight:
I would do the main role if u cast sara chaudhary with me



oh yeah if its a college story then definatly sara choudary is an automatic choice.
Posted on 2/19/2004 10:13:30 PM
cummon yaar shabby u can work on thriller as well u can work on comedy as well so many choices yaar but for GOD sake create some thing new if u can.
Posted on 2/19/2004 10:38:33 PM
Posted on 2/19/2004 11:46:03 PM
charizmatic you just shut your mouth and make your song more better.
Posted on 2/20/2004 4:32:44 AM
o bhai sara is automatic choice...so m i....but u haven't contact me yet....check ur pace yaaar...u r too lazy
Posted on 2/20/2004 11:51:23 AM
hahahahaa lolzzz shabby giving u advice is my duty being a frnd but if u wana sink then go on
Posted on 2/20/2004 2:02:57 PM
Posted on 2/20/2004 5:22:57 PM
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