a new so called "ENDLESS STORY"

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Imraan

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once upon a time there was a king & a queen.
Posted 07 Jan 2006

u better stay quiet then
Posted 26 Jan 2006

achanak tsunami aa gay aaur sab khalas

the end
Posted 26 Jan 2006

what a dream end qv..i was thinkin of something like that..mighty glad u came up with this..lolz
Posted 27 Jan 2006

so wt abt a new story
Posted 27 Jan 2006

SohniKuddi says
UFFF.....SATEYA NAAAAS!

SHURRU HONE TU PEHLA HI KHATAM, EH KI KARR DITTA YOUR MAJESTY, TE HUN HORR STORY KTTHUN LABB LEYAN?


LOLZ
NICE ENDING


OH MY GOD FRANKY YOUR AVATAR IS HIDEOUS TAUBA TAUBA
Posted 28 Jan 2006

ishtory main shuroo ker daini aan
per ImRaaaaaaaaaaan jidon aay ga tay ohnay apni aes story da end waikh kay ghush kha jana aey

new.....
ik si kuri
tay ik si ohda abba.............




hun tussi agay likho
Posted 28 Jan 2006

SohniKuddi said:

OH MY GOD FRANKY YOUR AVATAR IS HIDEOUS TAUBA TAUBA




hohahahaha
thats how im
scary..

Posted 30 Jan 2006

QUEEN VICTORIA said:


ik si kuri
tay ik si ohda abba..



oday abbe nay tin bivian keetian san
pehli do zehr pee kay mar gayan
teeji no unain apay kutt kutt kay mar dita
kionke o zehr ni c peendi ..
Posted 30 Jan 2006

aakhir oh abba aapay zeher pee ke marr gya si. Uss di kuri sab ka intikaal takya to uss ik chaaku le kay apni jaan le layi. Aur uss kuri da ik aashik vi eh si....
Posted 31 Jan 2006

uda na franky si..o lalamusa da rehn wala see..o jadu moka a wardaat tay pohchya tey reshmaa( )akhri saa lay rhi si unay fato fat apni honda 70 kaddi aur molvi saab no lain chala gya janazay wastay..laikin takdeer da karna anj see kay odi motocycle flat hogyi o v sunsaan road tay..udo hee uno khyala aaya aur unay apna nokia 3310 kadya aur rescue 15 no itlaa diti kay chak no 45 makan no 46 vich reshmaa mar rhi aye ya tay molvi kalo ya ambulance..lolz
Posted 31 Jan 2006

15 walaiyan nay apna ik inspecter bhaijiya
ohnay molvi sb noo naal liya tay ja kay reshma naal nikah perhwa liya tay aakhiya "main apaye reshma da illaj kerwa laan ga"
tay wichara franky moun takda reh gaya.........
Posted 31 Jan 2006

Franky naal hath hone hee wala see kay uda motorcycle start hogya unay ik wari phir reshmaan day kaar val moo kita tay toota dabya and mazay di gal vekho o Pakistani police kaloon pehlay uthay pochanch gaya..unya tak reshmaa no hosh aa chukya see..unay reshmaa no motorcycle tay baya..tay yeh ja who ja..lolz

Posted 31 Jan 2006

halay franky neher day pul tay hi pohnchiya si kay reshma day matraye(step) bhira khotiyan tay beh kay dorday hui aaye tay ohnan nay franky noon gher liya
Posted 31 Jan 2006

franky v phir punjab da jutt see sultan rahi tu impressed uno kadya gandasa tay mari cheekh hoyeeee tay phir fight starts..bhisma bishoo..dhus..bhiss bhiss..bhisshma..aur saray matrye bhrawan ko dhaa ta..tay phir larai kiti aye love song tay banda hai na..lolz
Posted 31 Jan 2006

na punjabi gana @jb

haly franky reshma day bhiranwan kolon kutt kha kay wela hi hoya si kay achanak othay pulce aa gaye
tay ohna nay franky noon"nuqs e aman" day mamlay wich giriftaar ker liya
tay thanay lay ja kay khoob chhitrol kiti

per resham nay aakhir franky tay nazr e karam keeti
tay inspector di minnat kiti kay jay o franky noon chhad deway tay resham ohday naal wiyah ker leway gi
(franky haly tak takor ker reha si)
Posted 31 Jan 2006

Resham franky ko ik vaar takya teh oh munkar gaye keh uss da muhn uss de JB screen icon se uhbahu mil gya! Resham uss de muhn darr doosri vaar takya teh uthay puls de thaanay vich ih jaan nikl gayi iss vaar ussay koi nai bacha sakya.
Posted 31 Jan 2006

