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My poem :)

ummmm ok like u really dun have to read this
I wrote it sum 6 months back so bear wid it [angel]

               What If ......
wat if ...

the air becomes unbearbly chilled

wid glom n cloudz ur days r filled

or wen ur caughtup in a storm

i set a balze 2 make u warm



wat if...

in times wen abandined u feel

i kiss ur wounds 2 make them heal

or wen there is no one with u 4 miles

i fill ur journey wid lafter n smiles



wat if....

dear u go astry

i hold ur hand and guide da way

n all through the winding road

i unveil 4 u a majistic world untold



but most of all.....

wat if one day i end this game

hold ur hand n takin ur name

(tell me dear wat will u do)

wen i finally confess i love u

........ tell me wat then?.....


Posted on 4/16/2003 11:11:07 PM

u sure it's urs....falsafi....:D.

Posted on 4/17/2003 12:31:37 AM

hum good job falsafi i dont get it you and poems

Posted on 4/17/2003 1:38:06 AM

it seems as if
What If ......
it would be written by u
what if....
u would bring us ur own stuff
What if......
just kidiing...dude dont mind....it surely was
What if......[8)]

Posted on 4/17/2003 1:51:19 AM

hahhahh

Posted on 4/17/2003 1:52:46 AM

pretty good stuff... :)

Posted on 4/17/2003 4:14:56 AM

good falsafi... Good work done

Zebii lolz   

Posted on 4/17/2003 5:33:58 AM

jeez thanx :)

Posted on 4/17/2003 11:23:57 AM

ahaaan.. nice poem.. im amazed k ek chota sa bacha itni achi poem likh sakta hae :p


Posted on 4/17/2003 2:46:55 PM

em 20 :) ummm legaly hunk?? w/e!

Posted on 4/17/2003 5:49:06 PM

lol. okie if u say so


Posted on 4/17/2003 5:56:08 PM

quote:
im amazed k ek chota sa bacha itni achi poem likh sakta hae :p

he proved

Posted on 4/18/2003 4:20:38 AM