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ABHI TO MOHABBAT KA ANJAAM HOGA...

In Priya’s mind she was only thinking about the two lines while she was going back to India “ABHI TO MOHABBAT KA AAGHAZ HAI…ABHI TO MOHABBAT KA ANJAM HOGA”…

Priya was going back to India to find out what really happened after that. When Daja ji saw Priya coming back he was shocked and, he was thinking what really brings her back? Dada ji asks Priya, what happened, why did you came back? Answered Priya, Dada ji there is something I think you should tell me about my best friend Riya. Dada ji was shocked and asked, what are you talking about and what do you wana know? Priya said, I wana know what happened to Riya after her engagement party, and who is Rahul, where is he now, what happened to Nena? Dada ji said with deep breath, oh well now since you know too much already I guess you have read her diary and the rest I’ll tell you, because I know there is no point hiding that from you now…

Riya was so happy after her engagement party, because she finally got what she wanted it always, her dream man Raj, and after one week they were about to get married to and Raj already told her that after their marriage, they both are going to move to London. That night Riya came back home I wasn’t there, because I went to get some milk for tomorrow morning’s break fast, but poor Riya didn’t know what was waiting for her in the house…

Riya was yelling, Dada ji, Dada Ji where are you my sweet Dada ji? No one was home so Riya went to her room, there was a paper waiting for her on her bed. Riya picked it up and start reading it and you know what she read…after that she called Rahul and asked him…

What is this Rahul, I thought you’re a nice guy and a good friend, instead of being happy for me, you wrote me this letter. Rahul answered, Riya you said I am your good friend right, tell me is Raj your good friend? Riya answered; no he is not because he is my dream man. Rahul said, well when he is not your friend he can’t be your dream man or your lover…because, love is friendship and it’s reality it’s no dream…I am your friend and I love you more then any thing any one in the world. Riya said, Rahul all this crap, when I read what you wrote I got scared, this is no time of playing games. Rahul said, you think this is a game, this is my life Riya. Riya said, shut up Rahul I don’t have time for this crap, I always knew that you’re one retard but Nena made me to think that you’re nice and for the moment I thought you were, but guess what you’re same what thought you were, now bye and don’t talk to me again…

She hung up the phone and went to sleep…she was sleeping but she didn’t know that Rahul was getting ready for something worst then ever…Nena went to Rahul’s house and told him that he should forget about Riya now, since she belongs to another man RAJ! Rahul told Nena, don’t tell me any thing I don’t want to know anything, Nena you’re a good friend and I know you loved me too, but love is one thing which most people don’t get, I guess you and me have the same story but mine is worst, because you love me and I know you do and I treat you as a good friend I will always a place in my heart for you, but Riya have nothing for me, nothing…

Well after that night passed and then 5 days passed by nothing happened, but one day before Raj and Riya’s marriage party, Rahul called Raj and told him to bring Riya along with him to Sea Side Hotel…

Raj told Riya about that and Riya said, what are we gona do there, that guy is a retard and I don’t like him…Riya already told every thing to Raj about Rahul, that he loves her and stuff…

When Riya and Raj went there, no one was there in the hotel, Rahul had booked the whole hotel for them…Rahul said loudly, welcome Raj and Riya, today is my last day here…but only Riya can make me leave from here, then he took out a letter from his pocket and start reading it…

Dear Riya
     I have always loved you, but since you don’t love me I am going to kill my self today in this hotel in front of you…my life started when I saw you the first time at the bank, before that I didn’t know what was love…but now since you don’t love me, I wana end my life with you too…
                                                       Yours Only
                                                            Rahul

Riya said, what are you talking about, have you gone crazy? Rahul said, yes in love, I have this gun in my hand Riya…Rahul took out the gun, and I want you to shoot me with this, because if you won’t after you marriage I will kill Raj, because I can’t see you marrying another guy when I am alive…don’t worry Riya police won’t catch no one is here at the hotel and I have wrote the letter…so they will think that I killed my self…
Riya takes the gun from him and says, Rahul I have never hated you, but I have never loved you either…but you what I love Raj so much and I don’t want him to die or want you to kill him…so I am sorry but I am going to kill you now…

Riya killed Rahul, police came and thought that Rahul killed him self…after the death of Rahul, Nena went to Goa and Riya and Raj got married and went to London…

Priya said, Dada ji, this love story was way different then any love story I have ever heard in my whole life…I feel so sorry for Rahul but he wasn’t the bad guy…and Nena still got his love in her heart…



THE STORY END NOW

Posted on 4/27/2004 11:44:53 PM

she killed him

Posted on 4/27/2004 11:55:47 PM

But I understand she was in LOvE with someone else
That was a nice story.I really liked it. again Thanks.

