Mera Watan

jani yar ye roz roz 14th of august manate rehte ho,, ye bhi kya majra hai

Posted on 10/26/2003 4:03:55 AM

roz roz nahi bus asy hi likeh liya tareef to kero

Posted on 10/26/2003 4:06:36 AM

Rain Man

lol

Posted on 10/26/2003 11:31:55 AM

wah wahhhh bohot ache,,, zabrdasttttttt.. fitttt hai set haiiiiiiii,, jhakaasss hai

Posted on 10/26/2003 4:29:29 PM

Cute_gal

bohat ziada nahi ho gaya @ SALL??

Posted on 10/26/2003 7:39:30 PM

new_beau

Good Poem.. Butt Needs a WAZAN ...Keep it up..and U could be good Poet..

Posted on 10/26/2003 8:53:55 PM

thanx

Posted on 10/26/2003 11:22:10 PM

bohot to ho gaya hai par zabardasti ki tareef aise hi hoti hai na

Posted on 10/27/2003 3:19:07 AM

acha to na kero tareef

Posted on 10/27/2003 4:52:02 AM

jupiterblue:
uhhuuyyyy nice poem??

u cant under stand it asusual....hain na..Am i right?

it is a patriotic poem About Our Pakistan

Posted on 10/27/2003 1:06:07 PM

jani420:
Qaid ka nishan hai tu
Iqbal ki shaan hai tu
Meri pehchan hai tu

Kiya keroun tareef teri
Tu hi to hai maa meri
Terey liey hazir hai jaan meri

Har jawan tera rakhwala hai
Tu hi to humari aankh ka tara hai
Tera har manzar kitna pyara hai

Shaheedoun ke lahoo ne likhi tareekh teri
Qurbanioun se mili hai yeh azadi meri
Aur kiya keroun tareef teri

Kasam khuda ki meri jaan hai tu
Merey watan mera Iman hai tu
Is dil mein hai sir tu tu tuhi tu

teri oonchi shan hai Mola
jani ko tu nay poet bana diya Mola

yeh kya kar diya Mola

Posted on 10/27/2003 1:07:49 PM

new_beau:
Good Poem.. Butt Needs a WAZAN ...Keep it up..and U could be good Poet..

oon ka apna WAZAN hi kafi hai aur kisi WAZAN ki zaroorat nahin

Posted on 10/27/2003 1:08:53 PM

eheheheheeee....
hahaahahhaaa.....
sharam karo sharam karo.. ab to ramadan aa gaya hai.. i ve decided ab kissi ko tang nahi karna

Posted on 10/27/2003 4:01:57 PM

~Fragi~

SALL:
eheheheheeee....
hahaahahhaaa.....
sharam karo sharam karo.. ab to ramadan aa gaya hai.. i ve decided ab kissi ko tang nahi karna

acha decide kiya hai ji

Posted on 10/27/2003 10:40:16 PM

han na na jii..
khekhekhee..

Posted on 10/28/2003 3:54:11 PM

sall.........

Posted on 10/28/2003 4:01:55 PM

ka hua queeenyyyy
hum ab nahi lar sakte, roze se hein..
jitna marzi aankhein dikhao

Posted on 10/28/2003 5:36:58 PM

ok Eid k baad sahi

Posted on 10/29/2003 12:04:49 PM

eid kiss ne dekhi hai yarrrrrrrrrr..

yar these mottu kiddies in ur sig r..
hmmm horrible

Posted on 10/29/2003 3:46:51 PM

kya horrible hai?

Posted on 10/30/2003 2:26:25 PM

ummm wo....
hmmmm
it seems doc sahab ugly kids pe haath saaf ka chuke hein

Posted on 10/31/2003 3:22:52 AM

Posted on 10/31/2003 10:59:48 AM

ok i will change it if u dont like it

Posted on 10/31/2003 11:00:27 AM

slik chik

queen victoria:

new_beau:
Good Poem.. Butt Needs a WAZAN ...Keep it up..and U could be good Poet..

oon ka apna WAZAN hi kafi hai aur kisi WAZAN ki zaroorat nahin

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Posted on 10/31/2003 7:20:01 PM

u already changed naaaaaaaa..

Posted on 11/1/2003 3:19:42 AM

WARMTH OF LOVE

yeah :)

Posted on 11/2/2003 5:00:39 AM