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NaMe A PeRsOn (Queenies Story 1st)


Posted on 10/29/2005 1:26:52 AM

ki bit bit taktay ho jee

Posted on 10/29/2005 4:06:31 PM

lagta hai kuch soch rahein hain janab but chun k kafia aarsay bad soch rahein hain tu mushkil pesh aa rahe hai

Posted on 10/29/2005 8:26:28 PM

chuna kay nahin...CHHANT kay





Wasiay Taanoonn kaisay pata keh KAAFI ARSAY BAAD

Posted on 10/29/2005 9:14:53 PM

bus kya bataoon pata chal jata hai

Posted on 10/31/2005 3:25:22 PM

dolly ka interest muk gaya naa meri ishtory say

Posted on 10/31/2005 5:03:33 PM


Posted on 10/31/2005 7:53:59 PM

interval kay baghair hi






THE END

Posted on 11/1/2005 4:41:22 PM

QUEEN VICTORIA:
dolly ka interest muk gaya naa meri ishtory
say


Ive been sick for the past few days
a post here and a post there

actually yesterday Im not even sure if I came online at all.

Really sorry.

(also when I write stories I remember the man I truely love and miss and
sometimes it makes me extremmely sad).

Posted on 11/2/2005 11:46:59 PM

continuing

then THe JAtt....rolled up his sleeves to
show something to Queenie....   


"thenu ah vi nay yaadh..."

He showed her a scar on her arm...
it looked like someone had stabbed him or something..
but it was so old...

Queenie wrinkled her head and began to think...

She had an idea: Could it be him, she thought....NAH! I coudlnt!

But, what if it was. She got out of her car. Stood in front of him
starring into to those dreamy eyes....almost as if she was starring in onto
the moonlight sky. She started laughing...and so did Mr. Jatt. But, they
her laughter became tears. He moved in closer to wipe away those
tingling wet n warm tears from her face. He almost wiped away her fears
also. She felt a big relief swoosh over her as she let out a sigh..
"huhhhhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhh"

Jatt kenda: tu they bilkul nay change hoyee tu thay oday di aww.

Queenie Kendi: JOkingly Meh the thenu hala vi nay pashana.

"nah pashanaya." Jatt said with a wink. He pulled out a pencil from his
pocket and begin to chase queenie. She ran and the wind blew through
her pretty long hair.

The scent of her drove the jatt bananas.
Just as jatt had grabbed her arm. He pretended to stabb her. Queenie
blurted out..."oway nay oway nay..thawanu kidda pull sakday ah."

She was rolling her chooni around her finger. She bite her lip to look up
at him. And the she was embraced by an unexpected hug.

Her ChIlDhooD friend was back. And she hadnt seen him since 2nd
grade. When she had stabbed him on his arm with the pencil...when he
tried to kiss her face....

Posted on 11/2/2005 11:51:32 PM

hi hi
jatt ki yeh jurat

Posted on 11/3/2005 2:37:30 PM

LiL_DollY:
QUEEN VICTORIA:
dolly ka interest muk gaya naa meri ishtory
say


Ive been sick for the past few days
a post here and a post there

actually yesterday Im not even sure if I came online at all.

Really sorry.

(also when I write stories I remember the man I truely love and miss and
sometimes it makes me extremmely sad).

aww dolly bemaar shamaar
God bless u dear

Posted on 11/3/2005 2:40:08 PM

awww...I wish this story was real...

Posted on 11/5/2005 12:21:11 AM

phir kya hua

Posted on 11/8/2005 3:30:19 PM

break

Posted on 11/8/2005 5:20:11 PM

ok

Posted on 11/10/2005 4:03:19 PM

JaTT aya our patha bhi nahi laga QueeniE koh
uske anay keh saath unko kithanee khushiya milgayee

Queenie was standing in front of the mirror
gazing away and dreaming. Her eyes were sparkling with
happiness. She couldnt have imagined that she would be crazy about
jatt. It had just been a day since he was back.

The butterflies in her tummy were fluttering so much it made her even
more nervous.

