a new so called "ENDLESS STORY"

Thats better ur first storry was jus getting bore.jus wrote in 1 or 2 sentence,its good idea from qv

Posted on 2/4/2006 10:34:34 AM

yaar i cant cook something short..lolz..and use to add lines in the story..so we had to write long..now as more r coming in..ill try to limit my creativeness

Posted on 2/4/2006 10:44:28 AM

haan its notur creativeness,Sab books ke meherbani ho giii

Posted on 2/4/2006 11:07:34 AM

max pow3r:
Frank These "Bachiyan" are Bit Bold Haaan.Inhein Wese he handle kero Jese Yeh chahti hain

kya matlab hai is baat ka max
plz explain

Posted on 2/4/2006 12:34:05 PM

o jee ishtory kahan reh gaye
sohniye

jahan say tum entry maro wahin say naya scene daal diya kero ishtory main

last story itnay bhiyanak mor per aa gaye thi kay touba

waisay bhi franky maar kha kha kay thak gay tha so achanak oos ki aankh khul gaye

aur story the end

ab new story start ho gai hai
aur oos main bhi akhir franky aa hoi gaya hai

Posted on 2/4/2006 12:38:49 PM

QUEEN VICTORIA:
Lets start a new one

kisi jagha aik chhota tha bacha tha yahi koi 5 yrs(oos ka naam franky nahin tha )
woh apnay maan baap ka iklota beta tha

Frankenstein:
uske baap sahi ameer tha (aur mazay ki baat yeh kay uska naam bhi frank nhi tha..lolz..)laikin woh khud aik nihayat hee lallo aur nalayak larka tha..

QUEEN VICTORIA:
ager woh larka aisa tha to hum oos ka naam frank hi suppose ker laitay hain

haan to frank to bohat nalayak larka tha lakin oos kay parents bohat larakay thay her waqt aapis main lartay rehtay thay...........

agay kya hua frank?

Posted on 2/4/2006 12:50:01 PM

Imraan

Oey ba'shaaho
      meri story kithey gayeeeeeeeeeeee
      hainnnnnn
(ok I dont know anymore punjabi) so u ppl have finished my story well good.

   As i am a new user here so plz can anybody tell me where shall i get my poll question which I sent abt HRITHIK & ABHISHEK?

Posted on 2/4/2006 2:20:07 PM

and the sotry continues:
aik din uske maa baap hasbe mamool lar rahe thay aur ghar ka main door open tha..frank ghoomta ghoomta bahar chala gaya..it was night..and they used to live near a jungle...

Posted on 2/4/2006 2:26:54 PM

SohniKuddi

since franky was the scariest thing in the jungle, his safety was not an issue.

Posted on 2/6/2006 2:08:12 AM

the female gorilla took franky with her..and started raising him..

p.s:for further details see george of the jungle

Posted on 2/6/2006 7:37:19 AM

the female gorilla took franky with her..and started raising him..

she adopted franky

time passing
now franky accepted him self as a gorilla too
he learned to walk like gorillas
chinghaar bhi marrnay laga

aik din jungle main aik shikaari aagay.............

Posted on 2/6/2006 4:43:03 PM

well franky become a bit of everything..a tarzan one could say....now franky was young handsome lad..lolz..the hunters one day came in the deep jungle there was this girl jane

amongst them too..

Posted on 2/6/2006 6:57:33 PM

so the girl jane found franky hanging on a tree branch
he was eating bananas
suddenly he saw jane
and starting
khe khe khe khe

Posted on 2/6/2006 7:35:25 PM

SohniKuddi

Franky hung uside down from the tree, in order to get a better look at Jane, who (aint it ursula?....lolz) walked by, franky's presence, yet unoticed. He yelled out to his Monkey Friends the army of "Shikaari" were ambushed, the monkey attacked.........

and Jane was kidnapped

Posted on 2/6/2006 8:54:40 PM

sunddenly jane's nervous break down n she died...........
lol finsish

Posted on 2/6/2006 9:16:43 PM

Bazigaar

laholawalakuwat

Posted on 2/6/2006 9:19:10 PM

mer gayi ab
Duaye kher perhoo aur allah allah kero

Posted on 2/6/2006 9:22:57 PM

Bazigaar

Allah

Posted on 2/6/2006 9:24:25 PM

Ab kahani ka climax mein he diaa kron gaaa

Posted on 2/6/2006 9:27:46 PM

damn sh*t yaar..
bari mushkil se jane dhoondi thi tune mardi..lolz
mera tu abhi love scene bhi shuru na hua tha ke
zalim duniya ne jane ko mardia..
next jo bhi koi story shuru kare frank jr. ko mat dalo yaar beech mai..har dafa L..not fair

Posted on 2/7/2006 9:17:36 AM

lolz ab auo na line per

Posted on 2/7/2006 2:25:45 PM

aray jane mer gaye to kya hua
after death of jane her sis enjalina was crying crying crying all da time
franky was a kind hearted person
he felt so much pitty for her
he offered some bananaz to enjalina
Enjalina was surprised to see franky.................

agay kya hua

Posted on 2/7/2006 5:13:25 PM

Use Khansi bhi thi Aur jab woh khasnti thi Us ke mun se khoon nikalta tha TU Dr Max ne use T.B daignose ker di Aur woh chand dinno bad chal basi
Goooooooooooooooood bye

Posted on 2/7/2006 7:42:08 PM

touba max
aap franky ki kahani ko agay na berhnay daina

ok
new one

aaj ki taza khaber
Punjab police nay aik bohat baray criminal ko griftaar ker liya hai........

woh criminal salakhon kay peechhay betha hai aur sochon main gum hai........

flash back starts......

aik gaon hai sehan main aik nouumer(teen ager) larka chara kaat raha hai...............(oos ka naam frank nahin tha bcz wo aik paindoo hay

)

agay...........

Posted on 2/7/2006 8:18:20 PM

charra kat,te kat,te use kheyal aya woh gauon ki zindagi se bezaar hai aur apni zindagi mein reangeeniyan chahta hai.yehi soch ker us ne sheher jane ka fesla kia

Posted on 2/7/2006 8:23:46 PM

agey choro....

Posted on 2/7/2006 8:24:44 PM

usne apna cheezain aur paisay ikhthay kiay aur shehr kay liye train ki ticket book karai aur sawar hogya..woh aik seedha saadha banda tha..shehr pohanchtay hee ksi nosar baaz ne usay loot khaya..ab uske pass koi paisa na tha aur woh bhooka bhi tha..

Posted on 2/8/2006 3:32:39 AM

woh jab chaltay chaltay thak gaya to aik foot path per beth kay hasrat say samnay khari dahi bhalay ki rehdi ko daikhnay laga.......

Posted on 2/8/2006 12:30:29 PM