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new_beau

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Aadaab Bazm-e-Sukhan kay Saathiyo

Iss mehfil mainn Her Roz ik Naya MISRAH aap kay saamnay paish kiya jaye ga. Yeh aik Udhoora Misrah hoga. Jis ka Misra-e-Oola ya Misra-e-Sani aap ko Talash kerna hoga.

Yehi nahin balkeh iss kay saath saath aap ko Iss diyey gaye misray ko Tarrah Misrah Gerdaantay huaye iss per Taba'a Aazmayee bhi kerni ho gi yani ...

Aap kay Khayal mainn agar aap shayer hainn tou aap Diyey gaye Misray say Shair Kaisay Mukammal kertay.

AAK KA MISRAH

"Bohat Shore suntay thay Pehloo mainn Dil ka"
Posted 27 Sep 2004
new_beau says
NEW MISRAH

Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
Posted 22 Jan 2006
Ashii says
new_beau said:

NEW MISRAH

Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay


han jii han jii hannn jiiiiiiii
fit haiiii jiii

me uss Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
me gir paru to meri pastiyon ka saathi ho

diyaar e noor mei teera shabon ka saathi ho
koi to ho jo meri wehshaton ka saathi ho


iftekhar arif
Posted 23 Jan 2006
Ashii says
yar yeh ANOUSHY kaun hai
its such a cuttte nick

mera dil karta hai isse kuchi puchii karne ko
Posted 23 Jan 2006
QUEEN VICTORIA says
to ker lo naya pachhi hai


Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay

taba aazmaaye

"aamad" abhi nahin ho rahi
Posted 23 Jan 2006
Freddy says
thank you everyone



app sub ki muhabat sei aik din mera be majmuaan kalaam chupay ga........jo kay nayaab ho ga

thank you....thank you
Posted 23 Jan 2006
hakona says

Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
2 rupay , 2 rupay , 2 rupay
Posted 23 Jan 2006
Freddy says
Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
hayeeeeeeeeeeee! nadaan um'r kay ye chooor jazbay
Posted 23 Jan 2006
QUEEN VICTORIA says
Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
aakhri tammana hai yahi,ger mera rub mujh say poochhay
Posted 24 Jan 2006
new_beau says
SALL said:

new_beau said:

NEW MISRAH

Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay


han jii han jii hannn jiiiiiiii
fit haiiii jiii

me uss Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
me gir paru to meri pastiyon ka saathi ho
diyaar e noor mei teera shabon ka saathi ho
koi to ho jo meri wehshaton ka saathi ho


iftekhar arif


wELDONE

SALL said:

yar yeh ANOUSHY kaun hai
its such a cuttte nick

mera dil karta hai isse kuchi puchii karne ko



Kuchhi Puchhi not allowed in this Topic

hakona said:


Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
2 rupay , 2 rupay , 2 rupay



Well this is a Great HAKONA type Taba Aazmayee///I like It

Freddy said:

Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
hayeeeeeeeeeeee! nadaan um'r kay ye chooor jazbay



Well CRAFTED koshish...Behter kero..Aur Apnay Naam ker lo..Poori Ghazal Likho..Its really Good...

QUEEN VICTORIA said:

Mainn uss kay Haath na aaoon, Woh Mera ho kay Rahay
aakhri tammana hai yahi,ger mera rub mujh say poochhay



Hum aap say kahainn gay keh aap ko Koshishhhh Bohat Achhi Rahi
Posted 24 Jan 2006
new_beau says
NEW MISRAH

Bohat Dinonn say Tabiyat meri Udaas nahin
Posted 24 Jan 2006
Ashii says
kuchi puchiiiiii
kyun nahi alllow
anoushhhyyy




not sure par shayd aise hai

guzar rahe hein ajeeb marhalon se deeda o dil
Bohat Dinonn say Tabiyat meri Udaas nahin
Posted 24 Jan 2006
hakona says
sher tu mukamal nahi kaar sakta magar tabazmayee zaroor kar sakta hoon

ahhhhm ahhhm aarz keya hai

Bohot Dinoo Sei Tabeyaat Meri Udass Nahin
sabab! unn ka Maikay Jana ,tu nahi !
Posted 25 Jan 2006
QUEEN VICTORIA says
hakona ki taba aazmaie main izafa......


