Dil buhat udas hai

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Saki

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i wrote this nazam rite in the morning...wat do u lot think?

ajj yeh dil buhat udass hai
tu jo pass nahi hai mere
to yeh dil buhat udass hai
ik unkahi si na bujhne wali piyas hai
jane kiyoon yeh dil buhat udass hai
zindagi ki talkh rahon pe chalte howe
ik lamha tum mere morr pe tehre
abb tere jane ka soch ke
achanak dil buhat udass hai
chmake ik sitare ki tarha
mere jeewan ke tareek ke asman pe
tere ulfat ke bujhte chiragh ko dekh ke
abb yeh dil buhat udass hai
ankhon main dhlate tareekion ke saye
dil main phaile khamoshion ke sehra
honton pe chaiyi hai pheeki muskurahat
ke ajj yeh dil buhat udass hai
tu jo pass nahi hai mere
to yeh dil buhat udass hai
Posted 30 Apr 2004

gud yaaar very nice
Posted 30 Apr 2004

Saki says
charizmatic said:

gud yaaar very nice



para bhi hai ya khali bongian marr rahe ho..lol...
Posted 30 Apr 2004

Saki said:

charizmatic said:

gud yaaar very nice



para bhi hai ya khali bongian marr rahe ho..lol...



abbay parha hai tu like kiya hai na tum bhi mammon ho ekdam
Posted 30 Apr 2004

~khushi~ says
u rote it urself
daz gr8
excellent piece of work
Posted 30 Apr 2004

wohi tu
Posted 30 Apr 2004

Rafia says
kiay jawab ah.......saki tum to professional ho.........u should write a peotry book......u can hav a star 4 working so hard
Posted 30 Apr 2004

wowwwwwwwwww so we have discovered a poetess han
Posted 01 May 2004

Shararti says
Oooo..Nice jee Nice...Bohat shandaR.!
Kya baat hai aapki bhaye sahib..!!
Great work...!!
Keep IT uP..!
Posted 01 May 2004

Posted 02 May 2004

Shararti says
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Posted 03 May 2004

Shararti says
Posted 03 May 2004

kiran says
cool ....very nice work
Posted 04 May 2004

Shararti says
Yes It Is..!!
Posted 04 May 2004

Saki says
THANKS PPL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted 04 May 2004

ymahmood says
Wah Ji wah Kia Khoob Udaasi Hay
Posted 05 May 2004

Shararti says
You r welcome jee..(But no need for come..)
Posted 05 May 2004

Saki says
Shararti said:

You r welcome jee..(But no need for come..)



tussi kiss nal lagey ho ji????????????????????/
Posted 06 May 2004

Shararti says
Saki bhaye tano he kah ray aan..!!
aap nay hum sab ko Thanks kaha tu hum Nay WELCOME Kah dya..
Posted 06 May 2004

kiran said:

cool ....very nice work




oyee tum kahan ghayab hoo
Posted 07 May 2004

Shararti says
Kyon aap nay bhi is say sekhna hai gayeb hona?
Posted 07 May 2004

off course tabhi tu poch raha hon
Posted 09 May 2004

paki_fan says
great one saki
Posted 10 May 2004

Posted 10 May 2004

SanaSana says
acche hai
Posted 12 May 2004

Saki says
SanaSana said:

acche hai


zahir hai....mainey jo likhi hai...
Posted 12 May 2004

kiaa baaat hai
Posted 12 May 2004

Shararti says
charizmatic said:

off course tabhi tu poch raha hon


yeh insaano ka nahi jinoo bhotoon ka kaam hai
aap isko choor doo
Posted 14 May 2004

ooo mein kisi bhoot se kam hoon kiya see my avator yara it is almost like bhoot
Posted 15 May 2004

Shararti says
bhoot aisay nahi hotay my dear..
n wayz agar aap kisi bhoot say kam nahi tu fir aap gayeb hona kyon sekhna chahtay hain?
kya ap bhotoon ki us nasal say tu taLak nahi rakhtay jo sirf khana peena jantay hain ?
Posted 17 May 2004

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