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Sagar jaisiey aankhein

neeche jani dada ki dokannnnnnnn
uppper rozi ka makaaaannnnnnnnnn
dada making patti wala paaannnnn
for rozi jii s abba jaaannnnnnnn

wah wahhhhhhhhh
kya baat hai re sallll teri
adaab arz hai
Posted on 10/26/2003 4:19:00 AM
hahahahahahahha nice Sall
Posted on 10/26/2003 5:09:37 AM
is jahan ki nahi hein tumhari ankein    assmaan say yeh kiss nay utari ankein
Posted on 10/26/2003 5:26:14 AM
wah wah paa jeeeeeee kiya baat hai
Posted on 10/26/2003 5:58:57 AM
mine (poem) is betterrrrrrr.. uhhh
Posted on 10/26/2003 4:30:22 PM
SALL:
neechhhhhhhhhe paaaaaaaan ki dokaaan
uppper rozi ka makaaaaaaannnnnn
neeeeche janiiiii ki dokannnnnnnnnnnn
upper rozi ka makaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnn


lolz
Posted on 10/26/2003 7:36:54 PM
Ya sall ur poem waz better
Posted on 10/26/2003 11:27:01 PM
yesssssssssssssss
Posted on 10/27/2003 3:31:27 AM
Posted on 10/27/2003 4:50:57 AM
SALL:
neeche jani dada ki dokannnnnnnn
uppper rozi ka makaaaannnnnnnnnn
dada making patti wala paaannnnn
for rozi jii s abba jaaannnnnnnn

wah wahhhhhhhhh
kya baat hai re sallll teri
adaab arz hai


kha kay patti wala paan
pakarwai jani kay kaan
Wah Wah kya baat hai
Murgha banay Jani bhaijaan
Posted on 10/27/2003 1:14:13 PM
heheeheeheee......

ye jani bhai ki khichai hoing.. kahin rozi na aan tapke,, warna me and queeny ll b @bisti.com
khekhekhekheheee
Posted on 10/27/2003 3:51:51 PM
hey .com kaysi ho ?
Posted on 11/10/2003 2:05:25 AM
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