shairrrrrrrrr

bata kar to deko...if its en excuse or not..j/k[;)]

Posted on 3/3/2003 6:52:25 PM

okay ... I never compose my sheir .. ... i believe if i typed in english like they loss their beauty... and if I put these shair in URDU... u can't understand... [:p] thats the problem ....

Warmth of Love

Posted on 3/4/2003 3:13:41 AM

[;)]

Warmth of Love

Posted on 3/4/2003 3:14:23 AM

dosselpoh

itni zoor say ankh mari ha

Posted on 3/4/2003 4:17:42 AM

Rani.........
lagta hai kisi building ki bohat upar walay apt mein rahti ho........... issi liay unchi cheez ho

TERAY KARDAR KO ALFAZ KA PEKAR DAY DOON
INTQAMAN MEIN ZAMANAY KO YEH PATHAR DAY DOON

TU MERA SAATH NA CHHORAY TO HAI MERA WADA
MEIN ZAMANAY KO TERAY NAAM PAY CHAKKAR DAY DOON

DAYKH KITNA HAI TERI BHOOK KA EHSAAS MUJHAY
TU AGAR PET PAY BANDHAY TO MEIN PATHAR DAY DOON

Posted on 3/4/2003 4:41:06 AM

quote:
Originally posted by dosselpoh

itni zoor say ankh mari ha

well tum ko nahi mari ... jiss ko mari hay us nay kuch nahi kaha ... [;)].... waysay main nay tu araam say hi mari thiee.. yeh itna zoar kahan say aa giya hay iss main [:o] [:I]

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/4/2003 5:36:41 AM

quote:
Originally posted by WARMTH OF LOVE

okay ... I never compose my sheir .. ... i believe if i typed in english like they loss their beauty... and if I put these shair in URDU... u can't understand... [:p] thats the problem ....

Warmth of Love

pir seh excuse..lol ankeh marnah choro..aur aap urdu meh hi deh do,
i'l make my mum read it for me! [:)]

Posted on 3/4/2003 1:28:43 PM

okay... good .. but I never publish them on JB...[:I]. j/k

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/5/2003 2:39:09 AM

pir seh excuse....lol j/k acha rehne do

Posted on 3/5/2003 6:02:02 PM

nahi rahnay dayta.... now I'll post my poetry very soon...sab ko dekhna paray giee j/k

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/6/2003 12:28:24 AM

tik hai aap ki marji! i'l be lookin forward to it...[;)]

Posted on 3/6/2003 1:46:54 AM

no.. .aab sab dekhein gay ..... (-_-)

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/6/2003 2:40:04 AM

Daykhnay walay tujay ab kay iss tarah daykhein gay........
Samnay rakhein gay pani ka glass or uss mein tera aks daykhein gay......
or phir halka sa halain gay glass ko
or glass mein tera raqs daykhein gay.......

(been long since read it, any error..... sorry)

Posted on 3/6/2003 4:20:58 AM

lol... it is okay.... don't worry

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/6/2003 4:50:35 AM

gotta worry boy.......
kal ko poet hazrat uthh kay sue hi na kar den na..............

Posted on 3/6/2003 5:05:57 AM

worry not... again [:p]

koi kuch nahi kahay ga... [:p]

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/6/2003 5:15:17 AM

alrie bro

Posted on 3/6/2003 6:14:08 PM

yes.. I'm here...

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/6/2003 8:44:38 PM

me too[;)]

Posted on 3/6/2003 10:38:34 PM

but u r not here now :'(

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/6/2003 11:53:32 PM

Sakhan

DUKHON MAIN MUSKURANA PAR GAYA TO
TUMHAIN AANSO CHUPANA PAR GAYA TO
A MERI YAAD MAIN GUM HONEWALAY
AGAR MUJH KO BHULANA PAR GAYA TO
YAQEEN HAI JIS PE KHUD SE BHEE ZIADA
USAY GAR AAZMANA PAR GAYA TO
HAMESHA SOOCH KAR NAZDEEK HONA
AGAR PHIR DURR JANA PAR GAYA TO

Posted on 3/9/2003 12:30:27 AM

nice... one

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé

Posted on 3/9/2003 5:00:08 AM

zebii

well real nice ghazal

Posted on 3/9/2003 5:11:11 AM

cool shair Sakahn...plz get som frndship ones..i lke dem more[:)]

Posted on 3/9/2003 5:32:33 PM

kiu otar jaty hein dil mein essy log
jin sse kismat ke sitary nahi milty....,,,, beautiful

Posted on 3/9/2003 5:56:22 PM

ab hum kuch arz karai

Posted on 3/9/2003 6:37:04 PM

acha kya arz karne hai?

Posted on 3/9/2003 6:41:28 PM

agar talash karo gai to mil hi jai ga > magar kon tumhai hamari tarah chahai ga >>> zarror daikha ga yoh chahato bhari nazroon sai > magar yoh ankhain hamari kahan sai lai ga .

Posted on 3/9/2003 7:08:44 PM