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American girls poetry

I am
I am the desert
And you are the cool rain that wets my parched lips
I am the snow
And you are the sun that warms my cheeks
I am the sky
And you are the stars in my eyes
I am the flowers
And you are the air that surrounds me in embrace
I am nothing without you

Mein hoon
Mein sehra hoon
Aour tum acchay baarish wo nam mera khushk hont ho
Mein aasmaan hoon
Aour tum najmein andar meri aankh ho
Mein phool hoon
Aour tum hawaa wo ghere mein andar embrace ho
Mein taray boghar kuch be nehin hoon
Posted on 8/16/2005 7:23:06 PM
Yeh tou Angrezi mainn Hay ...
Posted on 8/16/2005 11:30:28 PM
what does that mean in English New_Beau. You forget I do not speak much urdu.
Posted on 8/17/2005 8:45:02 AM
Is that your own lines ...AMERICAN GIRL ?
Posted on 8/17/2005 9:28:34 PM
Yes, new_beau that is my own work thank you very much. I wrote it myself because it is how I feel about someone.
Posted on 8/18/2005 7:12:57 AM
King of JB thank you so much for the compliments and for looking out for me.
Posted on 8/18/2005 7:13:52 AM
Please....Post some more of your Poetry....
Posted on 8/18/2005 9:09:05 PM
gud JOB am..gal


Posted on 8/19/2005 2:55:31 AM
I will post more on Monday when I have alot of time to type. Thanks for all the positive feedback guys.
Posted on 8/20/2005 9:02:22 AM
Monday...



Ok we will wait
Posted on 8/20/2005 9:49:30 PM


Good Work!!!

Keep it up



americangirl:
I am
I am the desert
And you are the cool rain that wets my parched lips
I am the snow
And you are the sun that warms my cheeks
I am the sky
And you are the stars in my eyes
I am the flowers
And you are the air that surrounds me in embrace
I am nothing without you

Mein hoon
Mein sehra hoon
Aour tum acchay baarish wo nam mera khushk hont ho
Mein aasmaan hoon
Aour tum najmein andar meri aankh ho
Mein phool hoon
Aour tum hawaa wo ghere mein andar embrace ho
Mein taray boghar kuch be nehin hoon





Posted on 8/21/2005 4:02:41 AM
Thank you stupid guy!
Posted on 8/21/2005 9:18:36 PM
good one
Posted on 8/21/2005 9:30:41 PM
Kal Mandoay hay
Posted on 8/21/2005 9:30:43 PM
Sorry it's in english and not urdu...maybe new_beau you can translate for me....
In the wind I hear your laughter
In the sun I feel your warmth
In the stars I see your eyes
In the rain I feel your tears
In the night I feel your touch
In the earth i feel you heartbeat
In the floweres I smell your scent
In everything beautiful, there you are
Posted on 8/22/2005 8:13:01 PM
Twas your kiss that gave me breath
Twas your touch that started my heart
Twas you fingertips on my eyes that gave me sight
Twas your love that gave me life
Posted on 8/22/2005 8:14:48 PM
americangirl:
Sorry it's in english and not urdu...maybe new_beau you can translate for me....
In the wind I hear your laughter
In the sun I feel your warmth
In the stars I see your eyes
In the rain I feel your tears
In the night I feel your touch
In the earth i feel you heartbeat
In the floweres I smell your scent
In everything beautiful, there you are




How's Ma Translation ?
Posted on 8/22/2005 9:53:09 PM
americangirl:
Twas your kiss that gave me breath
Twas your touch that started my heart
Twas you fingertips on my eyes that gave me sight
Twas your love that gave me life




How's This One ?
Posted on 8/22/2005 10:08:26 PM
Its a Translation of American Girl's Poetry Pari Sisso...
Posted on 8/22/2005 10:20:06 PM
very good new_beau, I think. I can't read urdu yet unless it is in type: like kya haal hay. I am sorry, but I think you did a good job. Thank you very much for translation so everyone else can understand it.
Posted on 8/23/2005 7:54:37 PM
I feel nithing inside
I am like an empty bottle
You drank me dry then left
Leaving nothing for ones to come
Only an empty shell
I go through the motions of love
But never really feel anything
I am dry and empty
I can't even cry to release
Because I feel nothing
Because you only left pain
And after awhile
Even pain empties out
Then what is left?
Nothing

I am very sad today because my jano has left me. So here is how I feel.
Posted on 8/23/2005 7:57:07 PM
Very Good..."JANU" ka pata hay aap ko...baaqi Urdu Dont Know
Posted on 8/23/2005 9:35:24 PM
Posted on 8/23/2005 9:43:43 PM
My new word for the day I learned is Saathiya-companion...I met an teacher hear from India and we speak some Urdu...so this is my new word...Janu? that is how it is spelled? ok. thank you new_beau...aur kya haal hay new_beau. Aaj sub theek hay for me...at least for now, lol. wb soon
Posted on 8/24/2005 10:10:01 PM
Good Improvement jee


Tum Kon Ho ..?? Apnay baaray mainn Kuchh Batao Na..

Who are you.. ?? Say something About yourself ??
Posted on 8/25/2005 12:21:08 AM
I am american...I live in Lousianna. I am in college (a junior) majoring in psychology. I love writing, reading, art, and acting/singing. I am fascinated by different languages...so far I have picked up Urdu the fastest. Apnay baaray mainn kuch batoa na?
Posted on 8/25/2005 9:26:55 AM
Without the night, how would we rest for it would always be day?
Without water the Earth would just be a vast, barren desert.
Without evil how would we appreciate the good in the world?
Without trials and tribulations we would not be thankful for our many blessings.
Without death, how would we truely understand the joy of really living life.
Without you, then my world is incomplete. You complete me just as the night completes the day, the water and land complete the Earth, and evil as well as good complete the human species.
Posted on 8/25/2005 9:31:12 AM
americangirl:
I am american...I live in Lousianna. I am in college (a junior) majoring in psychology. I love writing, reading, art, and acting/singing. I am fascinated by different languages...so far I have picked up Urdu the fastest. Apnay baaray mainn kuch batoa na?


Mainn Pakistani hoon. Lahore mera Shehar Hay, Mainn Mulk Bulgharia kay Qaumi Hawayee idaaray kay Dubai mainn waqaya dafter mainn Mulaazmat kerta hoon.
Posted on 8/27/2005 1:15:33 AM

Without the night, how would we rest for it would always be day?



Without water the Earth would just be a vast, barren desert.



Without evil how would we appreciate the good in the world?



Without trials and tribulations we would not be thankful for our many blessings.



Without death, how would we truely understand the joy of really living life.



Without you, then my world is incomplete. You complete me just as the night completes the day, the water and land complete the Earth, and evil as well as good complete the human species.


Posted on 8/27/2005 1:58:09 AM
NB bahi aap kamal ho
Posted on 8/27/2005 2:09:03 AM
American Gal ... you've great thoughts and inspirations to write lovely and charming words and you've blessed with rich capacity to observe nature and awareness of Life and the influences over it and very soft emotions abt Love, Reality and much more ...


wish you very good luck
Posted on 8/27/2005 2:47:28 AM
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