Bohat Dinonn say Tabiyat meri Udaas nahin
wo maikay gai hai,so wajha aas paas nahin





koocha e yaran main khushiyan barasti hain aaj kal
so Bohat Dinonn say Tabiyat meri Udaas nahin


Posted 25 Jan 2006
Doctor Sam says
Freddy said:

thank you everyone



app sub ki muhabat sei aik din mera be majmuaan kalaam chupay ga........jo kay nayaab ho ga

thank you....thank you



hum zaroor khareedain gay, balkay khareedna kya hey aap hamain gift kar dena..
Posted 25 Jan 2006
hakona says
shukira shkria meri tabazmay pay be tabaazmay karnay ki.....hum be freddy ki tabazmayee ki aesi ki taesi kartay hain.

Main uss kay hath na aaoon woe mera hoo kay rahay
Main uss sei bartan dhulwayon,woe sub dho kay rukhay

dei kay jhardooo jo muskura kay mujay dekhay
pakrda due Taaki,zara saaf kaar aab ye pukhay

Mercedies main ghoomon, betha kay apni saheliyaan
woe dostoon kay sath khayeee busoon kay dhakhayy

pakay hooon kooftay, sath salad ore bariyaani
main paeeet bhaar kay khaooon ore woe sif chukhay

hooooo pehliii tareeeeekh, milayyyy salaray usssssay
mai uss kay hath na aaoon woe sub meray hath pay rukhay
Posted 25 Jan 2006
Doctor Sam says


hum kehtay hain kya baat hey...kya baat hey...
Posted 25 Jan 2006
QUEEN VICTORIA says
poori gazal
Posted 26 Jan 2006
Ashii says
akalbando !!!
mera galt answer hi koi correct kar deta,, apni apni pari hui hai sab ko



mujhe yeh darr hai teri aarzu na mit jaae
bohot din se tabiyat meri udaas nahi




haae oay hakona maharaaj koi takhalus bhi rakh lete

lagta hai pooori ghazal deig pe beth k likhi hai
Posted 26 Jan 2006
Freddy says
kya baat hai app kay zook ki dr sam jee....aik kya jitnay chupay gey sub app he ko bhejwanyeen gey.

ama chootay khan sahib......app tu ustadoo kay be mun ko aanay lagay ..........hakona mahraaj zara khosh kay nakhoon lejeyee jub be koi ghazal kaheen nechay apnay ustaday mohtaram yani kay freddy urff barday khan sahib ka naam zaroor likheen .........warna aaaak kar dein gey bata detay hain.

mujay ye daar hai teri aarzoo na mit jayee
bohot din sei tabeyaat meri udass nahi

bohot khoob a good one...hai kis ka ye ?


tab'azmaye shayeer sei mazraat kay sath

no aamaad

laters
Posted 26 Jan 2006
Doctor Sam says
apnay zoq ki daad to hum khud bhi dete rehtay hain...
Posted 27 Jan 2006
Ashii says


next plzzzzzz
Posted 28 Jan 2006
Doctor Sam says
spain ki fazaon se koi misraa phaink dain bhaai...
Posted 28 Jan 2006
new_beau says
SALL said:

kuchi puchiiiiii
kyun nahi alllow
anoushhhyyy




not sure par shayd aise hai

guzar rahe hein ajeeb marhalon se deeda o dil
Bohat Dinonn say Tabiyat meri Udaas nahin



Mana bhi kiya phir bhi Doing

Shair ghalat Poora kiya aap nay..balkeh ITTEFAAQAN achhi TABA'AAZNAYEE ho gayee aap say



hakona said:

sher tu mukamal nahi kaar sakta magar tabazmayee zaroor kar sakta hoon

ahhhhm ahhhm aarz keya hai

Bohot Dinoo Sei Tabeyaat Meri Udass Nahin
sabab! unn ka Maikay Jana ,tu nahi !



