Subha`s poetry

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subha38011.9553587963
Posted 22 Dec 2003

friend_16 says
hey Excellent peotry Subah!
Posted 19 Feb 2004

new_beau says
~Fragi~ said:

may i ask one

Question

subha ka naam subha kiyon hai

akhir kiyoon hai subha

kiya reason hai

dona take it lite

me serious

coz

dona understand k aisa bhi naam hota hai

hain


tell me na


zaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrr



Good Poem Kidoo..
Posted 20 Feb 2004

~Fragi~ says
new_beau said:

~Fragi~ said:

may i ask one

Question

subha ka naam subha kiyon hai

akhir kiyoon hai subha

kiya reason hai

dona take it lite

me serious

coz

dona understand k aisa bhi naam hota hai

hain


tell me na


zaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrr



Good Poem Kidoo..


shukria .. apkey zair aser reh kar aab hum ko bhi poetry aati ja rahi hai
Posted 20 Feb 2004

tarash says
dosron ki chura kar kido bhi shair ho gya hai
Posted 21 Feb 2004

new_beau says
tarash said:

dosron ki chura kar kido bhi shair ho gya hai



poet hona Lazmi Nahin...ACHHA INTIKHAAB bhi Achhay Zouq ki Nishani hota hay..And Kidoo is Presenting a Good Collection.....
Posted 21 Feb 2004

~Fragi~ says
shukaria NB
Posted 21 Feb 2004

tarash says
new_beau said:

tarash said:

dosron ki chura kar kido bhi shair ho gya hai



poet hona Lazmi Nahin...ACHHA INTIKHAAB bhi Achhay Zouq ki Nishani hota hay..And Kidoo is Presenting a Good Collection.....


yes u r 100% right tarash38039.1749305556
Posted 22 Feb 2004

~Fragi~ said:

new_beau said:

~Fragi~ said:

may i ask one

Question

subha ka naam subha kiyon hai

akhir kiyoon hai subha

kiya reason hai

dona take it lite

me serious

coz

dona understand k aisa bhi naam hota hai

hain


tell me na


zaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrr



Good Poem Kidoo..


shukria .. apkey zair aser reh kar aab hum ko bhi poetry aati ja rahi hai



ok kakay chalo ab Twinkle Twinkle little star
sunao shabash
Posted 26 Feb 2004

Guest_005 says
queen victoria said:

~Fragi~ said:

new_beau said:

~Fragi~ said:

may i ask one

Question

subha ka naam subha kiyon hai

akhir kiyoon hai subha

kiya reason hai

dona take it lite

me serious

coz

dona understand k aisa bhi naam hota hai

hain


tell me na


zaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrr



Good Poem Kidoo..


shukria .. apkey zair aser reh kar aab hum ko bhi poetry aati ja rahi hai



ok kakay chalo ab Twinkle Twinkle little star
sunao shabash
   
Posted 27 Feb 2004

tarash says
kidoo twinkle twinkle nahin sunaey ga to aur kya sunaey ga

waisey kidoo itna bhi kidoo nahin hai
Posted 01 Mar 2004

where is poetry ?
Posted 03 Mar 2004

kiddo ki????? abhi sunaye ga na








lagta hai factory main strike hai
Posted 05 Mar 2004

Guest_005 says
Posted 05 Mar 2004

subha says
Posted 06 Mar 2004

rogi_jogi says
waH Wah Kyaa BaaT hai Jee BerrY GuD


Terri Shairii PArhNa BayhisaaB chahtay hain
TAreeF kaa RAkhna nahin hisab chahtay hain


GuD GoiNGo Jee
Posted 06 Mar 2004

subha says
thanku thanku aap ki zara nawazish hay hajoor k khajoor
Posted 06 Mar 2004

Ashii says
nahi nahiiiii
that cant b subahhh


mere se kyun nahi hoti aisi poetry
Posted 06 Mar 2004

subha says
SALL said:

nahi nahiiiii
that cant b subahhh


mere se kyun nahi hoti aisi poetry





subha kiyoon nahi kar sakhti



aap say bataon kiyoon nahi ho sakti aisi poetry
Posted 06 Mar 2004

Superbe Subha
Posted 07 Mar 2004

tarash says
weldone
Posted 07 Mar 2004

subha says
thaaaaaaaaanx


hehhehehe jb ney mujhay shair bana diya
Posted 08 Mar 2004

~Fragi~ says
subha said:

thaaaaaaaaanx


hehhehehe jb ney mujhay shair bana diya





kaisee ajeeb shaira hai yeh
Posted 09 Mar 2004

subha says
~Fragi~ said:

subha said:

thaaaaaaaaanx


hehhehehe jb ney mujhay shair bana diya





kaisee ajeeb shaira hai yeh




khair hay na kiddo beta
Posted 09 Mar 2004

hope says
Tujhe Yaad Karti Hoon..
Aanken band kar bhi, hum tera deedar karte hain,
Aye sanam, hum to sirf tum se pyar karte hain.
Lakh chaah kar bhi main tujhe bhula nahi saktay,
Saans rahte, teri tasvir aankhon se hataa nahi saktay.
Aakhiri pal tak o bewafaa, tujehe yaad karti hoon,
Teri yaadon ko seene mein basaa kar chalti hoon.
Posted 09 Mar 2004

hope says
WARMTH OF LOVE said:

Superbe Subha



"teri zindagi ke lamehe main har pal nikhaar aaye,
gulshan bhi ho paresha is kadar bahar aaye....."
Posted 09 Mar 2004

subha says
wah waaah waaaaaaaaaaah kiya baat hay beta ji
Posted 09 Mar 2004

hope says
hi subha
Posted 09 Mar 2004

hope says
would u like to be friends
Posted 09 Mar 2004

subha says
aik subha kiyoon sara jb aap ka friend
Posted 09 Mar 2004

Guest_002 says
chubhaaaaaaaaaaa itni asaaan poetry talti ho aap
hope ,yeh poetry ap ti apni he ya tehin che uthai ?

for both of ya girls


sawaaaaaaaaaan sawaaaaaaaaaan sawaaaaaaaaaan
Posted 10 Mar 2004

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