Subha`s poetry

tarash

Queen Victoria:
nice oetry sub

yeh oetry poetry ki naee qism hai kya??

Posted on 3/21/2004 8:11:40 AM

tarash

weldone SUBHA
good poetry

Posted on 3/21/2004 8:13:17 AM

tarash

Posted on 3/21/2004 4:10:00 PM

Ashii

yep it s a bit difficult
coz punjabi/saraiki mix hai,, but when u read it with english translation to behtar samajh aata hai

here s something for u subah

translation :
they filled their water pots and left
by their own turn though some are left,
some have been gone ; i seek my turn,
with the extending arms in vain

with all the best of ornaments,
embellished i with necklaces,
and bangles on my arms ring,
and ear-rings from sides swing,
but my beloved gave no glimpse,
adornement has been wasted since.

they filled their water pots and left
by their own turn though some are left.

dyed are hands and dyed are feet,
head hair plaited in fait, and sweet
anointed, scented with fragrance,
with beetle leaf, lips elegance,
teeth are shining plated sweet,
some have succeeded. I have lost
I have forgotten home and hearth,
breathless i wait to heave a breath.

they filled their water pots and left
by their own turn though some are left.

Bullah if tread ye path to Love
then you would know value price of love
though various tactics i had played,
but all my ventures have dismayed.
now i am dumb, and deaf and mad
i have been humbled with my squad.

they filled their water pots and left
by their own turn though some are left.

Posted on 3/21/2004 4:32:18 PM

subha

ooohhh thanx sall

soooo nice of ya

woh pari hay aap nay (jis tan lagya ishq kamal)

i love ittt

Posted on 3/21/2004 8:12:31 PM

subha

thaaanx tarash

Posted on 3/21/2004 8:13:11 PM

Guest_005

guud guud

Posted on 3/21/2004 9:54:43 PM

Ashii

jiss tan lageya ishq kamal
nache be surr te be taal

beauuutiiifullll..
i ll post it s translation later

Posted on 3/22/2004 1:33:52 PM

Guest_005

tarash:

Queen Victoria:
nice oetry sub

yeh oetry poetry ki naee qism hai kya??

may be..

Posted on 3/22/2004 9:58:30 PM

subha

SALL:
jiss tan lageya ishq kamal
nache be surr te be taal

beauuutiiifullll..
i ll post it s translation later

soo nice thaanx sall

thanku Adiiiiii

Posted on 3/23/2004 2:13:39 AM

tarash

sall nein ko kamal kar dya hai

Posted on 3/23/2004 7:32:59 AM

Guest_005

tarash:
sall nein ko kamal kar dya hai

achaaa

Posted on 3/23/2004 9:43:45 AM

Ashii

kamal kar diya.. kab

thnx

who s inflicted by ardent whips
he dances with irregular steps

(dard mand nu koi na chere. . . . )
touch him not whi with pain in fraught,
who himself has embraced and caught,
love vanquishes the wheel of birth,
this comes to mind when love in mirth

who s inflicted by ardent whips
he dances with irregular steps

(jiss ne weis ishaq da keeta. . . .)
who has adopted course of love
decree he had from Gracious love
when drinks he cup of love from Love
no question-answer come to glove.

who s inflicted by ardent whips
he dances with irregular steps

(jiss de andar waseya yaar. . . .)
in whose heart His love resides,
frankly he would publicise
then he cares not the critic's tune,
dances in ecstasy to bloom.

who s inflicted by ardent whips
he dances with irregular steps

(Bulleha! shoh nagar sach paya. . . .)
Bullah i've found the real source,
the cries of falsehood in remorse,
for the truthful, truth declares,
i had to glimpse of lovely snares.

who s inflicted by ardent whips
he dances with irregular steps.

Posted on 3/23/2004 8:50:30 PM

subha

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx Sall