Allah aap ko achhi Biwi Ataa fermaye ..Aameen


QUEEN VICTORIA said:

hakona ki taba aazmaie main izafa......


Bohat Dinonn say Tabiyat meri Udaas nahin
wo maikay gai hai,so wajha aas paas nahin





koocha e yaran main khushiyan barasti hain aaj kal
so Bohat Dinonn say Tabiyat meri Udaas nahin




HAKONA ki taba aazmayee mainn Izaafa nahin aap nay unn ki Islah ferma di hay..aur achhi fermayee hay

Aap ki Zaati Taba Aazmayee bhi achhi hay



Doctor Sam said:

spain ki fazaon se koi misraa phaink dain bhaai...



Hum jisay THAAM letay hainn.PHAINKA nahin kertay phir
Posted 29 Jan 2006
new_beau says
Good Show SALL...

next misrah

Hum Dard Mohabbat ka Mita Saktay hainn Lekin

VERY AASAAN....
Posted 29 Jan 2006
QUEEN VICTORIA says
Hum Dard Mohabbat ka Mita Saktay hainn Lekin
yeh zakhm to phhoolon sa mahakta hai abhi

adab arz hai


asli asusual mujay nahin maloom
Posted 30 Jan 2006
Ashii says
woh ittefakiya taba'azmaee nahi thi naya bhai jiii
woh to hamare iss dil e natawan ki sadaa thi



Hum Dard Mohabbat ka Mita Saktay hainn Lekin
iss andheri raat mei rubber dhoond k laae ga kaun



nahi aata yar
jisse bhi aap asaan kehte ho woh mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata chalta
Posted 30 Jan 2006
new_beau says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

Hum Dard Mohabbat ka Mita Saktay hainn Lekin
yeh zakhm to phhoolon sa mahakta hai abhi

adab arz hai


asli asusual mujay nahin maloom



Aap ki Koshish Achhi Rahi QV



SALL said:

woh ittefakiya taba'azmaee nahi thi naya bhai jiii
woh to hamare iss dil e natawan ki sadaa thi



Hum Dard Mohabbat ka Mita Saktay hainn Lekin
iss andheri raat mei rubber dhoond k laae ga kaun



nahi aata yar
jisse bhi aap asaan kehte ho woh mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata chalta



Achha jee Ittefaaqiya nahin thi FilBadeeh thee ./..Maan letay hainn ...magar iss dafa tou aap nay ATT MACHA DITTI hay


Mainn 3 Ghantay Hansta raha hoon..RUBBER kahan say Laoon ..SubhanAllah


"Hum Dard ka Mohabbat ka Mita saktay hainn Lekin"
"Yeh Rog Puraana hay, Zara Dair Lagay Gi"

NEW MISRAH


Mainn issay Shohrat kahoon, Ya Apni Ruswayee Kahoon?
Posted 31 Jan 2006
Doctor Sam says
mujh se pehle us gali main mere afsanay gaye


kuch aisa e hey shayad...
Posted 01 Feb 2006
new_beau says
CORRECT,,.,

TABA'AAZMAAYEE members ???
Posted 01 Feb 2006
Ashii says
new_beau said:

Achha jee Ittefaaqiya nahin thi FilBadeeh thee ./..Maan letay hainn ...magar iss dafa tou aap nay ATT MACHA DITTI hay


Mainn 3 Ghantay Hansta raha hoon..RUBBER kahan say Laoon ..SubhanAllah


hae Allahh,,, itni bhi tareef na karein naya bhai jii
uffff,,, ab to me soch rahi hu me bhi shairi start kar du




Mainn issay Shohrat kahoon, Ya Apni Ruswayee Kahoon?
hmm,,, taba'azmaee
Posted 01 Feb 2006
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