Posted on 4/27/2004 11:57:45 PM

no problem...this one was a lil short thou haan...since in movies with this kind of stories, only girl's love kills the other guy, so i thought imma make the girl kill him...lol...

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:06:42 AM

LOL,Good

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:27:51 AM


Posted on 4/28/2004 12:31:20 AM

nice devil


yas tabeeyat to theek thi na jab yeh story likhi

mera matlab yas aur love story

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:33:56 AM

i just wrote it cuz us zamane love stories was popular...lol so i use to write em...but no ne more

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:37:44 AM

he's a good writer.

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:40:21 AM

NOT ANY MORE? why not? I think you should keep writing it.

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:42:20 AM

not ne more because the ones i write now, is not love stories, but poems...

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:45:05 AM

Love stories her zamane main he popular rahti hain. ye kahbi bhi jaan nahi choorti

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:45:23 AM

Oh yea I read your Poems. they're v'nice

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:46:51 AM

yup u're right, love stories do live forever...but u have to have interest in em u know

Posted on 4/28/2004 3:43:38 AM

tears again

RAHULLLLLLL IS DEADDDDD awaaaaaaaaaa

yach ap barhey ho tal achey writer bano ge hehe tooooooo good

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:19:18 PM

it was touchy

Posted on 4/28/2004 12:20:14 PM

o man whos gona read all dis

Posted on 4/30/2004 5:48:14 PM

only 4 readers

Posted on 5/1/2004 12:47:09 AM

y did it have to end like this

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted on 5/5/2004 12:16:25 AM

y cuz i hate happy endings...

Posted on 5/5/2004 5:06:04 AM

HEY YEATERDAY I READ ITS FIRST PART TOO..WOh kahan gayeb ho gaya neway...nice story dev...but riya should have atleast think twice b4 killing rahul...that was unrealistic...rahul nay kaha aor riya aik dum man gayee, thoda samjhanay ki try tu kernee chaye thee
.....and this is HAPPY ENDING i think dev....

Posted on 5/18/2004 5:53:41 PM

socho meri story kabhi relistic ho hi nahin sakti
i needed a different end, so i had to do this...ria kehna manne wali bachchi thee isiliye

Posted on 5/19/2004 1:32:52 AM

Thanks for readin em

Posted on 5/19/2004 1:33:10 AM

but riya achee BACHI NAHIN THEE,...so wot agar rahul nay suicidal note likh kay diya, aur police usko nahin pakar sakteee...but wot about her conscience..wo usko nahin pakrayga kia?

Posted on 5/19/2004 12:49:21 PM

nahin bilkul nahin parkrayga, kyonke Main Hoon Na

Posted on 5/19/2004 1:06:59 PM

heheh...yea writer jo ap ho..ap chahy kuch bi ker saktay ho

Posted on 5/19/2004 1:10:13 PM

waise bhi ye bohat bohat pehle likhi thee, i don't write love stories ne more...kyonke unki ending mujhe kabhi samajh nahin aati

Posted on 5/19/2004 1:33:15 PM

lol...and why is it so???ending kyun samjh nahin atte?

Posted on 5/19/2004 1:46:11 PM

kyonke, in all love stories they lovers either die, or get married/get together...
n i'm so fed up with these same old endings...thats why thrillers our good to write, its much fun for me

Posted on 5/19/2004 4:10:08 PM

HMM..ok..so continue wid thrillerz...write which intersts u...if u r fed up with love stories now, then dont write them..coz de output won't be good..but i muss say de one u have shared wid us was terrific...

Posted on 5/22/2004 6:44:25 PM

thank u...don't worry thriilers will turn out good, i'm hopin on it

Posted on 5/22/2004 11:58:36 PM