She picked up the sirme dani and did her beautiful eyes. She WAS
wearing black and red shalwar kameez today. Fitting and cute. She
began to put the red n black paranda into her hair. As she was
braiding...JATT...SNUCk unto her room. Hay Hay...JAAt Said.

QUeenie...Startled at first smiled at him and through a pillow at him

FInally she said:

Jaldi niklo
Amee ajay gi
NIklo nah

And he just smiled
with his arms crossed
just looking at her admiring her

just as she was about to leave the room
he grabbed her paranda....

pulling her hair....

Posted on 12/15/2005 11:15:08 PM


Posted on 12/16/2005 12:43:25 PM

Her MOthers VOice Came FrOM Da KitcHen..NI kUriyah....
Akay atah Gon

QUennie...pulled her paranda out of Jatts hand...with a sad face she left
the room.

ENtering the kithen...she peered at her mom. WHO was making rotis
sitting on a peeri next to the fire.
Uh gee Ama...she said

JAldi Atah gon
Hor rotiyah pakoneeya...Her MOm said.

They had lots of visitors over since her cousin had come back from
Studying abroad. SO she was stuck with her mother cooking for
everyone.

Queenie sat there across from her mother kneading the wheat flour so
her mother could make rotis. she kept knedding and while she was bz
she was also thinking about JAtt. Dazzing away...she hadnt
realized...how much water she put into the flour...

A sharp voice astounded her....it was her mom...."THERA PALA HOJAY"
said her mom looking at the bowel...wehich was a dissaster.

QUeenie looked up a little shocked herself. And what made her more
embarrassed was...Jatt had been standing in the doorway watching her.
Jaat began to laugh. Queenie became furious and turned red like an
apple.

Jatt started taking long strands to where queenie was with her mother.
He finally said:

Girl get outta my way
Limmie show you how you suppose
to knead the dough

Posted on 12/20/2005 4:14:14 AM

o my God

Posted on 12/20/2005 4:04:31 PM

LiL_DollY:
JaTT aya our patha bhi nahi laga QueeniE koh
uske anay keh saath unko kithanee khushiya milgayee

Queenie was standing in front of the mirror
gazing away and dreaming. Her eyes were sparkling with
happiness. She couldnt have imagined that she would be crazy about
jatt. It had just been a day since he was back.

The butterflies in her tummy were fluttering so much it made her even
more nervous.

She picked up the sirme dani and did her beautiful eyes. She WAS
wearing black and red shalwar kameez today. Fitting and cute. She
began to put the red n black paranda into her hair. As she was
braiding...JATT...SNUCk unto her room. Hay Hay...JAAt Said.

QUeenie...Startled at first smiled at him and through a pillow at him

FInally she said:

Jaldi niklo
Amee ajay gi
NIklo nah

And he just smiled
with his arms crossed
just looking at her admiring her

just as she was about to leave the room
he grabbed her paranda....

pulling her hair....


oh surmay dani???????????

but main to Eye liner use kerti hoon
paranda???????
kabhi nahi pehna itnay baal hi nahin hain
ok red and black are my fav colours


ufff jutt ki yeh himmat
touba touba astaghfaar

dolly good

Posted on 12/21/2005 1:08:40 PM

oh dolly there is a cofusion
yeh jatt gher kay ander kaisay aaya
aur amman jee nay poochha nahin yeh kon hai jo kitchen tak chala aaya

Posted on 12/21/2005 1:11:52 PM

ahan right answer Dolly g

Posted on 12/21/2005 3:22:46 PM

QUEEN VICTORIA:
oh dolly there is a cofusion
yeh jatt gher kay ander kaisay aaya
aur amman jee nay poochha nahin yeh kon hai jo kitchen tak chala aaya


He was your childhood friend
Your ama knows him
He's like her son

Posted on 12/29/2005 5:29:20 AM

hmm

Posted on 12/29/2005 2:03:31 PM

dooly on holidaysssssss

Posted on 12/31/2005 5:58:30 PM

I cant write

Posted on 1/7/2006 6:27:54 AM

take a break

Posted on 1/7/2006 12:36:43 PM

qitni lambhi


Posted on 1/13/2006 3:54:50 AM

aa jao break khatam

Posted on 1/16/2006 2:07:34 PM