Hawa us se kehna.........................

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Doctor Sam

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Posted 18 Oct 2006

cutefriend says


wah wah raat main shayeri and back ground bhi black lagaya hia
kiya combination kiya hai raat ka
Posted 18 Oct 2006

sun_shine says
very good poetry n designing also
Posted 18 Oct 2006

javad says
Posted 18 Oct 2006

zaber dast poetry hai
Posted 18 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
cutefriend said:



wah wah raat main shayeri and back ground bhi black lagaya hia
kiya combination kiya hai raat ka



aadaab arz hey jee...
Posted 18 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
sun_shine said:

very good poetry n designing also



shukriya sunshine..

aray janab.. main ne kya designing karni thi.. buss dil chaha k isko black background main likha jaye...
Posted 18 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

zaber dast poetry hai



jee qv... bohat khoobsoorat poetry hey... Mohsin naqvi ki..
Posted 18 Oct 2006

cutefriend says
Doctor Sam said:

cutefriend said:



wah wah raat main shayeri and back ground bhi black lagaya hia
kiya combination kiya hai raat ka



aadaab arz hey jee...



Posted 18 Oct 2006

sun_shine says
simple designing hain per buhat khoobsurat hain
Posted 19 Oct 2006

~Fragi~ says



Hawa us sey kuch na kehna   
Posted 19 Oct 2006

nikama says
payari poem
payari choice
Posted 19 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
Aor Pyaray " Dr Sam"
Posted 19 Oct 2006

~Fragi~ says
itnee piyaari poem k end mein aisee baat
Posted 19 Oct 2006

nikama says
Doctor Sam said:

Aor Pyaray " Dr Sam"


ager ap larki hote to main bhi yehi kehta
Posted 19 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
shuker hey...
Posted 19 Oct 2006

~Fragi~ says
Doctor Sam said:

shuker hey...




kis baat ka ???



waisey poem bohat achee hai







uknow y i m laffing
Posted 19 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
~Fragi~ said:

itnee piyaari poem k end mein aisee baat



pyari poem k end main aik pyari baat...
Posted 19 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
~Fragi~ said:

Doctor Sam said:

shuker hey...




kis baat ka ???



waisey poem bohat achee hai







uknow y i m laffing


me too laughing...
a lot..

thts y i said Shukar hey...
Posted 19 Oct 2006

~Fragi~ says
Doctor Sam said:

~Fragi~ said:

itnee piyaari poem k end mein aisee baat



pyari poem k end main aik pyari baat...


i doubt
Posted 19 Oct 2006

peeche hi par gayee ho HAWA key
Posted 19 Oct 2006

cutefriend says
lagta yeh hawa koi larki hia
Posted 20 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
aap se isi baat ki ummeed hey cf
Posted 20 Oct 2006

~Fragi~ says
hawa chalna bund ho gayee
Posted 20 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
For danie

hawa
subh-damm uski aahista aahista khulti hui aankh se
khwab ki seepiyan chun-nay jaye to kehna
K hum jagtay hain
hawa us se kehna
k jo hijr ki aag peeti ruton ki tanaabain
ragon k sath ulajhti hui sans k sath kass dain
unhain raat k surmai haath khairat main neend kab de sakay hain
hawa us k baazu pe likha hua koi taaweez bandhay to kehna
k aawargi ordh kar sans lete musafir
tujhay khojtay khojtay thakk gaye hain
hawa us se kehna
k hum n tujhe khojne ki sabhi khwahishon ko
udaasi ki deewar main chunn diya hey
hawa us se kehna
k wehshi darindon ki basti ko jatay huye raston per
tere naqsh-e-paa dekh kar
hum ne dil main tere naam k har taraf
ik seyaah maatmi hashiya Bunn diya hey
hawa us se kehna

Hawa kuch na kehna
hawa kuch na kehna

Mohsin Naqvi
Posted 20 Oct 2006

cutefriend says
Doctor Sam said:

aap se isi baat ki ummeed hey cf



chalooo ap khush tu huyeeeeeeeeee

Posted 20 Oct 2006

danie says
Thanx Doc Bro, I liked it.

hawa us se kehna
k hum n tujhe khojne ki sabhi khwahishon ko
udaasi ki deewar main chunn diya hey

hawa us se kehna
k wehshi darindon ki basti ko jatay huye raston per
tere naqsh-e-paa dekh kar
hum ne dil main tere naam k har taraf
ik seyaah maatmi hashiya Bunn diya hey


Posted 20 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
no thanks Danie...

aap k liye baqi bhi english main likhain gay...
Posted 21 Oct 2006

new_beau says
aur Hamaary Liyey
Posted 29 Oct 2006

Doctor Sam says
aapko urdu aor english dono e parhni nahi aatien..?
Posted 30 Oct 2006

new_beau says
   
Posted 31 Oct 2006

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