SohniKuddi says
Bacchan do kio gal ni, ageh ki hoya? Suno>>>

Reshma boli Mein taan Franky de naal viyah ni karna gee chahe vi ho jaye
Ferr Franky apna “mask” pahrd k te sutt ditta, te boleya Eh wekh reshma mein taan police waaleyan kolun apni pehchaan chupaah reya si, tu taan mera mask nu mera moohn hi samajh litta? Hon tu meri shakkal wekh layi te hun ho jaave shava shava, ferr reshma diyaan tangaan wich jaan ayi. Uddai dil wich dardkan ayii, eh zaalim diniya sannu jeen vi ni dendi, ki karran assi, thane wich Franky Pahseya te mein kitthe javan? Police waaleyan Reshma di gal sun karr te Franky nu chad ditta, uddi dhoti hath vich de k te unnu dhakka maar k te station vicchun satt ditta.

Police waaleyan te franky diyan akhiyan kaaliyan seyah karr dittiyan, uddah moohn sujj sujj ke te gagar wangan karr ditta, uuna te udde moohn vich dannd vi ni chaddeya. Franky te wiyah karan laga si? Hon te marahj di shakkal vighard gayi, bohnti te ik damm mutiyaar disdi si payi.

Hon ho jaave PLASKATT SARJARY
Posted 31 Jan 2006

frank v phir koi awain munda tay nhi
GOLD-Mad-List from cheecho ki malia
in martial arts..yaah
unay aye faisla keeta kay reshmaa
da moo udoo v vekha ga jadoo
apna dusmna tay reshmaa day veera
da karykaram na kara dawan..aur jb di
kurrian jeri har act vich frank no maar par
wa rya ne una da v kuj karna hoega..
une apne dost acho cheedi no phoone kita
tay phir..
Posted 01 Feb 2006

jaldi kahan main twist dalo phir mai the end keroon

o dear frnds
itna lamba na likha kero na
perhnay ko dil nahin kerta

do say teen sentence hon to interesting rahay ga bas isi liye keh rahi hoon
Posted 01 Feb 2006

queen i had to clear my situation..ive been beaten so bad in every scene..lolz..let it go a lil further dont think of finishin it yet
Posted 02 Feb 2006

max pow3r says
Dhen dhen chik chik kooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkk
Posted 02 Feb 2006

max pow3r says
Lets stop beating frank
Achu sheedi Aik Manna hoya badmash se Chak Number 007 daa .Fer frank ne achu sheedi no Sms ker ke Bulaya Hun Kam top o top jaye ga
Posted 02 Feb 2006

achhu sheedi jadon a tay gaya per reshman nu waikh kay ohdi apni niyaat kharab ho gai ta ohnay frank nu khich kay ik gandasa marya tay frank ghush kha kay dig piya
tay achhu reshman nu lay kay nas gaya


oh poor franky
Posted 02 Feb 2006

QUEEN VICTORIA said:

achhu sheedi jadon a tay gaya per reshman nu waikh kay ohdi apni niyaat kharab ho gai ta ohnay frank nu khich kay ik gandasa marya tay frank ghush kha kay dig piya
tay achhu reshman nu lay kay nas gaya


oh poor franky



mai ter shehr chore jaonga..lolz..o tay shukar a frank di akh khul gae..ladies and gentlemen aye sab aik khuwab si(aik baar phir frank apni izzat bachane vich kamyab.. )
Posted 03 Feb 2006

so it means happy ending
Posted 03 Feb 2006

Lets start a new one



kisi jagha aik chhota tha bacha tha yahi koi 5 yrs(oos ka naam franky nahin tha )
woh apnay maan baap ka iklota beta tha
Posted 03 Feb 2006

uske baap sahi ameer tha (aur mazay ki baat yeh kay uska naam bhi frank nhi tha..lolz..)laikin woh khud aik nihayat hee lallo aur nalayak larka tha..
Posted 03 Feb 2006

ager woh larka aisa tha to hum oos ka naam frank hi suppose ker laitay hain

haan to frank to bohat nalayak larka tha lakin oos kay parents bohat larakay thay her waqt aapis main lartay rehtay thay...........














*(frank it is a story plz don misunderstand me abt parents )
Posted 03 Feb 2006

max pow3r says
Frank These "Bachiyan" are Bit Bold Haaan.Inhein Wese he handle kero Jese Yeh chahti hain
Posted 03 Feb 2006

SohniKuddi says
i aint even gona ask........




so whats happening guyz???everytime i log in, the story has either ended or its taken a dramatic change.......so what are we on? our 3rd story???
Posted 04 Feb 2006

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