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Amir Virdan’s Personal Poetry Collection

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Virdan

Age: 124
Total Posts: 652
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Location:
Pakistan, Pakistan
Asslam o Alaikum Friends,

Mein yahan per apni personal poetry send kar raha hon aur aap logo se umeed karta hon keh aap sab apnay comments dein gay kiyon keh aap k words mairay liyay bohat qeemti hain mein koi baqaida poet nahee hon bus shauq ki takmeel k liyay hay yeh sab aur mujhay pata hay keh is mien bohat se khaniyan hon gi bal keh dosray aur wazeh lafzo mien kaha jaiay to yeh ghaltiyo ka ijtimaa ho ga magar ap inhain bardasht kar leejiyay ga Thanks
Posted 27 Sep 2005
new_beau says
Ab aap Bay Hissi say Baher aatay ho ya SUI lay ker Chubho doon ..
Posted 24 Oct 2005
Virdan says
jee jee aa gai hon bhai sui nahee plz sui ka suntay he bahir aa gaya hon kaisa asar hay wah jee wah
Insha Allah 2 din mien send karo ga new poetry bye
Posted 24 Oct 2005
new_beau says
ok
Posted 24 Oct 2005
Virdan says
lein bhai phir mien send kar raha hon bus bardasht kar leejiayay ga ok
Posted 26 Oct 2005
Virdan says
Posted 26 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Misronn ki taanagainn bohat lambi hainn..Chhoti kero..

waisay...AS USUAL..khaayaal is very good...
Posted 26 Oct 2005
Virdan says
mein to pehlay he kehta hon bhai keh yeh ghaltiyo ka palanda hay really thanks a lot 4 ur comments
Posted 27 Oct 2005
Virdan says
waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na
Posted 27 Oct 2005
Queen of jb says
Virdan said:




            
Posted 27 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Aray Queen_of_JB jee..welcome Wapas..Bohat din baad tashreef layeenn aap...
Posted 27 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Virdan said:

waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na



Lo Uncle jee...AA BAIL MUJHAY MAAR ker lya hay aap nay..Ab Saber kero...Eid Guzarnay dou...Tumhari Shayer ka Post Martam SHURU
Posted 27 Oct 2005
Virdan says
Queen of jb said:

Virdan said:




              

Thanks a lot aap queen ho so kabhi kabhi sakhawat kar k remarks de diya karo
Posted 28 Oct 2005
Virdan says
King of jb said:

ahan nice yara


wah wah kaya baat hay isay kehtay hain ik to chupri aur oper se 2 2 wah queen k sath bhi king bhi Masha Allah Thanks 4 remarks dear
Posted 28 Oct 2005
Virdan says
new_beau said:

Aray Queen_of_JB jee..welcome Wapas..Bohat din baad tashreef layeenn aap...


jee hamari tarf se bhi bohat bohat welcome jee
Posted 28 Oct 2005
Virdan says
new_beau said:

Virdan said:

waisay bhai jab aap kehtay ho na keh yeh karo to maira khoon rocket ki tarh khoolta hay nakkama aadmi hon magar aap bhi mairay sath rehtay rehtay nakkmay ho chalay ho khud bhi kuchh kar liya karo na



Lo Uncle jee...AA BAIL MUJHAY MAAR ker lya hay aap nay..Ab Saber kero...Eid Guzarnay dou...Tumhari Shayer ka Post Martam SHURU

wah wah thanks bhai yahi to mien chahta tha keh is mein itni ghaltiyan hain koi to aisa bhai mil jaiy jo inhain nikal de thanks a lot bro aur han zara zor se marna suna hay aap k seeng kafi lambay ho gaaiy hain
Posted 28 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Lekin Mujhay tou Ghaltiyaann nikaalni nahin aatinn





Mainn tou KEERAY nikaalta hoon
Posted 29 Oct 2005
Virdan says
new_beau said:

Lekin Mujhay tou Ghaltiyaann nikaalni nahin aatinn





Mainn tou KEERAY nikaalta hoon



shukar hay keeray nikaltay hain agar aap is mien se hathi aur shair nikalna shoro kar daitay to mien to gaya tha na kaam se
Posted 29 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Kaam say nahin gaya ...Agar Mainn Aisa kerta tou Aap pastol nikaal letay ....
Posted 29 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Abhi Jaldi say Poetry Posty kero...werna Chit Chat Topic ban gaya yeh tou UN STICKY ho jaye ga
Posted 29 Oct 2005
Virdan says
new_beau said:

Kaam say nahin gaya ...Agar Mainn Aisa kerta tou Aap pastol nikaal letay ....


tauba tauba nahee bhai mairi itni jurrat mien to nikalta seedhi toap    
Posted 30 Oct 2005
Virdan says
new_beau said:

Abhi Jaldi say Poetry Posty kero...werna Chit Chat Topic ban gaya yeh tou UN STICKY ho jaye ga


achha bhai karta hon na yeh bhi masla hay
Posted 30 Oct 2005
Virdan says
Posted 30 Oct 2005
new_beau says
MashAllah...Very Good...Really very Good....


I really like it....

Rizwan Ashar saheb Fermaatay hainn keh...

"bin jaanay bin jurm kiyey ik doojay say bichhar gaye"
"Haalaann keh tha na koi bhi fard, meray aur tumharay beech"
Posted 30 Oct 2005
Virdan says
Thanks a lot bhai aap ki pasandeedgi ka bohat mashkor hon aur shere bohat he achha tha thanks apna khyal rakhyay ga aur mujh no amooz ki rahnamai kartay rehyay ga aap ki duao ka talab Amir
Posted 31 Oct 2005
new_beau says
Virdan said:

Thanks a lot bhai aap ki pasandeedgi ka bohat mashkor hon aur shere bohat he achha tha thanks apna khyal rakhyay ga aur mujh no amooz ki rahnamai kartay rehyay ga aap ki duao ka talab Amir



Aap ki duaaonn ka Taalib..
Mashkoor hussain Yaad Yagana Changaizi...

Posted 31 Oct 2005
Virdan says
yeh changaiz lai changairi halaki sabaqi afaaqi khooni janooni majooni ka bhai lagta hay
Posted 01 Nov 2005
QUEEN VICTORIA says
achhi hai
Posted 01 Nov 2005
new_beau says
Virdan said:

yeh changaiz lai changairi halaki sabaqi afaaqi khooni janooni majooni ka bhai lagta hay



Posted 01 Nov 2005
Virdan says
han jee sachi paa jee
Posted 04 Nov 2005
Virdan says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

achhi hai


thanks a lot Queen
Posted 04 Nov 2005
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