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Tum se poocha nahen

Tum se poocha nahen

aur sochney lagi tum ko

agar koi baat ho to

aankh band kar lernaa

jo main dekhoon to

preshaan na tum ho jana..

bas unkahi sihi

koi bhi baat kar lenaa..


by, me (A )
Posted on 11/29/2005 12:24:45 AM
nice
Posted on 11/29/2005 12:36:05 AM
thnx u
Posted on 11/30/2005 2:55:28 AM
Good...


Keep Writing...


The Best Way to Improve the Poetry is to Read it Again And Again...And you will find the things to change in it by yourself...

Keep Writing ....
Posted on 11/30/2005 10:27:08 PM
thnx u all... I will proof read Nb ... Take Care...
Posted on 12/3/2005 9:50:20 AM
Posted on 12/3/2005 10:05:16 AM
achhi kaawish hai
Posted on 12/3/2005 7:33:07 PM
nice, dreamji
Posted on 12/8/2005 10:23:43 PM
thnx u all.....
Posted on 12/9/2005 6:29:03 AM
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