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ghayal kiya jb apno ne


Ghayal Kiya Jab Apno Ne

ghayal kiya jb apno ne,to garon se gila kiya kerna
othaaye hain khnjer jb apno ne, to zndgi ki tammna kiya kerna

dil tha ik kanch ka gher ,so akhir wo bhi toot gyia
qismt main likhye hain jb gum ,to khuda se gila kiya kerna

tersti rahi zndgi bher jin schey rishton ke liye
jb onhon ne hi thukera diya, to garon se tawqo kiya kerna

jis ko smjha tha apna, jis ko bnaya tha apna razdan
osi ne jb dil torr diya, to gaer ko apna ker kiya kerna

muskerana jo bhool gaye hont shazi,to kiya hua
gum ko bna liya hye apna, to muskera ke ab kiya kerna


Posted on 5/31/2004 1:09:06 PM
good poetry
y dont u write in my forum poetry corner
Posted on 6/1/2004 3:45:21 AM
very nice....:) good work done .. keep it up
Posted on 6/1/2004 4:16:02 AM
gud
Posted on 6/1/2004 10:13:09 AM
goooooood
Posted on 6/1/2004 10:15:09 AM
good work

this is my own....

jab appnon ne teer barsaee
sare agle pichle badle chukae

hum toot gae shishe ki tarah
jab pyare logoon ne dhukh diye

jab dil ke pas ke raste per bhi
appnon ne kante hi kante bichae

jab pyar ki mudhbhar chandi main bhi
dostoon ne andhaire andhaire bhar dale

hum toot gae shishe ki tarah
jab chamakte sitare pyaroon ne bujhae
Posted on 6/1/2004 1:23:03 PM
kiran jee app key tu baat hey kya hai
Posted on 6/1/2004 2:04:33 PM
thanks kuch aur arz karoon ijazat dain..kami nahin hai kalaam ki
Posted on 6/1/2004 3:02:10 PM
good jiiii

kiran koi aur taza kalam??
Posted on 6/1/2004 4:07:14 PM
kal karoon gi intezar karooooo...
Posted on 6/2/2004 1:26:41 PM
han jee zaror hojaye kuch taza kalaam
Posted on 6/2/2004 4:01:56 PM
okk aab karoooo bhi
Posted on 6/2/2004 7:13:47 PM
itna inteezaar
Posted on 6/3/2004 1:05:29 AM
kiraaaaaaaan??????
Posted on 6/3/2004 7:31:53 AM
loo jee woh tu putta nahin kaab karein gey main hey kaar daitey houn

loag baithey houn tu kuch bola nahin kartey
wafa mitee main ho tu motti roola nahin kartey
hoo bho sakta hai phir band anh houn tujh sai
yun dareechai dil kai kabhi khoola nahin kartey
Posted on 6/3/2004 11:55:11 PM
kuch yadain bhooli bikhri sin
kuch as ke lamhai khoye hue
kuch ratain thandi barsi sin
kuch pyar ke lamhai soye hue
kuch batain bhooli basri sin
kuch yar ke lamhai roye hue

maine akser yaad kiye
woh deep tumare sang jo jale
woh seep tumare sang jo mile
woh din tumare sang jo bite
woh rang tumare sang jo bhare

maine akser yaad kiye
woh dard tumare bad jo mile
woh zakham jo na kabhi sile
woh marham jo na kabhi mile
woh teer jo bina barse chale

maine akser yaad kiye........

Posted on 6/7/2004 1:31:13 PM
good
Posted on 6/7/2004 2:05:34 PM
bas gooooooooooooooooooooooood
Posted on 6/7/2004 2:09:39 PM
YAAAR BOHAT ACHAY HAI
YE GOOD DIL SAY BOLA HAI
Posted on 6/7/2004 4:55:13 PM
NICE POETRY KIRAN
Posted on 6/9/2004 2:56:56 PM
good kiran kiran ko award milna chahiye
Posted on 6/10/2004 6:08:15 AM
nahin yaar yeh kuch zayada hi tareef ho gai hai...
Posted on 6/14/2004 1:39:23 PM
acha chaloo buhat bura kia hai kiran nay inko punishment milni chaheay ub theek hai????
Posted on 6/15/2004 12:54:06 AM
gandii bachi kiran kahan hooo
Posted on 6/23/2004 9:27:50 AM
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