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Jabse dekha us ko

Mekadee ki gali mein jana chor dina humnay
jabse dekha us ko shishey ka jaam tordiya humnay
ishq ke mare hum bhi duniya sey kehnay lage
jo nazar nazar ko pila gai mujay us nigah sey kaam hai
Posted on 6/9/2003 3:32:42 AM
hmmm dats nice..[:)]
Posted on 6/9/2003 3:37:00 AM
nice!!
Posted on 6/9/2003 5:14:27 AM
acha ha.......kiss ka shair ha???
Posted on 6/9/2003 7:03:23 AM
JOJI tera nahi hae na he JANI ka appna m esure:P
Posted on 6/9/2003 7:11:02 AM
haan meeray shari too high standard kay hotay hein......yeh app ka ho ga phir[:P]
Posted on 6/9/2003 7:50:50 AM
oh an jeeeeeee meri pahunch 6feet se bhi opar hae yaar
Posted on 6/9/2003 1:28:35 PM
hahah joji mazak na kar yar...[:)] tere sher ka muje ache se pata hae...[;)]
Posted on 6/9/2003 2:06:17 PM
Oh ji log kehte hain meri shaeri to bari ghatiya hai mein to koshis kerta houn kisi ko pasand ati hai kisi ko nahie
Posted on 6/9/2003 2:40:23 PM
kya koshish karty ho JANU JEE more ghatiya karne ki:P
Posted on 6/9/2003 3:52:42 PM
whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa HIT THE BRAKESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
oh hi ppl sowwie haan, just my driver getting carried away in my new motor, so wats the noise here abt then, yikessssssss itna ghatiya shair yaar jani, tum hai naa essa karna b4 submitting ur shairs tum mujh se check kar diya karna, theek? :P
shair sunna hai to hum hain naa
"teri yaad ko dil se mitta na sake
hum tere ho kar bhi tujh ko paa na sake
dil nai teri khatir kya kya chotain khayi,
hum phir bhi tujh ko dil se bhoolana sake"
(ghatiya i know :P) wel ppl i did try!
Posted on 6/9/2003 8:43:45 PM
wah wah wah wah wah eje TUSI TAAN KAAML KR DETA was jee:P
Posted on 6/9/2003 11:04:17 PM
quote:
Originally posted by rani

kya koshish karty ho JANU JEE more ghatiya karne ki:P


per jitni koosish ker loo ghatia shairii kernay ki.....u kant beat Rani[:P]
Posted on 6/10/2003 2:11:28 AM
quote:
Originally posted by london_ki_hoor

hahah joji mazak na kar yar...[:)] tere sher ka muje ache se pata hae...[;)]


itna mashhoor shair hoon......pata kion na ho:P
Posted on 6/10/2003 2:12:03 AM
quote:
Originally posted by dosselpoh

quote:
Originally posted by rani

kya koshish karty ho JANU JEE more ghatiya karne ki:P


per jitni koosish ker loo ghatia shairii kernay ki.....u kant beat Rani[:P]


hshahahahahaha.....:p
Posted on 6/10/2003 2:12:45 AM
Han to was jee arz kiya hai

Mera her sher tere jazbaat se acha ho ga
mera her din teri raat se acha ho ga
dekh lena apni nigahoun se mera janaza teri baarat se acha ho ga [:P]
Posted on 6/10/2003 3:15:19 AM
jani yar kantrol karo kay baat ahe mil jaye gi teri MURGHi issi liey itne dukhiho na app:P
Posted on 6/10/2003 3:17:31 AM
Kia control keroun mein to mazak kerta houn
Posted on 6/10/2003 4:01:16 AM
hahah murghi.[;)] jani jee murghi k liye itna sad..[:O]

n joji i knoe tum woh shair Jutiyan khane wale ho..[;)]
Posted on 6/10/2003 5:29:44 AM
Arey sad thori houn jo kismat mein hai woh mujay milegi
Posted on 6/10/2003 5:44:05 AM
kis k mile ka intezar hae jee ap ko ?
Posted on 6/10/2003 6:01:59 AM
yes
Posted on 6/10/2003 6:08:38 AM
bataein bhi to sahi..kaun hae woh khushnaseb:)
Posted on 6/10/2003 6:40:43 AM
koi nahi hai
Posted on 6/10/2003 7:34:23 AM
nai ab yeh to ghaalat hae na..dosto se kia chupana
[;)]
Posted on 6/10/2003 7:35:47 AM
Koi nahi hai kasam se Aur fikar na kerna meri shadi bhi U.K. mein hi hogi aap bhi ana
Posted on 6/10/2003 7:40:28 AM
Meri bahen manchester mein rehti hai aur us ne kaha hai ke shadi wahien kerna
Posted on 6/10/2003 8:06:23 AM
quote:
Originally posted by jani420

koi nahi hai

u r 100% rt abb woh kessy khoshnaseeb ho sakti hae jis ka pala tum se para ho janu:P
Posted on 6/10/2003 12:31:01 PM
Meri chor mujay to us ki fikar hai jis se tu shadi keregi
woh admi to janati ho jaega kiyun ke woh apney gunao ki saza duniya mein ho bugat le ga:P
Posted on 6/10/2003 1:28:22 PM
Jani u r entering the __________ zone........be carefull....u dont no whom u r talking to:P....lolz...just kidding


Hoor koon maray ga jotian.....kiss main ha itni himet[pirategreen]
Posted on 6/10/2003 2:10:05 PM
oye jani tu is sliey keh raha ha eki abhi RANO ko janta nahi hae...[bandit]

joji os ko ABHI RANO KE BHADY nahi patta na issi leiy keh rah ahae yzara ossko appne TAJARBAAT KI RUSHNI mein bata to sahi....[;)]

jote oye woh kaon samushikl kaam ahe jo ji mein hon na kissi aur ki kay zarort hae u C [uzi]
Posted on 6/10/2003 3:23:32 PM
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