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cutefriend

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Posted 26 Nov 2004

cutefriend says
Posted 18 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 18 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 18 Dec 2004

paki_fan says
Posted 18 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
gud
Posted 19 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
Posted 20 Dec 2004

Moony_shah says
NICE POST Cute
Posted 20 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
thx dear
Posted 21 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
yar yeh poetry ke liyee main aur janubaby hi reh gayen hain

baqi log bhi post karo na poetry
Posted 21 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
nice
Posted 21 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 21 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 21 Dec 2004

~Sweet~ says
Posted 21 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 22 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 22 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
Posted 23 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
Posted 23 Dec 2004

~Sweet~ says
Posted 23 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
sweet smily ke elawa koi poetry bhi ost ker diya karoo
Posted 23 Dec 2004

paki_fan says
Posted 23 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
Posted 23 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
kiya baat hia soffi jee wah wah










Posted 24 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 24 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Khud ko kar buland itnaa..

Ke' Himaalay ki choti pe jaa pahunche..

aur khuda tumse puche..

'Abe gadhe... ab utrega kaise '
.

   Mein tere pyar mein paagal hua chhaliye

   Mein tere pyar mein paagal hua chhaliye,

   iodex maliye kaam pe chaliye


Tum har raat mere khwabon mein aao,

Tum har raat mujhe yuunhi satao,

Melody khao khud jaan jao........

Door se dekha to kuchh dikha nahi......

Door se dekhaaa.. to kuchh dikha nahi....

Paas jake dekhaa to kuchh tha hi nahi

Door se dekha to Baarish ho rahi thi

Paas ja kar dekha to Bheeg gaya

Yeh aankhen hai ya neeli jheel?

So? What's the big deal?

Dharti, taarey, pahaad, pathar

Dharti, taarey, pahaad, pathar......

Ekhathar, bahathar, chauhathar !

(trihathar is on leave )



Maine tumhare yaadon mein ro ro ke tub bhar diya

Magar tum itney be-wafa nikle ki nahake chal diye.

Door se dekha to sher tha

Door se dekha to sher tha

Is liye paas gaya hi naihn.
Posted 24 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
ha ha ha nice attempt
Posted 25 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
THX
Posted 25 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 25 Dec 2004

cutefriend says
gud
Posted 25 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 28 Dec 2004

paki_fan says
really nice
Posted 28 Dec 2004

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