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Dil buhat udas hai

i wrote this nazam rite in the morning...wat do u lot think?

ajj yeh dil buhat udass hai
tu jo pass nahi hai mere
to yeh dil buhat udass hai
ik unkahi si na bujhne wali piyas hai
jane kiyoon yeh dil buhat udass hai
zindagi ki talkh rahon pe chalte howe
ik lamha tum mere morr pe tehre
abb tere jane ka soch ke
achanak dil buhat udass hai
chmake ik sitare ki tarha
mere jeewan ke tareek ke asman pe
tere ulfat ke bujhte chiragh ko dekh ke
abb yeh dil buhat udass hai
ankhon main dhlate tareekion ke saye
dil main phaile khamoshion ke sehra
honton pe chaiyi hai pheeki muskurahat
ke ajj yeh dil buhat udass hai
tu jo pass nahi hai mere
to yeh dil buhat udass hai
Posted on 4/30/2004 11:48:31 AM
gud yaaar very nice
Posted on 4/30/2004 11:53:30 AM
charizmatic:
gud yaaar very nice


para bhi hai ya khali bongian marr rahe ho..lol...
Posted on 4/30/2004 11:54:56 AM
Saki:
charizmatic:
gud yaaar very nice


para bhi hai ya khali bongian marr rahe ho..lol...



abbay parha hai tu like kiya hai na tum bhi mammon ho ekdam
Posted on 4/30/2004 11:56:53 AM
u rote it urself
daz gr8
excellent piece of work
Posted on 4/30/2004 5:31:16 PM
wohi tu
Posted on 4/30/2004 6:46:20 PM
kiay jawab ah.......saki tum to professional ho.........u should write a peotry book......u can hav a star 4 working so hard
Posted on 4/30/2004 10:09:04 PM
wowwwwwwwwww so we have discovered a poetess han
Posted on 5/1/2004 2:49:20 PM
Oooo..Nice jee Nice...Bohat shandaR.!
Kya baat hai aapki bhaye sahib..!!
Great work...!!
Keep IT uP..!
Posted on 5/1/2004 11:00:33 PM
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Posted on 5/3/2004 8:34:26 PM
cool ....very nice work
Posted on 5/4/2004 1:20:39 PM
Yes It Is..!!
Posted on 5/4/2004 2:25:30 PM
THANKS PPL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted on 5/4/2004 4:45:08 PM
Wah Ji wah Kia Khoob Udaasi Hay
Posted on 5/5/2004 1:52:45 PM
You r welcome jee..(But no need for come..)
Posted on 5/5/2004 6:23:37 PM
Shararti:
You r welcome jee..(But no need for come..)


tussi kiss nal lagey ho ji????????????????????/
Posted on 5/6/2004 11:41:42 AM
Saki bhaye tano he kah ray aan..!!
aap nay hum sab ko Thanks kaha tu hum Nay WELCOME Kah dya..
Posted on 5/6/2004 7:46:08 PM
kiran:
cool ....very nice work



oyee tum kahan ghayab hoo
Posted on 5/7/2004 9:40:34 PM
Kyon aap nay bhi is say sekhna hai gayeb hona?
Posted on 5/7/2004 10:07:00 PM
off course tabhi tu poch raha hon
Posted on 5/9/2004 9:15:02 PM
great one saki
Posted on 5/10/2004 12:26:47 AM
Posted on 5/10/2004 3:12:55 PM
acche hai
Posted on 5/12/2004 12:38:02 PM
SanaSana:
acche hai

zahir hai....mainey jo likhi hai...
Posted on 5/12/2004 3:16:49 PM
kiaa baaat hai
Posted on 5/12/2004 7:09:27 PM
charizmatic:
off course tabhi tu poch raha hon

yeh insaano ka nahi jinoo bhotoon ka kaam hai
aap isko choor doo
Posted on 5/14/2004 9:34:10 PM
ooo mein kisi bhoot se kam hoon kiya see my avator yara it is almost like bhoot
Posted on 5/15/2004 9:55:22 PM
bhoot aisay nahi hotay my dear..
n wayz agar aap kisi bhoot say kam nahi tu fir aap gayeb hona kyon sekhna chahtay hain?
kya ap bhotoon ki us nasal say tu taLak nahi rakhtay jo sirf khana peena jantay hain ?
Posted on 5/17/2004 8:34:37 PM
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