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Subha`s poetry

Very Good

"Baat asal mainn aik hi hay, Koi Bhoojhay Per"
"Aadhi Ghazal ik forum pay Aadhi Doojay Per !"

Adaab arZ hay
Posted on 10/9/2004 7:08:44 PM
yeh bhi kisi kisi ka kaam hai
Posted on 10/9/2004 7:19:29 PM
Posted on 10/9/2004 7:24:04 PM
Posted on 10/10/2004 12:31:15 AM
WAH, Subhanallah

"Bawajood Yeh Keh Per-o-Baal na thay Adam kay"
"Waann yeh pnhcha keh Farishtay ka bhi Maqdoor na tha"
Posted on 10/10/2004 10:24:21 AM
Ik Khawab

Janay kaun saa Khaab Chupaa hai

Maree inn pur num aankhoun main

ik ajeeb si khushboo rachee hai

maree inn chund saansoun main

na janay kioun mera dil khou saa jata hai

bahaar kay rangeen nazaaroun main

yaa shayed yeh koi weham hai mera

in khoubsourat shaamoun main

jaisay koi chahyaa houaa hai

Khaaboun main khayaloun main

yaa shayed kisi ki yaad ka rang hai

bikhraa hai phir say inn aankhoun main

jaanay kaun saa khaab chupaa hai

maree inn pur num aankhoun main .........


Posted on 10/10/2004 6:16:04 PM
"Jb ka Admin Bannay ka Khuwab ?? "
Posted on 10/10/2004 6:38:20 PM
new_beau:
"Jb ka Admin Bannay ka Khuwab ?? "



new_beau ka khawab
Posted on 10/10/2004 6:50:18 PM
This is not my Khuwab.

But Beware..Jis din mainn nay yeh Khuwab dekh liya..Mainn Such bhi ker kay dikha doon ga
Posted on 10/10/2004 7:20:35 PM
thx new beu
Posted on 10/10/2004 11:15:07 PM
Welcome Janubaby jee
Posted on 10/11/2004 10:23:16 AM
Posted on 10/15/2004 12:20:37 AM
Posted on 10/15/2004 12:22:08 AM
hmmmmmmmmm
Posted on 10/15/2004 11:37:50 AM
lately i read some poetry, liked it very much.
kuch is tarah se tha:

suuroj ko ghar main basane ka sooch raha hai
bhuul gaya hai ke khud maum ka ghar rakhta hai

(maybe a bit wrong said but was something like it, kitni sachi baat hai.....)
Posted on 10/15/2004 11:47:54 AM
nice sash ji
Posted on 10/15/2004 11:52:26 AM
thanks!
Posted on 10/15/2004 11:56:18 AM
apni baat keh kar bhool gai hain ... no thankss agay yaad karwaon ya khud aa jay ga
Posted on 10/15/2004 12:28:17 PM
Posted on 10/15/2004 12:54:42 PM
ab is main kahan hasna thaaaa
Posted on 10/15/2004 7:15:58 PM
tarash where r u
Posted on 10/16/2004 11:30:21 PM
Posted on 10/27/2004 2:58:25 PM
tarash:
yeh bhi kisi kisi ka kaam hai




Tarash khoye ho tum kahaaaan
Posted on 7/13/2005 11:40:22 PM
AINA AINA KHUWABOON MEIN
KUCH KARCHIYAN HAIN ANKHOON MEIN
MEHKI MEHKI YAADON KI
KHUSHBOOEN HAIN SANSOON MEIN
ADHORI NEEND KI KARWTEEN
KUCH RATJHAGE RAKHE HAIN TAQOON MEIN
KIYA SEHRA KIYA GULISTAAN
PANKHRI PANKHRI DUNDHA TUJHE GULAABON MEIN
KHON SE SINCHI THEEN JO TASWEEREN
ABB CHUPA RAKHI HAIN HIJHABOON MEIN



SUBHA
Posted on 7/18/2005 5:39:54 AM


MERE HUMNAFS MERE RAQSHE JAAN
ZARA TEHR TU.TOON CHALA KAHAN
TERE PAOON KI MUSAFTEN
MAIN CHURA K RAKHON KAHAN
MERE DIL KI ZAMEEN PE
TERA PARAO THA KIYA GHARI BAR KA
AB IS DIL K DAAG KO
TUMHI KAHO MAIN CHUPAON KAHAN
MERE HUM NAFS MERE RAQSHE JAAN
ZARA TEHR TOON K DIKHAON TUJHE MAIN
ZAHM ZAHM JIGAR K
KUCH TOTEY ASHQ ANKHOON K
HARF HARF YADEEN TERI
BATLAO TO MAIN JALAON KAHAN
SUBHA
Posted on 7/18/2005 5:43:34 AM
Always here to Admire You
Posted on 7/18/2005 11:44:45 AM
new_beau:
Always here to Admire You



thanx NB


kiya ho raha hay aaj kal?
Posted on 7/18/2005 4:11:39 PM
thanku pari
Posted on 7/18/2005 5:04:17 PM
subha:
   
new_beau:
Always here to Admire You



thanx NB


kiya ho raha hay aaj kal?


Ho Kuchh Nahin Raha...Honay waala hay jaldi hi JB per Keep Waiting
Posted on 7/18/2005 9:16:40 PM
Ahhan aisa kiya hone wala hay jb per tell to karen na
Posted on 7/18/2005 9:50:46 PM
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